高一英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(人物描寫(xiě)mybestfriend)修改版 全省一等獎(jiǎng)

BasicWriting基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作TeachingaimsLearnsomerulesaboutbasicwriting.Learnhowtointroduceagoodfriendinwriting.Leadin(5min)Abriefintroductionaboutbasicwriting.命題規(guī)律和要求：形式采用中文提綱/表格?？紤?yīng)用和說(shuō)明文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完全給出：只能使用五個(gè)句子：沒(méi)有設(shè)開(kāi)放性要點(diǎn)，考生不可隨意發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn)或觀點(diǎn)。盡量用到并列句，復(fù)合句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)等來(lái)幫助表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確信息內(nèi)容完整篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫三條評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：Discussion(6min)Whatshouldwedobeforewriting?２）確定標(biāo)題（如果題中要求寫(xiě)標(biāo)題就確定標(biāo)題，若題中沒(méi)做要求則可以不寫(xiě)）３）寫(xiě)出要點(diǎn)（如：文中涉及到的重點(diǎn)詞匯，短語(yǔ)及句型．）１）審題：仔細(xì)審讀寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容信息４）組合成句（組合成句的過(guò)程實(shí)際上是一個(gè)謀篇布局，把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)按恰當(dāng)合理的順序排列，使文章條理，通順的過(guò)程.)５）寫(xiě)草稿并對(duì)其修改潤(rùn)色．６）謄寫(xiě)７）復(fù)查（復(fù)查的項(xiàng)目包括：格式是否正確，內(nèi)容是否完整，表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，行文是否連貫等）Let’stry!(20min)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容：

友誼是一個(gè)人最寶貴的財(cái)富之一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記。談?wù)勀阕詈玫呐笥?。要點(diǎn)包括：1.她叫王敏，今年16歲；2.她很漂亮，有一頭長(zhǎng)頭發(fā)和一雙大而明亮的眼睛；3.她喜歡戶外活動(dòng)，比如爬山、騎自行車等；4.她人很好，我們一直相處得很好；5.她在學(xué)習(xí)上幫了我很多，我很感激她。寫(xiě)作要求：只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容.Showtime(10min)一.審題:仔細(xì)審讀寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容信息1.Title(標(biāo)題）2.Tenseandvoice(時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)）3.Person(人稱）4.Importantpoints(要點(diǎn)要齊全）一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)王敏第三人稱she二.確定標(biāo)題:（如果題中要求寫(xiě)標(biāo)題就確定標(biāo)題，若題中沒(méi)做要求則可以不寫(xiě)）三.寫(xiě)出要點(diǎn)（如：文中涉及到的重點(diǎn)詞匯，短語(yǔ)及句型．）Keywords:1.最好的朋友:bestfriend2.漂亮:beautiful明亮的眼睛:brighteyes3.戶外活動(dòng):outdooractivities爬山:climbing騎自行車:cycling/ridingbikes4.相處得很好:getalongwellwith

5.感激:grateful對(duì)某人感激:begratefultosb.四.組合成句（組合成句的過(guò)程實(shí)際上是一個(gè)謀篇布局，把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)按恰當(dāng)合理的順序排列，使文章條理，通順的過(guò)程。)六.謄寫(xiě)

卷面整潔,字體工整,文章的格式正確,注意大小寫(xiě)。給人一種整體良好的印象。五.寫(xiě)草稿并對(duì)其修改潤(rùn)色。Translatethefivesentences:1.SheisWangMin,andsheis16yearsoldthisyear.2.Sheisabeautifulgirl,andshehaslonghairandbigbrighteyes.3.Shelikesoutdoorsports/activities,suchasclimbingandridingabike.4.Sheiskindandwegetalongwellwitheachother.5.ShehelpsmealotwithmystudyandIamverygratefultoher.1.SheisWangMin,andsheis16yearsoldthisyear.2.Sheisabeautifulgirl,andshehaslonghairandbigbrighteyes.MybestfriendisWangMin,whois16yearsoldthisyear.Sheisabeautifulgirlwithlonghairandbigbrighteyes.3.Shelikesoutdoorsports/activities,suchasclimbingandridingabike.4.

Sheiskindandwegetalongwellwitheachother.Shelikesoutdooractivities

verymuch,suchasclimbingandcycling.Sheissokindthatwegetalongwellwitheachother.5.ShehelpsmealotwithmystudyandIamverygratefultoher.She

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mealotwithmystudy,soIamverygratefultoher.HomeworkWriteacompletecompositionof“Mybestfriend”.MybestfriendisWangMin,andsheis16yearsoldthisyear.Sheisabeautifulgirlwithlonghairandbigbrighteyes.Shelikesoutdooractivitiesverymuch,suchasclimbingandcycling.Sheissokindthatwegetalongwellwitheachother.Shehelpsmealotwithmystudy,soIamverygratefulto