李華帶你去中考 熱點08 -中考英語高分作文（江蘇專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點08李華帶你去中考一、材料作文1．“少年強則國強”，安徽省正在圍繞這個主題舉行“好少年”評比活動。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)下面的信息，為自己寫一篇自薦信，標題為“Iamanoutstandingstudent”。外表班上最高的，帶著眼鏡性格大方，熱于助人校園生活努力學習，與同學相處融洽愛好旅游……未來計劃要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。IamanoutstandingstudentIamLiHuainGradeNinefromNo.5MiddleSchool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】IamanoutstandingstudentIamLiHuainGradeNinefromNo.5MiddleSchool.Iamthetalleststudentinmyclasswithglasses.Iamhumorous,kindandfriendly.Iamamonitorofmyclass.Iliketodosomethinghelpfultoourteachersandclassmates.So,Iamnotonlyhard-workingbutalsogetalongwellwithmyclassmates.AndIamalwaysstrictwithmyselfinordertosetagoodexample.Iamgoodatallmysubjects.Aboveall,Ihavesomehobbies,likeclimbingandtraveling.Ihopetotraveltomanydifferentplaceswithmyparents.AndIwanttobeamathteacherbecauseIlikemathandIamreadytohelpchildreninpoorareas.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，學生不要遺漏題目中的要點，適當添加細節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字數(shù)要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的基本信息、外表、性格等；第二步，介紹校園生活；第三步，介紹自己的愛好。[亮點詞匯]①notonly…butalso不僅……而且……②bestrictwith對……嚴格③getalongwellwith與……相處融洽[高分句型]①AndIwanttobeamathteacherbecauseIlikemathandIamreadytohelpchildreninpoorareas.（原因狀語從句）二、電子郵件2．假設你是某國際學校的學生李華，你們班將于近日舉辦漢語名著閱讀分享活動(ChineseClassicsSharingActivity)，請你根據(jù)表格要點提示及要求，給在你校學習的交換生Mike寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加，并告訴他時間、地點、目的、活動安排等。寫作要點具體內容TimeFrom8:00pmto10:00pmonSeptember1PlaceSchoolartcenterPurpose①MakemorepeoplereadChineseclassics②LearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureParticipants(參與者)EveryoneinterestedActivities①TalkaboutaChineseclassictheyread②Haveadiscussionandshareideas要求：1.電子郵件應包括表格中的要點提示，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；2.電子郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80~120；電子郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheChineseClassicsSharingActivity._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMike,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheChineseClassicsSharingActivity.Itwillbeheldintheschoolartcenterfrom8:00pmto10:00pmonSeptember1.Thisactivity,whichfaceseveryonewhoisinterested,aimstomakemorepeoplereadChineseclassicsaswellastogivepeopleawaytolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Duringtheactivity,eachstudentwilltalkaboutaChineseclassictheyreadfirst,andthenwecanhaveadiscussionandshareourideasaboutit.IknowyouareinterestedinreadingChineseclassics,sothiswillbeagreatchanceforyoutotalkaboutyourfavoriteChineseclassic.Iamsureyouwillhavemuchfunthenifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點以及開頭已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏表格中的寫作要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山說明要邀請Mike參加活動；第二步，具體介紹活動時間、地點以及活動等信息；第三步，書寫結語，表達對Mike的祝愿。[亮點詞匯]①aswellas以及②learnabout了解③talkabout討論④beinterestedin對……感興趣[高分句型]①Thisactivity,whichfaceseveryonewhoisinterested,aimstomakemorepeoplereadChineseclassicsaswellastogivepeopleawaytolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.（定語從句）②Iamsureyouwillhavemuchfunthenifyoucome!（賓語從句）3．假如你是LiHua，你的外國好友Frank來信告知他將成為你校七年級新生。請根據(jù)下列表格中的內容，結合自己初中階段學習、生活等方面的經歷，回一封郵件，供他參考。注意：1.文中必須包含所給的內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；參考詞匯供選擇使用；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右；郵件的格式及正文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。內容要點參考詞匯Thingsneedednotebook,dictionary,…Attitude(態(tài)度)totakehard-working,active,happy,…Relationshiptodeveloprespect,getalongwith,…Others…DearFrank,Iamgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】：DearFrank,I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.HereissomethingI’dliketoshare.Firstofall,youneedtogetsomenotebooksanddictionariesready,especiallyaChineseone,becauseyouwilloftenneedtheminyourstudy.Asastudent,youhavetoworkhard.Butwhateverhappens,stayactive,evenwhenyoufail.Andrespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolourful.Ihopemyadvicewillwork.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件，為應用文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當增加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，歡迎對方來中國學習并引入主題；第二步，根據(jù)表格提示詳細說明來中國學習需要注意的事項；第三步，表達自己的希望。[亮點詞匯]①firstofall首先②workhard努力工作③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.（if引導條件狀語從句）②Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolourful.（it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語；動詞不定式作目的狀語）4．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Linda想了解你們學校英語節(jié)的情況，請你根據(jù)表格提示給她寫一封e-mail。TimeLastweekPlaceIntheschoolhallPeopleAlltheteachersandstudents,someparentsActivitiesSingEnglishsongs,playEnglishplays,readEnglishpoems...Feelings...要求：1.參考提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）DearLinda,WehadanunforgettableEnglishfestivallastweek._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearLinda,WehadanunforgettableEnglishfestivallastweek.Itwasreallyfuntoenjoysuchwonderfulshowsinourschoolhall.Alltheteachersandstudentstookpartintheactivities.Someparentswerealsoinvitedtowatchourperformances.Asyoucanimagine,alltheperformerstriedtheirbesttoshowthemselves.SomesangEnglishsongs.SomeplayedEnglishplays.AndothersreadEnglishpoems.MyfavoritewastotellChinesestoriesinEnglish.IwasverygladtotellatraditionalChinesestoryfreelyinEnglish.AndIwasexcitedtoknowIwonthefirst.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰、無語法和拼寫錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，介紹上周度過了一個難忘的英語節(jié)；第二步，介紹英語節(jié)舉行時間、地點、參加的人員以及活動；第三步，談談自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②tryone’sbesttodosth.盡某人最大努力做某事③inEnglish用英語④beexcitedtodosth.興奮地做某事[高分句型]①Itwasreallyfuntoenjoysuchwonderfulshowsinourschoolhall.（Itis+名詞+todosth.做某事……）②Someparentswerealsoinvitedtowatchourperformances.（含一般過去時的被動語態(tài)）三、書信作文5．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Luke的學校即將開設特色選修課程，他正在考慮是否選修漢語，來信詢問你的建議。請你根據(jù)所給提示給他寫封回信。內容提示：YoursuggestionsLearnChineseImportanceHowtolearn注意：(1)內容必須包含思維導圖中所提供的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮。其中“Howtolearn”需拓展，結合自身經驗，介紹至少2種學習漢語的方法；(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)學生真實姓名和所在學校名稱；(3)詞數(shù)100左右。DearLuke,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearLuke,I’msogladtohearfromyou.IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LeaningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.AsaChinese,IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求根據(jù)提示內容，針對學習漢語給出建議，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，建議對方選擇漢語課；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“重要性、如何學習”兩個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語，希望建議能幫到對方。[亮點詞匯]①hearfrom收到……的信②withthedevelopmentof隨著……發(fā)展③inmyopinion在我看來④besupposedto應該[高分句型]①WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.（形容詞比較級結構）②Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.（省略that的賓語從句）6．假如你是LiHua，你的外國好友Frank來信告知他將成為你校七年級新生，請結合自己在初中階段學習、生活等方面的經歷，給Frank寫一封100詞左右的回信。（可能用到的詞匯：respect尊重）1.需要用到的學習用品；2.對待學習、生活的態(tài)度；3.如何與老師、同學相處；4.需要注意的其它方面。DearFrank.I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Bestwishes,LiHua【參考范文】DearFrank,I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.HereissomethingI’dliketosharewithyou.Tobeginwith,youneedtopreparesomenotebooksanddictionaries,especiallyaChineseone,becauseyouwilloftenneedtheminyourstudy.Asastudent,youhavetoworkhard.Pleaseremembernomatterwhathappens,stayactive,evenwhenyoufail.Pleaserespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.Besides,youwillbehappierifyougetonwellwithyourclassmates.Lastly,itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolorful.Ihopemyadvicewillwork.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第二人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，表明寫信緣由；第二步，就初中生活，在學習、生活等方面給出建議；第三步，最后表達希望見到對方。[亮點詞匯]①sharewithsb與某人分享②Tobeginwith開始③getonwellwithsb與某人相處得很好[高分句型]①Pleaserespecttheteachersasit’saChinesetradition.（as引導的原因狀語從句）②itisagoodideatodevelopsomehobbiestomakeyourlifebetterandmorecolorful.（動詞不定式作定語和作目的狀語）7．光明中學最近舉行了“學校年度榜樣學生”評選，需要征集同學的自我簡介。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇介紹自己的文章，向學校校報投稿。80詞左右，短文的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要點提示：1.你的特長愛好（至少兩點）；2.日常生活習慣（至少兩點）；3.你的校園生活，參加的社團以及收獲。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；2.須包含所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；Dearstudents,I’mLiHuafromGrade7.I’mgladtointroducemyselftoyou._______________________________________________________________________