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Suggestionletter應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作一Para1:描述對(duì)方情況/問(wèn)題

+寫(xiě)信目的1.Sorrytoknowthat……(大致描述問(wèn)題).I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning+名詞短語(yǔ)2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon……andI'lltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.3.I’mwritingtooffermysuggestionson……題干部分會(huì)給出Para2:提建議的句型1.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingmeasures.(總起)2.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbemuchbetter.3.被動(dòng)句/非謂語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)（重要信息提前）比如：Doingsthisawisechoice,which+功能4.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat+虛擬語(yǔ)氣5.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...6.You'dbetterdo/notdoYoumightaswelldosth7.Youmayconsiderdoingsth.8.虛擬+倒裝：WereIyou,Iwould......Para3:結(jié)尾套話（提出希望）——價(jià)值2分！1.Intheend,Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/practical/helpful.2.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifyouwouldconsidermysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.3.Idohopeyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.4.Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetocontactme/Don'thesitatetoletmeknowifyouhaveanyproblem.

假如你是Mary，你的好友陳潔最近因?yàn)榭荚囶l率過(guò)高，課業(yè)繁重，感到身體不適，嚴(yán)重影響了學(xué)習(xí)。因此，她發(fā)e-mail給你，尋求你的建議和幫助。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示予以回復(fù)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.健康合理的飲食；2.有規(guī)律且適度的運(yùn)動(dòng)；3.……注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChenJie, __________________________Yours,MarySuggestionletterThefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldbecomemuchbetter.林逸婧/黃思琪(獨(dú)立主格)Asyourfriend,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanbebackonyourtrackassoonaspossibleandstudyhappily.李好雨Doingexerciseregularlyisawisechoice,whichwill

surelymakeyoucheerfulandraiseyourlearningefficiency.朱思晴DearChenJie, 許真渝

Learningthatthefrequentexamsandlotsofhomeworkhavetroubledyoualot,I'mwritingtohelpyouworkouttheproblem. Therefollowsthesuggestions.Itisstronglyrecommendedthatyouhaveabalanceddietwhichallowsyoutogainabundantnutritionandkeepfit.Exercisingregularlyandadequatelymakesyourefreshed.Additionally,you'dbetterlistentosomesoftmusicandreadsomebooksyoulike,throughwhichyourstresswouldbedrivenaway. Iwillappreciateitifyoutakemysuggetionsintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,MaryDearChenJie, 黃思琪

Sorrytoknowthatyouhavetroubleinstudy.I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningstudyhabits.

Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Firstly,itwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucoulddevelopabalanceddiet.Additionally,you'dbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.Lastly,stayinguptostudydoesharmtoyourhealth.Havingadequateresttimeisawisechoice,whichcanregainyourenergy. Hopethesesuggestionswillworkforyou.Pleasefeelfreetoturntomewheneveryouhavetrouble.Yourssincerely,MaryDearChenJie, Ifeelsosorrytohearthatyouarefeelingbadthesedays.Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthyandkeepattentiveinclass.Thefollowingaremysuggetions. Healthyeatinghabitsareofgreatimportance.Soyou'dbetterhaveyourmealsontimeandkeepabalanceddiet.Then,takingmorningexerciseeverydayisanicechoice,whichhelpstobuildupyourbody.Youcandosomesportstorefreshyourselfifweatherpermits.Finally,don'tstayuptoolate;otherwiseyou'llsufferaloteverynight.

Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggetions.Hopeyou'llfeelwellsoon.Yourssincerely,LiHuaSuggestionletter應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作二（寧波九校聯(lián)考）注意審題！不同的題目，要求的段落結(jié)構(gòu)也不同一：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 1.健康合理的飲食； 2.有規(guī)律且適度的運(yùn)動(dòng)； 3.……二：內(nèi)容包括： 1.你對(duì)這個(gè)事件的看法。 2.你的建議

假如你是Jack,你的同學(xué)Ben給你發(fā)了一個(gè)電子郵件（e-mail）,請(qǐng)根據(jù)信息的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給他回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)這個(gè)事件的看法。2.你的建議注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。DearJack,I'mwritingtoyouforsomeadvice.

IplayedabadjokeonmybestfriendJohntheotherday.Ididn'trealizethatthejokehadgonealittletoofaruntilhestartedtoignoremeandrefusetotalktome.Itmademeveryupset.However,Idon'twanttoapologizebecauseIthinkitwasonlyajoke,butIdon'twanttoloseourfriendship,either.WhatshouldIdo?DearBen,Sorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.____Yours,JackFACTPROBLEM1)Ithinkit'syourfault.(委婉點(diǎn)it's+adj+ofsbtodosth）1.你對(duì)這個(gè)事件的看法。（句型提高）學(xué)霸版Franklyspeaking,

it'sinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers,eventhoughyoumeannoharm.其他不同觀點(diǎn)？Bothofyoushouldsharetheresponsibility.Neitherofyouaretoblame.進(jìn)擊版It'sinconsiderate/improperofyoutoplaybadjokesonothers.2)Youthinkitisonlyajoke,butitmightbeunacceptableforJohn.(定從/名從)1.你對(duì)這個(gè)事件的看法。（句型提高）WhatyouthinkisonlyajokemightbeunacceptableforJohn.許真渝Thejokewhichyouconsideracceptablemighthurtyourfriend.葉均涵

2.你的建議（句型提高）1)Ithinkyoushouldmakeanapologytoyourfriend.Itisimportanttorebuildyourfriendship.（定從）2)Ithinkyoushouldwritealettertohimandtellhimyourapologyandyoudon'twanttoloseyourbestfriend.（非謂）Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldwritealettertohim,tellinghim

yourapologyandyoudon'twanttoloseyourbestfriend.章子怡Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushouldmakeansincereapologytoyourfriend,whichisofimportancetorebuildyourfriendship.黃佳樂(lè)2.你的建議（句型提高）3)Youcanwriteanapologyonthepaper.Inthiswayyoucanavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))4)Youcanexplaintoyourfriend.Itcanletyourfriendknowwhatyouthink.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))1.Writinganapologyonthepaperisawisechoice,whichenablesyoutoavoidface-to-faceembarrassment.葉鈞涵Explainingtoyourfriendassoonaspossibleisaneffectivechoice,whichenablesyourfriendtoknowwhatyouexactlymean.張家豪2.Ifyoudon'twanttoapologizetohimfacetoface,writingaletterisawisechoice,whichisbeneficialtoavoidtheembarrassment.

余昕冕DearBen,

Sorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthismatter. Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtoplaythejokeproperly.Otherwise,itwilldoharmtoyourfriendshipratherthanimproveit.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ifyoudon'twanttoapologizeinperson,you'dbettershowhimyourapologybysendinghimsomegifts.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldhelphimenthusiasticlywhenheisinneed.

Iwillbedelightedifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Yours,Jack金歆悅DearBen,

Sorrytohearthatyou’rehavingtroublewithyourbestfriend.Iknowyou’refeelingtorn

betweenmakinganapologyandlosingthefriendship.Iguessyoujustwantedtoplayajokeanddidn’tmeantohurtJohn.Buthetookitseriouslyandfelthurt.Ithinkneitherofyouar