高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)之讀后續(xù)寫打碎了鄰居的花瓶勇于承認(rèn)了錯(cuò)誤課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)打碎了鄰居的花瓶，勇于承認(rèn)了錯(cuò)誤1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.I’dbeentellingmybestfriendMissiasillystoryandhadspunaroundinthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpiecesofsparklingred,pinkandclearglass.Missisaid."Oh,no,notthevase.''"Why?WhatdidIdo?"Myfacereddened."Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelativesbroughtwhentheycametoAmerica,Missirepliednervously."Ifyou’dbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,1would'vegladlysaidIdidit.Butyou'regoingtohavetotellmymomthatitwasyourfault,andshe'sgoingtobereallymad.”1wasterrified.I’ddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom（傳家寶）.WhydidIhavetospinaroundlikethat?Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.1keptsayingthatmaybeitcouldbefixed,butMissisaidgentlyitdidn'tlookpossible.Iinsistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,likeacolorful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbrokeevenmoreaswetriedtosweepitupcarefully.4續(xù)寫原文Missisaidhermomwouldbehomebysix.Mystomachwasinknots.Wouldhermomyellatmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeIcouldn'tstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?Icouldn'tstopplayingthe”fifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinningfastandthesoundofglasscrashing.TheonlythingIcouldthinkoftosaywas“I'msorry.”Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.Hermomwashome.Rightfromthestart,wecouldseeshewasinagoodmood.Hello!It’shottoday.IwanttotreatyougirlstothatfrozenyogurtIknowyoulike,Let’sgo!”hermomsaid.Shepointedattheopendoor.5段首句Para1：“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething”Isaid.Para2：Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析話題：個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)主要內(nèi)容：Abby無(wú)意間打碎了Missi家的傳家寶---一只玻璃花瓶，為此她非常忐忑不安。她誠(chéng)實(shí)地向Missi的媽媽道歉，她沒有責(zé)怪Abby,寬慰她不要自責(zé)。這件事對(duì)Abby影響深遠(yuǎn)，使她成年后對(duì)人更加寬容和包容。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething”Isaid.由第一段首句內(nèi)容““在那之前，我需要告訴你一些事情，”我說?！笨芍?，第一段應(yīng)該描寫我真誠(chéng)地道歉，勇于承認(rèn)了自己的錯(cuò)誤。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“聽到我的道歉，Missi的母親爆發(fā)出一聲歡呼?！笨芍?，第二段Missi的母親歡呼的原因以及她接受了我的道歉。11續(xù)寫素材12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,”Isaid.“Wecantalkattheyogurtplace,"hermomsmiled.“No.Ineedtotellyounow.It'simportant,”Iinsisted.Icouldfeelmyvoiceshakingandtriednottocry.“Whatisit,dear?"shegentlyasked,closingthedoorandwalkingclosertome.Ourhandsalmosttouched.Withhereyesstudyingme,myheartbeatfaster.“I'msorry,”Iblurtedout.“I...IwastalkingandlaughingwithMissiwhenIspunaroundandaccidentallybrokethevase.”Ifurtherexplainedthatwesavedthepiecesbuttriedinvaintofixit.Itstilllookedlikesmallpiecesofglass.14范文呈現(xiàn)15范文譯文16范文譯文聽到我的道歉，Missi的母親爆發(fā)出一聲歡呼。她擁抱mc，親吻我的雙頰?！班蓿x謝！我一直討厭那個(gè)丑陋的花瓶?，F(xiàn)在它不見了！你幫了我一個(gè)大忙！”她母親高興地叫道。雖然道歉讓我松了一口氣，但我還是很震驚，因?yàn)檫@完全不是我所期望的反應(yīng)。直到我成年后，我才意識(shí)到她母親慷慨地歡迎我的道歉是一個(gè)多么深刻的禮物。現(xiàn)在，當(dāng)我收到一個(gè)真