新高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)課時(shí)練第3部分書面表達(dá)與短文改錯(cuò)專題5第1 宏觀把握整體感知 (含解析)

第1講宏觀把握整體感知一般來說，短文改錯(cuò)的材料篇幅較短，100詞左右，10～12個(gè)句子；難度不大，語篇中基本上無生僻的詞匯和怪、偏、難的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。短文改錯(cuò)的話題較常見，通常是敘述一件事情或說明一個(gè)事物。從體裁上看，歷年高考試題中的短文改錯(cuò)以記敘文為主，兼顧說明文、議論文和應(yīng)用文。短文改錯(cuò)通常從詞法、句法和行文邏輯三個(gè)角度設(shè)題，錯(cuò)誤類型有多詞、缺詞和錯(cuò)詞三種。短文改錯(cuò)10處錯(cuò)誤中，設(shè)錯(cuò)方式是有規(guī)律的，一般情況下，多詞、缺詞各1個(gè)，錯(cuò)詞8個(gè)，做完題后可按此規(guī)律進(jìn)行查驗(yàn)。年份卷別體裁主題考點(diǎn)主題語境主題語境內(nèi)容名詞動(dòng)詞、數(shù)詞連詞形容詞副詞代詞冠詞介詞2022全國乙卷議論文人與自我騎行與健康14210101全國甲卷記敘文人與自我家庭生活041122002021全國乙卷記敘文人與自我家庭生活14111101全國甲卷說明文人與自我調(diào)查問卷結(jié)果131022012020全國Ⅰ卷記敘文人與自我家庭生活13210111全國Ⅱ卷應(yīng)用文人與自我樂于學(xué)習(xí)11311102通過對(duì)近幾年的高考英語試題中短文改錯(cuò)的研究可以看出，命題者主要在行文邏輯、一致關(guān)系、連接手段、平行結(jié)構(gòu)、多詞少詞、母語干擾、冠詞使用、名詞數(shù)格、詞語搭配以及詞形辨析等方面進(jìn)行設(shè)計(jì)和考查。從出題頻率來看，考查最多的是動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤，其次是連詞的誤用、形容詞與副詞的轉(zhuǎn)換以及名詞、代詞的誤用等。因此在復(fù)習(xí)備考中，考生應(yīng)該有所側(cè)重。解題步驟口訣致勝動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)；冠詞連詞常光顧；非謂語，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟；還要注意形和副；代詞格，常留心；習(xí)慣用法要記住；句子成分多分析；邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注。典例示范(2022·全國乙)Weallknowthatcyclingisaeq\f(greatly,great)①exercise.Adoctortellsmepeoplewhoeq\f(lives,live)②thelongestaredancersandcyclists.Maybeitisbecauseeq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(of))③thecombinationoffreshair，smoothmovementandexercise.eq\f(Whether,If/When)④yourideabicycle，youdon’tusepetrol.Soeq\f(they,you)⑤arenotproducingcarbondioxideandnoteq\f(cause,causing)⑥airpollution.Justseehowcarshavebeen⑦takenoverourcities.Theyoftenrunathighspeeds，eq\f(what,which)⑧mayputourlivesindanger.Andthereeq\f(were,are)⑨t(yī)rafficjams，too.Ourcitieswillbebetterplacesifwereplacecarswitheq\f(bicycle,bicycles)⑩.動(dòng)詞形：②考查主謂一致。先行詞people是集合名詞，謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)。故將lives改為live。⑦考查語態(tài)。主語cars與takeover之間是主謂關(guān)系，應(yīng)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。故去掉have后的been。⑨考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文時(shí)態(tài)可知，本句應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故將were改為are。名詞數(shù)：⑩bicycle為可數(shù)名詞，由句中的cars和句意可知，此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將bicycle改為bicycles。冠詞連詞常光顧：④考查狀語從句連接詞。句意：當(dāng)你騎自行車的時(shí)候你是不用汽油的。由句意可知，該句闡述的是一個(gè)事實(shí)，需用if或when引導(dǎo)；位于句首，注意首字母大寫。故將Whether改為If或When。非謂語，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟：⑥考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。本句時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，連詞and連接兩個(gè)并列的現(xiàn)在分詞，構(gòu)成進(jìn)行時(shí)。故將cause改為causing。還要注意形和副：①考查形容詞。需用形容詞作定語修飾名詞exercise。故將greatly改為great。句子成分多分析：⑧考查定語從句關(guān)系詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，逗號(hào)后是非限制性定語從句，先行詞為前面的一句話，在從句中作主語，應(yīng)用which引導(dǎo)。故將what改為which。③because表示“因?yàn)椤?，后面接從句，短語becauseof表示“因?yàn)椤?，后面接名詞、代詞、動(dòng)名詞等作賓語，thecombinationoffreshair，smoothmovementandexercise是名詞短語。故在because后加of。邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注：⑤根據(jù)前一句中的人稱you可知，這里假設(shè)“你”騎自行車，前后人稱應(yīng)保持一致。故將they改為you。規(guī)律總結(jié)A(2022·江西上饒一模)OnabrightNovemberday，agracefulEnglishladywalkintoacozybookshopintheheartofLondon’sChinatown.ShepickedupaorderlypileofNewYearcardsandcalendarsdecoratingwithbeautifulChinesepapercuttingpatternsandChineseinkpaintings.Thenshewarmgreetedtheshopassistant.Theladywas91-year-oldPamelaYoudewhosehusbandwasthelateSirEdwardYoude，whichservedasthegovernorofHongKongbetween1982andin1986.Forseveraldecade，YoudehasbeenaloyalcustomerofGuanghwaBookshop.Everywinter，apartfrombuyNewYearcardsfromGuanghwaforherfriendsandfamily，healsobuysChinesecalendarsforeachofherfourgrandchildren.SheexpectshelpthemlearnMandarinwell.答案OnabrightNovemberday，agracefulEnglishladyeq\f(walk,walked)intoacozybookshopintheheartofLondon’sChinatown.Shepickedupeq\f(a,an)orderlypileofNewYearcardsandcalendarseq\f(decorating,decorated)withbeautifulChinesepapercuttingpatternsandChineseinkpaintings.Thensheeq\f(warm,warmly)greetedtheshopassistant.Theladywas91-year-oldPamelaYoudewhosehusbandwasthelateSirEdwardYoude，eq\f(which,who)servedasthegovernorofHongKongbetween1982andin1986.Forseveraleq\f(decade,decades)，YoudehasbeenaloyalcustomerofGuanghwaBookshop.Everywinter，apartfromeq\f(buy,buying)NewYearcardsfromGuanghwaforherfriendsandfamily，eq\f(he,she)alsobuysChinesecalendarsforeachofherfourgrandchildren.Sheexpectseq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(to))helpthemlearnMandarinwell.B(2022·河南新鄉(xiāng)二模)I’mverygladthatIspentthemeaningfulwinterholidaypleasant.Ifinishedmyhomeworkfirst.Furthermore，Ireadsomebooksanddevelopnewintereststoenrichmylives.Inanaddition，ItravelledtoThailandtolearnmoreabouttheworld.Itexpandedmyknowledgesandenrichedmyexperiences.What’smost，Iassistedmyparentsthehousework.Myparentshavecontributedsomuchtoyou，soIshoulddothatIcantohelpthem.Whatameaningfulholidayitwas!答案I’mverygladthatIspenteq\f(the,a)meaningfulwinterholidayeq\f(pleasant,pleasantly).Ifinishedmyhomeworkfirst.Furthermore，Ireadsomebooksandeq\f(develop,developed)newintereststoenrichmyeq\f(lives,life).Inanaddition，ItravelledtoThailandtolearnmoreabouttheworld.Itexpandedmyeq\f(knowledges,knowledge)andenrichedmyexperiences.What’seq\f(most,more)，Iassistedmyparentseq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(with/in))thehousework.Myparentshavecontributedsomuchtoeq\f(you,me)，soIshoulddoeq\f(that,what/whatever)Icantohelpthem.Whatameaningfulholidayitwas!強(qiáng)化練(三十四)短文改錯(cuò)(1)A(2022·河南名校聯(lián)盟二模)AnEnglishdramacompetitionwouldbeheldintheschoolarthallnextFriday.Anycreativeideaswhichisaboutschoollifeiswarmwelcomed.Youcanalsochoosetomakechangesinfamousdramastoent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