2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫：被誤會(huì)拿走同學(xué)的300美元 講義素材

邵陽市2024屆高三第2次聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫題目：Itwasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummer,whentheworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreenleaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduringtheweekthattheywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother’ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoverjoyed,thinkinghardaboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhaveanunexpectedsumof$200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!Asusual,thephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostateaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplayingseveralhotlycontestedgames,IcouldhardycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowardstheclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven’sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsomeotherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.這是初夏一個(gè)陽光明媚的早晨，世界似乎充滿了陽光和新的綠葉。我的心情很好，因?yàn)槲业母改竸倓偨o了我300美元，作為我一周的日常開支，他們將去墨西哥看望我母親生病的祖父。我欣喜若狂，苦思冥想著用這筆錢能做些什么。如果我能維持一周的生計(jì)，我會(huì)有一筆意外的200美元來買最新的科比籃球鞋！多么棒的主意！和往常一樣，體育課很精彩。我在籃球場(chǎng)上感到很自在。在打了幾場(chǎng)激烈的比賽后，當(dāng)我汗流浹背、疲憊不堪地朝教室走去時(shí)，我終于可以喘口氣了。當(dāng)我進(jìn)去的時(shí)候，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的同學(xué)們聚集在史蒂文的桌子旁，他焦急地翻閱著他的書和其他一些個(gè)人物品。史蒂文一直很受歡迎。他不僅聰明有禮，而且還來來往往。Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren’swelfareinstitutethatafternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearcharoundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskforinspection.我馬上就知道史蒂文那天下午把捐給兒童福利機(jī)構(gòu)的錢弄丟了。然后我通知了班主任瓊斯小姐。她立即沖過去，在教室周圍組織了一次搜查。我們站在桌子旁，把書包里的東西倒在桌子上檢查。Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe$300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn’tknowtheamountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinnocence,butinvain.MissJonesconfiscated(沒收)the$300anddecidedIwasgettingkickedoutoftheschool.Istayedhomealonethewholeweek,livingonlyonbread.Ifeltwronged,angry,andlossofself-respect.輪到我了。當(dāng)瓊斯小姐從我錢包里掏出300美元時(shí)，全班同學(xué)都驚呆了。直到那時(shí)，我才知道損失的金額是300美元。我不斷地證明自己是清白的，但徒勞無功。瓊斯小姐被沒收(沒收)300美元，我決定被學(xué)校開除。我一個(gè)人在家呆了整整一個(gè)星期，只靠吃面包為生。我感到委屈、憤怒和喪失自尊。Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’

advicewhenStevencame.

前文大意：父母給了我300美元作為一周的生活費(fèi)。我上完體育課走進(jìn)教室發(fā)現(xiàn)Steven同學(xué)把他當(dāng)天下午要捐給兒童福利機(jī)構(gòu)的錢弄丟了，Jones老師在班里進(jìn)行搜查，當(dāng)從我那里搜出300美元時(shí)把它沒收了。我被趕出學(xué)校，一個(gè)人在家熬了一個(gè)星期，感到委屈、憤怒、失去了自尊。

答題難點(diǎn)：從學(xué)生答題情況看，很多學(xué)生在第一段續(xù)寫中沒有提到“我父母的具體建議”，所以跟第二段的首句就沒銜接起來。

我的下水作文：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

I

suddenlyburstintotears.

Puzzled,theyaskedmewhathadhappened.Withmyeyesswimmingwithtears,Itoldthemaboutthe

injustice

Ihadsufferedatschoolafewdaysearlier.Theykeptcomfortingme.Thenextmorning,theytookmetoMissJones’

officeandtoldherthattheyhadindeedgivenme$300formydailyexpenses

beforeleavingforMexico.

TheyadvisedhertoaskSteventolookagain,addingthatitmusthavebeenamisunderstanding.

(82words)MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’

advicewhenStevencame.

Hesaidhehadfoundthemissing$300,whichhehadleftonhisbed.So

embarrassed

was

hethat

his

face

wentbrick-red.

Stevensincerelyapologizedtome,andbeggedformyforgiveness.Wehuggedeachothertightly,abigsmilespreadingacrossmyface.Afterthefirst-periodbellrang,MissJonesannouncedtotheclassthatIhadbeenwronged.Shemadeapublicapologytome,andcanceledthepunishmentdecisionaboutme.

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參考譯文：最后，我的父母回到家和我交談。我突然放聲大哭起來。他們感到不解，便問我已經(jīng)發(fā)生了什么。我兩眼噙滿淚水，告訴他們幾天前我在學(xué)校所遭受的委屈。他們不斷地安慰我。第二天早晨，他們把我?guī)У搅薓issJones的辦公室，告訴她他們?nèi)ツ鞲缜暗拇_給了我300美元作為我的日常開銷。他們建議她讓Steven再找找，并補(bǔ)充說，這一定是一場(chǎng)誤會(huì)。MissJones剛接受了我父母的建議，Steven就來了。他說他找到丟失的300美元了，原來他把錢落在他的床上了。他尷尬極了，臉漲得紫紅紫紅的。Steven真誠(chéng)地向我道歉，并請(qǐng)求我的原諒。我們緊緊擁抱在一起，我的臉上綻開了燦爛笑容。第一節(jié)課鈴響后，MissJones向全班宣布我是被冤枉的。她向我作出了公開道歉，并取消了對(duì)我的處罰決定。

官方范文：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

Theypatientlylistenedtomysideof

thestory,theirunderstandingandsupporthelpingtoboostmyhurtfeelingsandself-esteem.Itold

thewholestoryofwhathappened,includingtheexpensivemisunderstanding,andthereliefof

sharingmytoughexperiencewasclearintheroom.Itwasduringthisemotionalconversationthat

IheardaboutSteven’sadmission,whichwouldchangethesituation.

(63words)MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.

Hegenuinelylooked

sorry,withahintofregretinhiseyes.Toeveryone’srelief,heconfessedthathehadfoundthe

lostmoneyinhisbackpack.TheimmensereliefandjoyIfeltwerehardtoputintowords,

showinghowmisunderstandingsandhastyjudgmentscanleadtoseriousproblems.Steven’ssincere

apologyandourcollectiveunderstandingbroughtuscloserasclassmates,restoringthewarmthof

ourfriendship.

(69words)[132words]注：范文第一段與第二段首句似乎沒有銜接好。默寫版：Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________他們耐心地傾聽我的故事，他們的理解和支持有助于增強(qiáng)我受傷的感覺和自尊.Itold

thewholestoryofwhathappened,includingtheexpensivemisunderstanding,andthereliefof

sharingmytoughexperiencewasclearintheroom.______________________________________________________