2023年高考英語(yǔ)作文高分模板

高考英語(yǔ)作文高分模板

一、第一種題型（議文章）

1.觀點(diǎn)碰撞題（比照觀點(diǎn)選擇題）：

大多為三點(diǎn)提綱，提綱模式一般是：有一些人……；還有人…….;我的

看法或觀點(diǎn)

作文題：Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicsIsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessaryThefirstsentencehasalready

beenwrittenforyou.Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyour

compositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)考試，理由是…….

2.也有人持不同意見，...

3.我的看法和打算

說(shuō)明利弊型作文是以某一事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)為文章的主要內(nèi)容，最終以

考生的評(píng)論或者觀點(diǎn)作為全文的結(jié)論。在說(shuō)明事物的利弊時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意條理

性。比方我們可以使用比照法或是枚舉法中的句型來(lái)展開短文。在文章的最

后一段說(shuō)明個(gè)人的態(tài)度或者看法的時(shí)候，最好也能提供相應(yīng)的理由或者一些

揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短的方法來(lái)減少事物的負(fù)面影響。

這類型的作文的寫作可以采納以下的模式：

第一局部：引言。說(shuō)明標(biāo)題中涉及的某一事物或現(xiàn)象;

第二局部：優(yōu)點(diǎn)。例舉該事物或現(xiàn)象的優(yōu)點(diǎn)或積極因素；（這一局部除

了可以獨(dú)立成段外，也可以與第一局部合為一段，或是與第三局部合為一段〕

第三局部：缺點(diǎn)。可以考慮用比照關(guān)聯(lián)詞引出該事物或現(xiàn)象的另一面一

—缺點(diǎn)或消極因素；

第四局部：考生的個(gè)人體會(huì)。權(quán)衡利弊，闡述個(gè)人體會(huì)或者如何揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避

短的方法。

模板一：

要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給整理己的看法。

Thetopicof①-------------------（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopular

recently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.

Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-------------------（支持A的理由一）

Whatismore/Plus,③---------------理由二）.Moreover,④------------------（理由三）.

WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthree

reasons.Firstly,-------------------（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,?------------

-----（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,⑦-----------------------（理由三）.

Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧------------------（我的觀點(diǎn)）.Thereason

isthat⑨-----------------------（原因）.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeother

reasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.

模板二：

給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)

Somepeoplebelieve由at①------------------（觀點(diǎn)一）.Forexample,they

think②-------------------（舉例說(shuō)明）.Anditwillbringthem③----------------------

（為他們帶來(lái)的好處）.

Inmyopinion,!neverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,@—

-------（我不同意該看法的理由一）.Foranotherthing,⑤--------------------（反對(duì)

的理由之二）.

FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥---------------------（我

對(duì)文章所商量主題的看法）.

模板三：

①Differentpeoplehavequitedifferentviewson.②Itisheldbysome

peoplethat.③Butitisalsoheldbyothersthat.

?Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionthinkthat.⑤Intheirview,

.⑥Incontrast,thosewhoholdtheoppositeviewthinkthat.⑦

Theyarguedthat.

⑧AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewith______.?Admittedly,.⑩

Furthermore,.（1l）Finally,.（12）Inconclusion,.

模板四：

①Thereisapairofoppositeideason.②Somepeopleconsider

that.③However,othersholdtheoppositeviewthat.

④Somepeoplewouldsaythat.⑤Theyholdthisviewbecause

.⑥Incontrast,othersbelievethat.⑦Theyargue

that.

⑧Astome,Iaminfavorof.⑨First(ly),.⑩

Second(Iy),.(11)Themostimportantofall,.(12)Inaword,.

2.社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題商量：

通常模式為：現(xiàn)象概述一細(xì)節(jié)(原因、危害、方法等)一自我評(píng)論

原因模板一：

①Itistruethat.②Nowadays,.③Whatimpressesus

mostis.(4)0fcourse,.

⑤Thereisalsoagrowingconcernover.⑥Themainreasonforthis

is.?Whatismore,.⑧Asaresult,.

?Consideringallthesereasons,personally,.⑩Ontheonehand,

.(1l)Ontheotherhand,.(12)Inaword,.

原因模板二：

①Nowadays,whereveryougo,.②Asisknowntoall,.③

Inaword,.

④Thereareplentyofcontributingcausesamongwhich,thefollowingones

areparticularlyworthmentioning.⑤First,.?Second,.?And

consequently,.⑧Andfinally,.

⑨Infact,inthelongrun.?Besides,______.(1l)Andwhat'smore,

(12)Therefore,lefsrememberthat.

危害類：首先提出一種普遍現(xiàn)象，并指出其危害性很大。說(shuō)明其危害后

說(shuō)明自己的態(tài)度，即排除危害性的做法。

MyViewontheNegativeEffectsofSomeFalseAdvertisement

1.現(xiàn)在有些不良的商業(yè)廣告

2.這些廣告的副作用和危害性

3.我對(duì)這些廣告的態(tài)度

第一段引入某種有害事物：

Nowadayseveryoneofusmaycomeacross-------------nowandthen(間或).

These-------------aremostharmfultothewholesociety.

第二段分三方面說(shuō)明其危害性：

Formypart/Frommyownperspective(替換inmyopinion),their

harmfulnesscanbesummarizedinthefollowingrespects.Inthefirstplace,一

------Inthesecondplace,-------------Lastbutnotleast,.

第三段說(shuō)明自己的態(tài)度，即排除危害性的做法:

Inmymind,thegovernmentandthecitizensshouldjoinhandstoputanend

tothese-------------.Ononehand,thegovernmentshould-------------Ontheother

hand,commoncitizensshould-------------Onlybythejointeffectsofthe

governmentandthecommoncharacterscanwe（only用在句首引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)時(shí)，主

句局部倒裝）doawaywith（廢除,去掉）.

解決方法模板一：

①Withthedevelopment/improvement/

reform/openingof...inrecentyears,.②Soitisofgreatimportance

forusto.③Ontheonehand,.?Ontheotherhand,.

?However,whatreallymattersis.?Firstly,.⑦Solong

as.⑧Secondly,.⑨Thirdly,.⑩Lastly,.（11）In

fact,.（12）Inaword,.

解決方法模板二：

Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmore

andmoreserious.First,--------------（說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀）.Second,-----------------（舉例進(jìn)

一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀）

ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocope

with由esituation.Foronething,-----------------（解決方法一）.Foranother------------

---（解決方法二）.Finally,---------------（解決方法三）

Personally,Ibelievethat---------------（我的解決方法）.Consequently,I'm

confidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause----------------（帶來(lái)的好處）.

第二種題型〔圖表題〕

通常模式為：描述圖表一解釋原因一自我評(píng)論

Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthegraph/table/chart(Asisshowninthe

table/figure),greatchangedhavetakenplacein,Thehave/has

skyrocketed/jumpedfromto.

Whenitcomestothereasonsforthechanges,differentpeoplegivedifferent

explanations.HereIshalljustgiveafew.Tobeginwith,What's

more,,Lastbutnotleast,.

Whileitisdesirablethat,therearestillsomeproblemsand

difficultiesforFirstly,,Inaddition,,Ina

word,.

三、第三種題型（書信題）

1.批判、抱怨、投訴信

模板一:

DearSir/Madam:

①M(fèi)ynameis.②Iama.③Iventuretowritealettertoyou

about.④Thefocusofthecomplaintis.⑤Foronething,.

⑥Foranother,.

?Honestlyspeaking,.⑧But.?Besides,.⑩All

inall,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovementasfarasisconcerned.

(11)1dohope.

(12)Thankyouforyourconsideration.

Sincerelyyours,

模板二：

DearSir/Madam:

①Iam.②Onbehalfof,I.③Iamwritingto

youto.④Themainprobleminvolves.⑤Ontheonehand,

.⑥0ntheotherhand,.

⑦Totellyouthetruth,.⑧However,.⑨Inaddition,

.?If.(11)Finally,wearelookingforwardtoyourquickdealing

withthematter.

(12)Thankyouforyourkindconsideration.

Sincerelyyours,

2.建議信

模板一：

①Dear:

Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthat.②Yourlettergivesmemuch

pleasureand_______.③Irecommendthat.④Foronething,.⑤

Foranother,.

@Asto,Ithink.?Then.⑧Inorderto,

Isuggest.?Besides,I.?SoIbelieve.

(1l)Pleasesendmealettertellingme.(12)1amlookingforwardto

seeingyou.

Yours,

模板二:

①Dear:

Iamdelightedtolearnthat.②Itisseveralyearssince.③

_______isyourbestchoice,Ithink.④Ontheonehand,.⑤Ontheother

hand,_______.