基礎(chǔ)寫作-如何描寫一個地方市公開課一等獎省賽課微課金獎

如何描寫一個地方1/34①…isin/on/to…of…②…belocated/situatedin③…liein…④…neighbor/border…5onitseastlies東邊有……中國在俄國南邊ChinaislocatedtothesouthofRussia.梅州坐落在廣東東北部MeizhouliesinthenortheastofGuangdong.◆地理位置2/34①…h(huán)as/coversanareaof...占地…面積②…takesup+...占地…面積③…is…longand…

wide…多長多寬小鎮(zhèn)占地5平方英里。Thesmalltowncoversanareaof5squaremiles.

新疆占我國國土六分之一。Xingjiangtakesupaboutone-sixthofourterritory.這花園長三十米,寬二十米。Thegardenis30metreslongand20metreswide.

◆表達(dá)占地面積3/34①…h(huán)asalarge/smallpopulation…人口眾多/稀少②…h(huán)asapopulationof……有…人口③Thepopulationof…

is……有……人口④…percentofthepopulationare...百分之…人口是…

這個城市人口超出一百萬。Thiscityhasapopulationofmorethan1,000,000.

這個縣農(nóng)村人口為40萬。Theruralpopulationofthecountyis400,000.百分之八十人口是農(nóng)民。Eightypercentofthepopulationherearefarmers.◆表達(dá)人口4/34①…h(huán)asahistoryof…②…h(huán)asalonghistory.③withahistoryof…中國上下五千年Chinahasahistoryofmorethan5,000years.中國歷史悠久，占地960萬平方公里Withalonghistory,Chinacoversanareaof9.6millionkilometres.◆表達(dá)歷史5/34①berich/abundantin….某地含有豐富…，盛產(chǎn)…②…bewealthyin…某地富于…

③…producessth….某地出產(chǎn)…

④…befamous/well-knownfor…某地因…而聞名。⑤Themainagriculturalproductsare...主要農(nóng)產(chǎn)品是…⑥…bemadeupof/consistof由……組成⑦.…afantasticplace一個極好地方新疆有豐富自然資源，以葡萄而聞名。Xingjiangisrichinnaturalresourcesandisfamousforgrapes.該縣主要農(nóng)產(chǎn)品是小麥、玉米Themainagriculturalproductsinthiscountyarewheatandcorn

◆常用的句型6/34①aplaceofinterest②ahistoricalattraction③ascenicspot;afantasticplace一個極好地方④表示“吸引、著名”sth.attract/appealtosb.;sth.beattractive/appealing/wonderfulbefamousfor因……而著名;befamousas作為……而著名◆著名景點7/341.我向你介紹一下我故鄉(xiāng)。

Iwouldliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.2.我故鄉(xiāng),毗鄰香港,位于廣東省。Myhometown,neighboringHongKong,is

locatedinGuangdongProvince.相關(guān)句式8/343.廣州,擁有一千三百萬人口一座城市,有三百多年歷史了。Guangzhou,acitywithapopulationofaboutthirteenmillion,hasahistoryofmorethan2,200years.4.這座城市占地面積達(dá)7,434平方公里,人口大約是10,000,000。

Coveringatotalareaof7,434squarekilometersthiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.9/345.它自然資源得天獨厚,有豐富煤和金礦,而且氣候溫和。Itisrichinnaturalsourcessuchascoalandgold,andhasmildclimate.6.我們學(xué)校再也不是過去樣子了Ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.

10/34［能力提升］1.請依據(jù)漢字提醒,完成相關(guān)地點介紹語匯積累。(1)位于______________________(2)靠近_______________________________________________(3)有(多少)人口________________________________________________________________________

nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring...belocated/situatedin；lie(s)inIthasapopulationof...;Withapopulationof...,sth....;Thepopulationhasreached...11/34(4)有(多久)歷史

_______________________(5)占(多大)面積

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(6)表示“容量”Thehotel________(擁有)120rooms;Thebuildingcan_____(容納)5000people.coveranareaof...(squarekilometers/squaremeters)possessesholdIthasahistoryof...;Withahistoryof...，12/34(7)是(多少)長/寬/深I(lǐng)tis...____/____/___.=Itis...in_____/_____/_____.(8)著名景點aplaceof______,ahistorical_________,ascenicspot(9)表示“吸引、著名”sth.________________sb.;sth.be__________________________(形容詞);befamous____(因……而著名);befamous__(作為……而著名)

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interestattractionattract/appealtoattractive/appealing/wonderfulfor13/342.請依據(jù)漢字,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)___________________________________________________________________________(政治，經(jīng)濟(jì)，科學(xué)，教育，文化中心).(2)________________________________________________(全市面積7434.4平方公里),itishometomorethan11millionpeople.

Covering/Withanareaof7434.4squarekilometersthecentreofitspolitical，economic，scientific，educational，andculturallife14/34LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong,northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhou(3)___________________________(氣候溫暖濕潤).Besides,itisafamouscitywith(4)______________________________(有著2,200多年歷史)andastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou(5)____________________________(旅游資源豐富).enjoysawarmandwetclimateahistoryofmorethan2,200yearsabundantintravelingresourcesisalso15/34◆典型例題你將率領(lǐng)一個外國旅游團(tuán)參觀長城，請依據(jù)以下信息關(guān)鍵點，用5個規(guī)范英語句子寫一篇長城簡單介紹。你介紹應(yīng)包含全部信息關(guān)鍵點，介紹開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入5個句子中。【信息關(guān)鍵點】歷史有兩千多年歷史。特點世界上最長城墻,長6000多千米;建筑材料主要為石頭,磚頭,修建工作都是人工進(jìn)行;主要用于防御外來入侵者(foreigninvaders),沿墻每隔幾百米就有烽火臺(watchtower)?，F(xiàn)實狀況世界著名旅游景點之一，每年吸引許多外國游客到長城觀光旅游。[寫作要求]只能使用5個句子表示全部內(nèi)容。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。16/34◆技巧點撥介紹或描述地點基礎(chǔ)寫作,通常以表格形式來展現(xiàn)寫作點。該類表格通常有兩列,其中一列概括事物特征、屬性,另一列對此特征、屬性展開描述。學(xué)生必須重新組織表格內(nèi)容,不能死板地依據(jù)表格從左到右翻譯,如不能寫成“ThelocationofGuangzhouisinthesouthofChina”這么不地道句子,對應(yīng)表示應(yīng)該是:GuangzhouliesinthesouthofChina.17/342.確定時態(tài)。介紹地點等描述基本特征文章

通常使用普通現(xiàn)在時。3.防止開頭指代不明。若文章沒有給出寫作對象或設(shè)定情景，防止用it作主語引導(dǎo)第一句,而應(yīng)該詳細(xì)寫出描述對象，如theGreatWall,HongKong等。但假如整篇文章多處用“it”等作主語,文章會稍顯遜色,所以在寫作過程中,可依據(jù)文意適當(dāng)變換主語,如改寫為theplace,thecity等。18/34[例題導(dǎo)寫]按次序?qū)懽?。學(xué)生應(yīng)該按照表格內(nèi)容(即“歷史、特點、現(xiàn)實狀況”)先后次序進(jìn)行寫作，這么既可防止重整次序而浪費時間,也防止錯改次序而給老師帶來閱卷困難。2.草擬提要、簡單翻譯是寫作主要步驟之一。請翻譯關(guān)鍵點：有(多久)歷史_________________(2)世界最長城墻________________(3)6000多千米長__________________(4)由石頭,磚頭做成______________(5)由人工修建__________________Ithasahistoryof...bebuilt/constructedbyhandthelongestwallintheworld6000kilometerslongbemadeofstonesandbricks19/346)防御外來入侵者_(dá)_________________________________________________________________(7)每隔幾百米_____________________everyfewhundredmeterspreventthecountryfrombeinginvaded;defendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders(8)著名旅游景點之一

______________________________________________________________________(9)吸引許多外國游客

___________________________________oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamousplacesofinterest;oneofthefamoustouristattractionsattractmanyforeignvisitors20/343.規(guī)范表示名詞。假如名詞修飾語過長,應(yīng)轉(zhuǎn)用“a/an/the+名詞+of”表示,

比如,“兩千多年歷史”應(yīng)該寫成“ahistoryoftwothousandyears”,而不能寫成“twothousandyears’history”。21/344.變換表示,豐富句式。請按要求完成句子：(1)Itismorethan6000kilometersinlength,______________________________________(“是世界上最長城墻”,使用非限制性定語從句)(2)ItwastheGreatWall_____________________________________________inancienttimes.(“幫助人們防御外來入侵者”,使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句)thathelpedpeoplefightagainsttheforeigninvaderswhichmakesitthelongestwallintheworld22/34(3)_________________________________________________________,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.(“長城主要用于防御外來入侵者”,使用原因狀語從句)(4)TheGreatWallisoneofthewell-knownplacesofinterestonearth,_____________________________________________.(“每年吸引許多外國游客到長城觀光旅游”,使用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu))AstheGreatWallwasbuilttodefendpeopleagainsttheinvaders

appealingtoalargenumberofforeignerseveryyear23/34(5)TheGreatWallis____afamoushistoricalattraction____itattractshundredsofthousandsofforeignvisitorseachyear.(使用“如此……以致”句型表示)(6)So________________________thatitattractshundredsofthousandsofvisitorshomeandabroadeveryyear.(“長城如此吸引”,使用倒裝句)attractiveistheGreatWallsuchthat24/34LadiesandGentlemen，welcometotheGreatWall.

25/34TheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstonesandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatwallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyforeignvisitorseveryyear.26/34◆課堂練習(xí)梅州歷史悠久，被尊為“世界客都”地理位置：廣東省東北部。東部與福建省交界，南部與廣東省潮州市、汕尾市毗鄰，西部與廣東省河源市接壤，北部與江西省相連。面積：1.59萬平方公里人口：505多萬人方言：客家話、潮汕話（只限豐順）著名景點：千佛塔、雁南飛、雁鳴湖27/34（From潮州市質(zhì)量檢測卷）將笫四句拆分成二個句子?！翱图胰俗嫦仍醋灾性?素來崇文重教?！睂懗伞癟heancestorsofHakkasmigratedsouthwardfromCentralChina.Educationhasalwaysbeenregardedasanimportantmatterinthehakkacommunity.”Example3：笫四部分表格中，“車程所需時間”一欄，用一個句子（However,ittakes1hourtogotoZhongshanUniversitybybuswhileonly20minutestoJinanUniversity.），而“課程設(shè)置”一欄卻拆分成二個句子（What’smore,inZhongshanUniversity,allthecoursesaretaughtinChineseaswellasEnglish.Comparedtothis,EnglishistheonlylanguageusedinJinanUniversity）附：07潮州市質(zhì)量檢測卷:梅州市位于廣東東北部?？?cè)丝?91萬人（年）。梅州市是著名世界客都?？图胰俗嫦仍醋灾性?素來崇文重教?？图胰诵凶咛煜?，移民世界，且在海內(nèi)外商界不乏成功者，所以有“東方猶太人”之稱。MeizhouCityissituatedinthenortheastofGuangdongProvincewithapopulationof4.91million.ItisthebiggestoftheHakkascommunityinthecountryknownastheCapitalofhakkas.TheancestorsofHakkasmigratedsouthwardfromCentralChina.Educationhasalwaysbeenregardedasanimportantmatterinthehakkacommunity.BecauseoftheHakkas’successesinbusinessworldwide,theyareregardedasOrientalJews.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou,.LiHua28/34年體育盛事—奧運會將在倫敦舉行。你校一年一度英語體育節(jié)將至，請你依據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇介紹倫敦文章，張貼在體育節(jié)宣傳欄上。［寫作內(nèi)容］概況倫敦是英國政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化中心和首要工業(yè)城市。位于英國東南部,面積1580平方公里天氣天氣多變，時常下雨交通交通方便、發(fā)達(dá),但費用較高旅游風(fēng)光旖旎,吸引了四方游客,給游客留下了深刻印象◆可選課外作業(yè)29/34London,themostimportantindustrialcityofEngland,servesasthecentreofitspolitical,economicandculturallife.LocatedinthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversanareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeableanditrainsoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeansoftransportation,butatarelativelyexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld,leavingthemadeepimp