高考英語(外研版)一輪復(fù)習(xí)課件：寫作技法點(diǎn)撥系列+10

寫作技法點(diǎn)撥系列十、發(fā)揮想象,靈活闡釋開放作文【核心點(diǎn)撥】常用句型1.Asisshowninthepicture,twoantsarewalkingalongthesideofastandardtriangle.如圖所示,兩只螞蟻正沿著一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的三角形而行。2.Aswecanseeinthepicture,wearebeingsurroundedbydeserts.正如圖中我們看到的那樣,我們正在被沙漠包圍。3.Inthepicture,wecanseeclearlythestrugglebetweenpeopleanddesert.如圖所示,我們可以清楚地看出人類與沙漠之間的較量。4.Thepictureistryingtotellusthat...這幅圖畫向我們表明……5.Thepicturereflectsacommonsocialproblemthat...這幅圖畫反映了一個(gè)普遍的社會(huì)問題,即……【典題示例】(2016·浙江高考)“Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter”是一句英語名言。請以此為題用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求如下:1.簡述你對這句名言的理解;

2.用一個(gè)具體事例加以說明;3.給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾?！緦忣}謀篇】文章體裁夾敘夾議文中心人稱第一人稱I主要時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),一般過去時(shí)信息要點(diǎn)1.解釋這句名言的含義;2.用自己的具體事例加以說明;3.這句名言的意義及我的感受?！驹~句構(gòu)建】1.詞匯漢語一般詞匯高級詞匯沒有好結(jié)果havenogoodeffect___________一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)睦觓proper/goodexample_____________開始start/begin______完成任務(wù)finishone’stask___________________bearnofruitacaseinpointsetoutachieveone’ssuccess2.句式①如果不去實(shí)際實(shí)施,一個(gè)計(jì)劃不會(huì)有好結(jié)果。一般表達(dá):Aplancanhavenogoodeffectifitisnotactuallycarriedout.高級表達(dá):Aplancan________________________actuallycarriedout.(用高級詞匯句式替代havenogoodeffect,if從句)bearnofruitwithoutbeing②我最終取得了比賽的第一名。一般表達(dá):FinallyIwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.高級表達(dá):Ifinally______________________thefirstprizewinner.(用高級詞匯替代won)cameoutofthecontestas③它(好結(jié)果)來自計(jì)劃周密和執(zhí)行到位的完美結(jié)合。一般表達(dá):Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingwhicharecombined.高級表達(dá):Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoing_________.(用過去分詞作定語)combined【連句成篇】Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter

Planningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.

MyexperienceintheEnglishspeechcontestlastOctoberisacaseinpoint.Amonthbeforetheevent,Ispenthoursworkingoutascheduleoutliningmygoalsandpracticalsteps.Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.

IknowhowIachievedmysuccess.Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingcombined.【即時(shí)應(yīng)用】假設(shè)你校英語報(bào)正在進(jìn)行名言佳句分享活動(dòng),請根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文推薦“Changewhatyoucanchange;acceptwhatyoucan’tchange.”這句名言。

1.談?wù)勀銓@句名言的理解;

2.舉例說明理由。注意:詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

Famoussayingsusuallycontainmuchwisdomandteachussomephilosophyoflife.“Changewhatyoucanchange;acceptwhatyoucan’tchange.”isjustonesuchquote.

Ontheonehand,weshouldbeoptimistic,thinkpositivelyandliveactively.Inotherwords,weshouldtryourbesttochangeeverythingaroundusforthebetter.OnethingI’msurewecanchangeisourattitudes.Withapositiveattitude,we’remorelikelytoachieveourgoalsandrealizeourdreams.

Ontheotherhand,there’remanythings