第五次寫作訓練課件-湖北省蘄春縣第三高級中學高二寫作專項提升

申請信一般現(xiàn)在時I,you三段式applyforpositionBeijingeraprivilegeanddutyvoluntaryservicepromotePara.2:你的優(yōu)勢（語言的掌握和使用+與人溝通的能力+冬奧會的知識+參加過交換生項目）有資格的_________________熟練運用英語_______________流利地說英語________________以便更好地與外國客人交流____________________有信心做某事________________引導和幫助___________冬季運動的廣博的知識參與一個國際交換生項目__________________喜歡傳播中國文化_銜接詞：首先_________而且_________另外__________bequalifiedforspeakEnglishfluentlybeconfidentindoingsth.guidanceandhelprich/wideknowledgeofwintersportsbeinvolvedinaninternationalexchangestudentprogramenjoyspreadingChineseculturefirstofallBesides/What’smoreInadditionPara.3:感激+請對方考慮+期待回復我將不勝感激如果你能......______________________Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...把我的請求納入考慮之中_____________________takemyrequestintoconsiderationDearSir/Madame,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijingWinterOlympicGamesareneeded.I’mwritingtoapplyforthisposition.AsaBeijinger,IthinkitisaprivilegeanddutyformetoofferthebestvoluntaryservicetoourforeignguestsandmeanwhilepromoteChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Pleasetakemyrequestintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua同學們，你曾經(jīng)誤會過別人嗎？或者你被別人誤會過嗎？Who：人物關(guān)系圖_________when:_________what:_________where:_________why:____how:____Predicttheendingofthestory：_________________________________________________________Whatwillthewriterlearnfromtheexperience?________________________________________________I，mywife,theotherjoggerinthemorningmanyyearsagoImisunderstoodtheotherjoggerasamuggerintheparkHebumpedintomeandIthoughtmymoneywasmissing.Andhegavemethemoney.Iapologizedtohimandheforgaveme.Itistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.Para.1:1.

HowdidIfeel?根據(jù)段首句確定第一句:_____________________________________

2.Whatwasinmymind?

3.Whatweretheregretandreflectionaboutmyrudeness

?(兩個反問句)我怎么能對他這么粗魯在不知道真相的情況下？HowcouldIbesorude...?我為什么不耐心地聽他解釋呢？Whynot...explanationpatiently?

4.WhatcouldIdothen?

根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.定第一段結(jié)尾(決定找機會向他道歉+第二天早上去公園找他，失敗

____________________________________________extremelyguilty，misunderstoodinnocentandfrightened，appeareddecidedtofindachance,apologizedtohim，failedPara.2:4.Whatwastheresultafterwaitingforseveraldays?根據(jù)段首句確定第一句:Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup/appear.____5.WhendidIseethejoggeragain?aweeklater6.WhatdidIdoandsaytohim?(還錢+道歉)

returnedsth.tosb/gavesth.tosb.

saidsorrytosb.againandagain7.Didheforgiveme?forgavesb.8.Whatdidhesaytome?

Itdoesn'tmatter./Nevermind.Don’tmakethesamemistakenexttime.9.HowdoIfeelaftermanyyearsaboutthething?

stillfeelmycheeksburningwithshame.10.WhatdidIlearnfromthisexperience?(不要太早評判一個人在知道真相前)Para.1:1.

HowdidIfeel?根據(jù)段首句確定第一句:_____________________________________

2.Whatwasinmymind?

3.Whatweretheregretandreflectionaboutmyrudeness

?(兩個反問句)我怎么能對他這么粗魯在不知道真相的情況下？HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?我為什么不耐心地聽他解釋呢？Whynotlistentohisexplanationpatiently?

4.WhatcouldIdothen?

根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.定第一段結(jié)尾(決定向他道歉+第二天早上去公園找他，失敗

____________________________________________Fortherestoftheday,IfeltextremelyguiltybecauseImisunderstoodhim.Hisinnocentandfrightenedfaceappearedinmymindagain.Paragraph1:Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.

Fortherestoftheday,Ifeltextremelyguilty,withtheinnocent

jogger

andhis"helplessness"onmymind."HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?Whywasitthatthejoggergavemethe

money?WhatifIwaitedforhimtoexplain?"IstillrememberhisfrightenedfacewhenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster.Idecidedtofindachancetoapologizetohim.Thenext

morning,Igotupandwenttothe

park

asusual,butnotforjogging.IjusthungaroundwhereImetthatjogger,butinvain.Paragraph2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.

Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup.ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallysawhimagain.I,the"mugger",gavethe$10bill

backtohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,hefo