2024屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)：記敘文寫作評(píng)析社團(tuán)招新課件

記敘文寫作評(píng)析：社團(tuán)招新

高考復(fù)習(xí)高考復(fù)習(xí)舉例說(shuō)明：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)園地”寫一篇短文，記述你參加學(xué)校“社團(tuán)招新”活動(dòng)的整個(gè)過(guò)程。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于60。2.短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。高考復(fù)習(xí)要點(diǎn)細(xì)節(jié)開頭圖1

圖2圖3圖4結(jié)尾做什么？時(shí)間？地點(diǎn)？招新過(guò)程申請(qǐng)照相俱樂(lè)部宣傳填表為什么？心情？中心句你的希望？你的感受？看到通知高考復(fù)習(xí)高考復(fù)習(xí)看到：read,see,sth.draw/attractone’sattention,(sth.)catchone’seye,(sth.)comeintomysight/view通知：notice√noteXannouncementX在哪兒看到的？bulletinboard,billboard高考復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容：club,recruit/takein/lookfornewmembers,ontheplayground/campusatnoononFriday句子:TheStudentUnionputupaposterinadvancetoinformusofthedetailsofthisactivity...…sayingtheeventwouldbeheldontheplaygroundduringlunchbreakonFriday.高考復(fù)習(xí)過(guò)渡句：1.OnFridaynoon,theeventbeganasplanned.2.Thenthebigdaycame.高考復(fù)習(xí)對(duì)于場(chǎng)景的描述：various,avarietyof,well-designedpostersonbehalfof,sth.appealtosb.,appealingcrowded,inhighspirits,withgreatenthusiasmsomanyclubstochoosefrom對(duì)于我的描述：rushtotheplayground,walkaround,makeadecision高考復(fù)習(xí)我的做法：withouthesitation,Isignup…,fillintheform,walkstraightto…,bedeterminedtojoin,makeupmymind句子：

Ifilledtheapplicationformwithdelightandanticipation.高考復(fù)習(xí)過(guò)渡：Duringthewholeafternoon,Iwasnervousandexpectant.高考復(fù)習(xí)1.Attheendoftheactivity,we,thenewmembers,tookapicturetogetherinmemoryofthefoundationdayandournewly-builtfriendship.2.Torecordthemeaningfulmoment,Wetookapicturetogether,witheveryonewearingasmile.3.Allmemberstookaphototogetherandsmilespreadacrossourfaces.高考復(fù)習(xí)結(jié)束語(yǔ)：1.Iwouldsparenoefforttomakeourclubabestoneeveramongallclubsinmyschool.2.Iwillneverregretmydecision.Thankstothisrightchoice,Imeetmanyinterestingpeople.I’mproudofbeingamemberofthisteam.3.Inmyeyes,notonlycanclubsmakeourschoollifemorecolorful,butalsoitcanhelpustolearnsomethingthatcannotbelearntinclass.Putyourheartintoit,andyouwillbenefitalot.高考復(fù)習(xí)Onepossibleversion:Thenewtermbeganandtheschoolclubswerelookingfornewmembers.(已給)Lastweek,wewereattractedbyaposter,sayingalltheclubswouldgatheronthesportsfieldduringthelunchbreakonFridayandwecouldjointheclubwelike.Everyonewasexcitedaboutit.高考復(fù)習(xí)Onepossibleversion:

AfterlunchonFriday,wecrowdedontothesportsfield.Iwasamazedatthenumberandvarietyoftheclubs:theCartoonClub,theGuitarClub,theBasketballClubandsoon.Itwasnoteasytomakeachoice.ButIdecidedtojointheBasketballClub,becauseIlovesports.Isignedupandsodidsomeotherstudentswhosharedmyinterest.

高考復(fù)習(xí)Onepossibleversion:Intheend,wetookapicturetogether,smilingasifwehadbeenfriendsforalongtime.Ibelievemyschoollifewillbemoreinterestingbecauseofbasketballandnewfriends.高考復(fù)習(xí)學(xué)生習(xí)作：Thenewtermbeganandtheschoolclubswerelookingfornewmembers.ThisactivitywasheldonthecampusonFridaynoon.Iwasextremelyexcitedandlookedforwardtojoininginawonderfulclub.

Whenthedaycame,IwasamazedbywhatIsaw.TherewerenearlyahundredclubsincludingGuitarClub,CartoonClub,andthemostinterestingone—BasketballClub.Theyardwasfilledwithstudentsbusychoosingtheirfavoriteone.高考復(fù)習(xí)學(xué)生習(xí)作：SinceIhadgreatinterestinbasketball,Idecidedtosignmyselfupforthebasketballclub.Theleaderwasextremelyenthusiastic.HardlyhadIwalkedstraighttotheclubwhenhegavemeahugehugandintroducedtheclubtomeimmediately.Ifoundmyselffittinginwiththemandthereforejoinedit.高考復(fù)習(xí)Intheend,theleaderofthebasketballclubgatheredallthefreshmentogetherandhadawelcomeparty.Everyonewasfriendlyandeasytogetaccessto.W