湖南師大附中高三月考七英語試題寫作講義

湖師大附2024屆月考7寫作第四部分寫作（共二節(jié)，滿分40分）第一節(jié)

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假設(shè)你是學(xué)?？谡Z興趣班的學(xué)生李華，你的外教Chris正在策劃一次戶外活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.你對(duì)活動(dòng)的建議；

2.建議的理由。注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dear

Chris,

_______________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua

參考范文Dear

Chris,

Howiseverything?Iamdelightedtohearthatyouareplanninganoutdooractivity.

Herearemy

suggestionsfortheevent.

Istronglyremenda"NatureImmersionDay",whichwillprovideuswithanopportunitytoimmerseourselvesinthebeautyofnaturewhilepracticingEnglishin

arealworldcontext.Wecanstartwith

aguidednaturewalk

inanaturereserve,observinganddiscussingthefloraandfauna.Followingthewalk,

teambuildinggames

suchastreasure

huntsorrelayracesareagoodidea.

Afterlunch,wecan

gatherforabriefdiscussionontheimportanceof

protectingourenvironment.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.

Letmeknowifyouhaveanyotherideasorquestions.Yourssincerely,LiHua

下水作文

DearChris,

Learningthatourspeakingclubisdesigningafieldtripandyou’reconsultingmeforremendations,Iam

oncloudnine.Asanenthusiasticmember,Iwouldliketooffermyhumbleopinions.

Onsuchawarmspringday,wemaytrygoingtoaparknearby,wherewecannotjust

appreciatethenaturalscenery

butwecan

arrangeavarietyofactivities

there,includingroleplay,groupdiscussion,andmakinganimpromptuspeech.Additionally,it'simportanttoinvitemoreforeignfriendslikeyouandencouragenonnativeEnglishspeakerstoactivelyparticipatesothatwecan

havemoreaccesstolanguageuse.

Idowishourfieldtripwouldbe

afruitfulandenjoyableexperience

forallmembers.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫二段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完成的短文。SnowflakeBentley

Inthe

dayswhenVermontfarmersworkedthelandandspenttimewithlivestock,therelived

aboyWillie

Bentleywho

loved

snow

morethan

anythingintheworld.VermontisnostrangertosnowandBentley'shappiestdaysweresnowstormdays.Hewatchedsnowflakes(雪花)onhisglove,onthevastfarm

fields,andonthedarkmetalhandleofthebarn(谷倉(cāng))door.HesaidsnowwastheblessingsofNature.However,hecouldnotsharesnowflakesbecausehecouldnotsavethem.

Later,whenhismothergavehimanoldmicroscope,he

mainlyusedittolookatsnow.Whilekidsofhisneighborschasedhensandhadsnowballfights,Williewascatchingsnowflakes.Dayafterstormydayhestudiedtheicycrystals(冰晶).

Theirdelicatepatternswereevenmorebeautifulthanhehadimagined.Williedecidedhemustfindawaytosavesnowflakessootherscould

see

their

wonderful

designs.For

threewintershetried

drawingsnowcrystals.Theyalwaysmeltedintheblacktray(托盤)thatheusedtocatchthembeforehecouldfinishthedrawings.

Whenhewassixteen,Williereadofacamerawithitsownmicroscope."IfIhadthatcameraIcould

photograph

snowflakes,”hetoldhismother.Willie'smotherknewthathewouldnotbehappyuntilhecouldsharewhathehadseen.

“Spendingtimeonsnowisjustfoolishness,”hismothersaid.Still,shelovedhisson.WhenWilliewasseventeen

hisparentsspenttheirsavingsandboughtthecamera.Itcostasmuchastencows.Williewassureitwasthebestofallcameras.

Evenso,hisfirstpictureswerefailures—nobetterthanshadows.Yethewouldnotquit.Mistakebymistake,snowflakebysnowflake,Willieworkedthrougheverystorm.Winterended,thesnowmelted,andhehadno

goodpictures.Hewaitedforanotherseasonofsnow.One

day,inthesecondwinter,hetriedanewexperiment.Anditworked!Williehadfiguredouthowtophotographsnowflakes!"Noweveryonecanseethegreatbeautyinatiny

crystal,"he

said.

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared....

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto....

Notwosnowflakesarealike.

Butyoumightnotknowthemanwhodiscoveredit.

Actually,it

canbetracedbacktoWilsonBentley,

afarmerfromVermont,theUSA,whoin1885becamethefirstpersontosuccessfullyphotographanindividualsnow

crystal—theicethat

makesupsnowflakes.

Afteryearsoftrialanderror,Bentleywasabletocapturetheintricatedetailsofsnow

crystalsbyusingapoundmicroscopeattachedtohisbellowscamera.Hewent

ontophotographmorethan5,000ofthese"iceflowers"

duringhislifetime—

never

findinganyduplicates—

andtheimagesstillshinetothisday.

故事解讀

在那個(gè)人們只是農(nóng)耕土種、飼養(yǎng)家畜的時(shí)代，美國(guó)佛蒙特州的人們對(duì)自然現(xiàn)象的美麗和奧秘并不感興趣，更不用說去欣賞那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，對(duì)于威利·本特利來說，雪花的美麗和獨(dú)特性卻是無法抗拒的。他先是試圖把雪花畫下來，但每次都是雪花融化了，他還沒畫完。有一天，他與他母親說，“如果我有那臺(tái)相機(jī)，我就可以拍雪花了?！彼赣H不理解地對(duì)他說：“把時(shí)間花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但盡管如此，威利的父母還是在孩子十七歲的那一年用可以買上十頭奶牛的錢給他買了一架當(dāng)時(shí)最好的相機(jī)（多米感言：父母對(duì)孩子的愛真是超級(jí)偉大！）。從此，威利癡迷于拍攝雪花，盡管周圍的人都對(duì)他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他從未放棄過。他明白，自己的任務(wù)是將這些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美麗展現(xiàn)給世界。因此，他繼續(xù)投身于拍攝雪花的工作中，不斷地嘗試、改進(jìn)、完善，終于有一天，他找到了拍攝的竅門。續(xù)寫審題

第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，沒有人在乎?！?/p>

我們的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該馬上接著寫威利自己的想法和反應(yīng)是什么（自然，他會(huì)繼續(xù)鉆研技術(shù)，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花來了）。結(jié)合下一段的首句提示，在該段段末應(yīng)該寫他因?yàn)樾∮忻麣?，從而得到了“雪花本特利”的美譽(yù)。

第二段：提示句“盡管剛剛成名，雪花·本特利還是下定決心要拍出一張完美的照片。”

我們的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該馬上接著寫本特利因?yàn)閳?zhí)著追求完美主義，終于成為了眾人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了絕美的雪花。他的努力和細(xì)致讓他捕捉到了那些令人嘆為觀止的細(xì)節(jié)。他成功了！故事告訴我們：一個(gè)人不但要生活，還要會(huì)生活。只有你的全力付出才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中處處是美景，哪怕微不足道到一片雪花、一絲塵土，也可足以驚艷到你。愛美，就去發(fā)現(xiàn)美、探究美吧！支架句子1.He

captured

theperfectsnowflakeimage,

amasterpieceofclarity

andbeauty

thatwouldberememberedforgenerations.2.Throughcountlessefforts,Bentley'sperseverancebeganto

payoff.3.SnowflakeBentley'scontributionliesnotjustinhisphotographsbutinhis

unshakablededicationtoperfectionism.4.Hetaughtusthattruesuccessliesnotin

thesuccessandstatus

wereceive,butin

theachievementandsatisfaction

wegainfromknowingthatw

havetriedallout.

下水作文1

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Howeverhard

Bentleyworkedonhisphotography,everyonestillreferredhisworkto

ajokeorasillystuff.Thoughencountering

failureafterfailure,Bentley

nevergaveup.Witheachnewsnowfall,Williewould

setouttocapturetheuniqueshapesandpatternsofsnowflakes.Hespenthours

huddlingoverhismicroscopeandcamera,capturingthe

delicatebeauty

ofeachsnowflake.Astheyearswentby,hisphotosbecamemoreandmore

detailedandlifelike.Peoplebegantonoticehisworkandunderstandhim.Slowly,he

gotthenicknameof

SnowflakeBentley.(92words)

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto.

Inlateryears,he

pushedtheboundariesof

hisphotographyskillsandeventually

developedaspecialtechnique

thatallowedhimtocapturesnowflakesinthreedimensions,revealingtheirintricateandoftensurprisingstructures.Hiswork

isrecognizedasapioneeringcontributionto

thefieldofsnowflakephotography.Today,SnowflakeBentley'sphotoscontinuetoinspirepeoplearoundtheworld.Hisstoryremindsusthat

eventhesmallestandmostoverlookedobjectsinnaturecanholdimmensebeautyandwonder.

Loveitandjustdoit!(84words)

下水作文2

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Theoutsideworldmighthavebeen

indifferentto

thebeautyofsnowflakes,butforBentley,eachonewasamasterpieceofnature,

uniqueandirreplaceable.Hesawinthemnotmerelythepatternsandshapesbutalsothestoriesoftheirformation,thesecretsoftheatmospheretheyhadtraveledthrough.His