-2024屆高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項2023年8月 浙江Z20聯(lián)考 高三 讀后續(xù)寫 守護天使 講義

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成--篇完整的短文。

AFour-leggedGuardianAngelSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjustcleanedupthepool

inpreparationfor

sellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincialgovernment,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.

Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,andarealestateagentwasdueto

showup

laterthatday.

Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesand

coverletters.

OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,

Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.Itseemedasif

Brigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.

Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.

Therewasnowaythat

shecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,I

couldn’thelpheavingasigh

andwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyand

runningbackandforth

totheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwas

nowheretobeseen.

Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.

注意：1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcould

bereleasedfromhospital.對于Brigitte的定位：1.我的家人2.完美伴侶守護天使overshadowing：intelligenteyes--Thefirstparagraphdescribeshowadogsavesmychild,reflectingtheword'intelligent';2.Thedogsavedmychild,andIamgrateful-unwillingtoabandon-tostay;3.

Itemporarilysoldmyhouse,butthedog'sprotectionandcompanionshiprestoredmyconfidenceinlife;4.Themeltingofsnowhassymbolicmeaning,whichcanbeextendedtovariousexperiencesinmylife.Withthiseventandthechangeinmymindset,itwillalsobemeltinourheart故事梗概：Ihavelostmyjobandplantosellmyhouse,andthecuteGreatDaneisalsopreparingtoabandonherbecauseshecan'taffordit.Waitingfortheagenttobringthebuyertoseethehousethatday.Despitebeingsad,thereisstillaplacewherethingsarebeingdone.Inamoment,IheardGreatDanebarkingandrunningbackandforthinfrontofthemovingglassdoor,staringstraightatthepooloutside.IranoverquicklyandfoundthatmysonForrestwasmissing.Irushedoutinahurry.創(chuàng)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)創(chuàng)設(shè)續(xù)寫根據(jù)六要素和自己的想象，借助文本資源，兩段故事的情節(jié)，創(chuàng)設(shè)畫面要有動作、情緒、心理、環(huán)境等描寫。Paragraph1:[開端]布麗告特跳進了游泳池。[故事發(fā)展1布麗專特跳勇敢地向“我”兒子游去->“我”也立刻跳進水里一“我”撥打了911，把兒子送到了醫(yī)院治療。Paragraph2:[高潮]兒子沒事出院了一布麗特高興地在家門外等待。[結(jié)局1布麗告特-一直陪伴著兒子一決心要讓布麗吉特永遠和“我”們在--起。[感悟1人與動物的和談相處。佳句翻譯練習(xí)：我感覺到了什么，低頭一看，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)一只美麗的大丹犬坐在那里，用一雙聰明的大眼睛抬頭看著我。(onlytodo...出乎意料的結(jié)果)_________________________________________________________她不可能自己按門鈴。(Therewasnowaythat...相當于

Itwasimpossiblethat...)__________________________________________________________參考范文一，ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Breathlessandastonished,IwatchedBrigittemusteringhercouragetoswimtowardsmyson,whowasstrugglingdesperatelyintheicywater.Almostmeanwhile,Isprangintoaction.Witheverypowerfulstroke，IgotclosetowhereForrestwasfloating.Fortunately,hewasabouttosinkwhenIgrabbedhimbythearmanddraggedhimtotheshallowendofthepool,withBrigittepaddlingalongside,concernobviousinherbigandintelligenteyes.ThemomentIgotmyboyout,ourbeloveddogbouncedaroundhim,constantlylickinghispalefaceasiftowarmhim.Voicetrembling,Icalled911andsoonwewererushedtothenearesthospital.Everysecondcounted！Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Atthis,Iheavedasighofrelief.Onarrivinghome,ourdogBrigitteleapedhighuptogiveuswarmandwetkisses,wagginghertailcheerfully.Lookingdirectlyintohereyeswithgratitudeandabitofguilt,Iscoopedherupandheldherclosetomychest,unwillingtolethergoforasingleminute.ItwasthenthatIsuddenlybecameawarethatlifesometimescanbecruelandmiserable,buttherewasalwayssomeoneorsomethingguidingyou,protectingyou,andaccompanyingyouwithunconditionalloveandloyalty.Ourdogwasjustourguardianangel,shatteringmydespairaboutlosingourhomeandguidingusoutoftrouble.HowcouldIleaveher？參考范文二ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Analarmscreaminginmymind,IfollowedBrigittetothepooltoseeForreststrugglinginthewater.Onseeingit,mymindturnedblankandmyfeetwererootedtotheground,unabletomoveaninch.WhenIcametomyself,IfoundBrigittebiteForrest’scollartightlyandswimquicklytowardme.Coldasitwas,itneverloosenedbutcontinuedswimming.Themomentitreachedtheground,IranforwardandhuggedForresttightly,whonowcriedbitterlyfromtheshock.ShewaswetfromheadtotoeandI,withouthesitation,senthertothehospital,followedbyBrigitte.

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.HowgratefulIwaswhenIheardthat.Ifanythinghappenedtoher,Imustbeinhellnow.WhenBrigitteandI

sawmydaughter,itstoodonitshinderleginstantly,lickedher

enthusiasticallyandwaileditstailorwildly,whileForrestgiggledloudlyandkisseditback.Ihuggedit,feelingguilty.HowcouldIabandonsuchaloyalandkindfamilymember.!Shewastheguardianangelofmyfamily.Thatday,ItookBrigittebackhomeandmademymindthatnomatterhowpoorwewere,wewouldsticktogetherandneverpart.Thedifficultdarktimewouldpasseventuallyandthebondamongfamilymemberspersistedforever.

參考范文三ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Thiswasutterlyunusual,asBrigittehadalwaysshiedawayfromwater.Theninmyastonishment,itswamtothecenterofthepoolandbeganbitingsomethinghard.Itdidn’ttakemelongtorealizeForrestwasfloating,withherfacedown.Inastateofsheerpanic,I