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母親節(jié)的驚喜目錄CONTENTS1讀原文

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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫句式

招招升級45寫句式

招招升級

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范文賞析1讀原文

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AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

Thetwins

werefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.Howpleasedandproud

motherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepair

wentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.They

decidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhilethey

madetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeff

turnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeff2021年新I卷+新II卷真題原文startedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jenna

threwtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jenna

panicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shand

touchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

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（adj./v./短語）（主要）角色1wantedtocookbreakfastasasurpriseforMother’sDay角色2fatherhelper角色3

mother背景事件

ThetwinswantedwantedtocookbreakfastasasurpriseforMother’sDay.微情節(jié)

動作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

madetheFrenchtoastthebreadturnedblack

touchedthehotburner

panickedmadehimputhishandincoldwater.

acryofpain.thepanhadturnedblackThetwins/pair:JennaandJeff

12讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

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Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

_______________________________________________________2Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.P1大意Thebreakfastwasmadewiththehelpoftheirfather.P1角色續(xù)寫思路角色Thetwinsfather

動作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展Thetwins;father②Whatdidthetwinssay?①Howdidhefeel?2③Whatdidhedo?④Thebreakfastwasready.P2大意P2角色續(xù)寫思路角色

動作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展Afterseeingthesurprise,theirmotherwassurprisedandmoved.Thetwinsmotherfather2

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Thetwins;mother;father①Whatdidthetwinsdo?②Howdidmotherfeel?③Whatdidmotherdo?④Whatdidfatherdo?⑤Thefamilywerefilledwithhappiness.列大綱：兩段12句法3

列大綱：兩段12句法

1）

2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內容？

3Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句3Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Thefamilywashappy.FatherfrownedThetwinsyelled”Surprise!”.Thetiwnswentupstairs.Thetwinsexplained.Fatherunderstoodandofferedhelp.Thetwinswereexcited.Thebreakfastwasready.Mothersawthebreakfast.Motherwasmoved.Motherhuggedthetwins.Fatherjoined.3寫句式

招招升級4

寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:1）Spottingthemess,Dadfrowned.2）Jennathrewherselfathim,tearspuddinginhereyes.3）Allofasudden,thetwins’faceslitupwiththeirheadnoddingfirmly.

招式1：

非謂語動詞常用句式：①Doing...,.....②獨立主格：邏輯主語+doing/done...

③with+n+doing/done

4

寫句式

招招升級44）Halfsurprised,halfconcerned,

asenseofresponsibilityforcaringaboutthekidsdrovethefathertowipeawayhertears.招式2：

形容詞作狀語，表示情緒感受

常用句式：①Adj.+adj.,...②...,adj.+adj.

寫句式

招招升級e.g.:4）Halfsurprised,halfconcerned,

asenseofresponsibilityforcaringaboutthekidsdrovethefathertowipeawayhertears.5）Thenextmomentwitnessedtheireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.4招式3：無靈主語

①afloodof+（情緒類）n.seized/welledup/cameoversb.②

無靈主語（表示時間、地點的名詞）+有靈動詞（see/witness）Step4.寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:6）ThemomentMomopenedhereyes,thetwinsyelled,“HappyMother’sDay!”招式4：高級的時間狀語從句：名詞短語作連詞

①Themoment/minute/second/instant+從句，主句。

②Thefirsttime/Everytime+從句，主句。

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范文賞析5Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Spottingthemess,Dadfrowned.Beforehecouldquestionthekids,Jennathrewherselfathim,tearspuddinginhereyes,“Dad,wefailedtopreparethegiftforMom!”Halfsurprised,halfconcerned,

asenseofresponsibilityforcaringaboutthekidsdrovethefathertowipeawayhertears,“Let’sdoittogether.”Allofasudden,thetwins’faceslitupwiththeirheadnoddingfirmly.Thenextmomentwitnessedtheireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.“T