2024屆高考英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)素材-比賽活動(dòng)類

專攻解題方法與技巧英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-比賽活動(dòng)類一、活動(dòng)/比賽前l(fā).努力準(zhǔn)備1.Thesettingsunwitnessinghisunremittingefforts(不懈的努力），hekeptsharpeninghisskillregardlessofhisachingmuscle.2.Notuntilthedarknessswallowedeverythingonthehorizon(黑夜吞噬地平線上的一切）didhestoptraininganddraggedachinglegshome.（倒裝：notuntil...didhe..直到...才）3.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhimpracticingfreestylehard.4.Hedraggedhisachinglegsdowntheroadtohome,armstremblingwithfatigue.(獨(dú)立主格：疲憊的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)）2.遇到困難/挫折（曲折性原則）1.Hardashetrained,hestillmadelittleprogress,whichputhimonthevergeofcollapse.2.Thefactthathemadelittleprogressthrewhimintolowspirits.3.受到鼓舞（人物B互動(dòng)）1.Wheneverhewasexhausted/fulloffatigue,Eddie’swordsechoed/flashedinto/poppedintohismind,andsuppliedenergytohim/whichinstillpowerintohim.2.Hewasabouttoquit/giveupwhenmyteachercastanencouragingglanceathim.（beabouttodo...when...正要做某事的時(shí)候，突然...)3.Agustofexcitementsurgedthroughhimashemadeananotherattempt.二、比賽中（過(guò)程描寫(xiě)）1.Thencamethebigday.（倒裝）2.Withthesoundofthestartinggunpiercing（穿透/刺破）throughtheair,theracebeganasexpected.3.Icouldfeelthatalltheeyeswerefixedonus.Astrongsenseofnervousnesssurgedthroughme.我能感覺(jué)到所有的眼睛都盯著我們。一種強(qiáng)烈的緊張感涌上我的全身。4.Thenthenextfewminuteswitnessedfiercecompetitionbetweenothercompetitors.5.Sodynamicwashethatheswamswifterthanever.Withhisarmwaving,hecutthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.（so+adj+謂+主+that...)他活力四射，游得比以前更快了。他揮動(dòng)著手臂，像飛魚(yú)一樣平穩(wěn)地劃水。6.Sandrofoundhimselfflexiblelikeadolphininthewater,propelling（推動(dòng)）himselfforwardswiftly.（比喻）7.Swiftlyadjustinghisbreath,heswamforwardlikeanarrowoffthebowstring.(像離弦的箭）8.150meterscovered，hewasleftbehindbytwocompetitors.Inthelast50meters，heswamtothefinishlinewithallhisstrength,withhisarmspushingforwardfastandhislegshittingthewaterhard.(游泳的過(guò)程）9.Myheartdropped,becauseIwasafraidallthetrainingthatIhaddonewasinvain.Yettherewassomethinginsidemepushingmetowinthecompetition.Myheartbeatingwildly,Itriedmybestandgotclosertotheotherrunners.三、比賽后（名次+互動(dòng)+感悟）1.WhentheresultwasannouncedthatSandrowonfirstplace,otherplayersrushedtohimandcongratulatedhim,theaudiencesinthestadiumburstingintothunderousapplauseandcheers.(獲獎(jiǎng)+祝賀）2.whentheracefinished,neverinhiswildestdream（做夢(mèng)也沒(méi)有想到）hadheexpectedthathewonthefirstprize（倒裝）./hecamefirst/tookthefirstplace/clinched(贏得）thechampionintherace.（獲得名次）3.Withbeadsofsweatrunningdownmyfaceandmyheartpoundinginmychest,Iknewthatthegrueling（艱辛的）hoursofpractice/painstakingeffortshadpaidoffasIclaimedthetopspotonthepodium（領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)）.汗珠順著我的臉流下來(lái)，我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳，我知道艱苦的練習(xí)時(shí)間得到了回報(bào)，因?yàn)槲以陬I(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)上占據(jù)了頭把交椅。4.Uponfinishingthetalk/competition,Itrotted（小跑）towardsMareyaandgaveherabearhug.Meanwhile,thunderous/astormofapplauserangthroughtheclassroom.5.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Thecheersfromthecrowdechoed/rangthroughthestadium,andIcouldn'thelpbutfeelarushofexcitementasIbasked/wasimmersedinthegloryofourvictory.（can'thelpbutdo不得不）人群的歡呼聲回蕩在體育場(chǎng)內(nèi)，當(dāng)我沉浸在勝利的榮耀中時(shí)，我不禁感到一陣興奮。6.Despitethephysicalandmentalexhaustion,Icouldn'twipethesmileoffmyfaceasIreflectedontheincrediblememoriesandlessonslearnedfromthecompetition.7.Itishishardworkandpersistencethatwonhimrecognitionandmorefriends.（結(jié)尾強(qiáng)調(diào)句：回扣主題）8.Thisexperienceservedasareminderthatthebestwaytogainrecognition/fitintoanewenvironmentistodisplay