高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國(guó)）10咨詢信

10咨詢信(2014年，全國(guó)卷I）假如你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意。請(qǐng)給該校寫一封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢。參考詞匯：住宿—accommodation【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’veseenyourad,andI’dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【寫作解析】李華計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)為期六周,看到廣告后自己感覺有一些問(wèn)題廣告里不清楚，想要給校方寫信咨詢有關(guān)事項(xiàng)，考生要清楚這是一封信，要符合信的格式。這是考生非常熟悉的一個(gè)應(yīng)用文文體?？忌⒁鈩?dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的變化，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，兼有將來(lái)時(shí)，比如：功課什么時(shí)間開始?這是將來(lái)的事情。注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯來(lái)提高作文檔次?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)，增加了文章的色彩，如：plantodosth;wouldliketodosth;payfor;lookforwardtodoing/sth等；用了一些過(guò)渡詞如：First；Besides等，使文章過(guò)渡自然；用了一些連詞使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化不再單一。如：I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.并且wish后用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。開頭句1.Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding/concerning…我寫信想看看您是否能提供一些關(guān)于……的具體信息。2.Iwouldlietoknowwhetheryoucantellmesomethingabout…我想寫信看看是您否能告訴我有關(guān)……的情況。3.Iam…Iwonderifyoucouldprovidemesomespecificinformationabout…我是……我想知道您是否能夠提供一些關(guān)于……的具體信息。4.Iwonder/amwonderingifyoucould/wouldletmeknowsomethingabout…不知道您能否告知有關(guān)……的情況。5.I’dliketoacquirealltheinformationrelativeto…我想獲得關(guān)于……的信息。6.I’mwritingtoaskyousomerelevantquestions.我寫信向您詢問(wèn)一些相關(guān)的問(wèn)題。中間句1.Iwouldalsoliketoacquire…我想知道關(guān)于……一些的事情。/我還想咨詢……2.AnotherpointIamnotcertainaboutis…我還不確定的另外一點(diǎn)是……3.I’dalsolikesomehelp/informationon…我還想知道一些有關(guān)……的幫助/信息。4.ThequestionsIneedansweringarelistedasfollows…下列是我想咨詢的問(wèn)題。5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldinformme…如果你能告訴我……，我將不勝感激。結(jié)尾句1.Couldyoubesokindastosendmesome…ontheabove-mentionedaspects?能否針對(duì)上述問(wèn)題寄些相關(guān)的……給我？2.Thankyouforyourkindnessandyourtimelyattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝您的善意，對(duì)于這封信的及時(shí)關(guān)注我將不勝感激。3.I’mlookingforwardto/eagerlywaitingforafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.我盼望著您盡早回復(fù)。4.MayIhaveyourreplyby…（日期），ifpossible(語(yǔ)氣更委婉)？如果可能，我可否在……（日期）之前收到您的回復(fù)？5.Iwouldgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.請(qǐng)?jiān)诜奖愕臅r(shí)候盡早回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。模板開頭：1.___________youradvertisementinthepaper,Iaminterested________it.拜讀了你們?cè)趫?bào)紙上做的廣告，我很感興趣。2.NowIamwritingforsomedetailedinformation.正文：1._________________,Iwouldliketoknow….首先，我想知道……2.I’malsointerestedinknowing….3.而且，我不知道newsletters是否會(huì)額外收費(fèi)（至少3種表達(dá)）。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.就價(jià)錢而言，學(xué)生有優(yōu)惠嗎？_______theprice,doyouhavediscountsforstudents?Asfortheprice,I’mwondering_____________________________________.5.最后，不知道學(xué)生是否有優(yōu)惠。Finally,itisstillnotcleartomewhetherthereisareducedmembershipfeeforstudents.結(jié)尾：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.Or:Yourtimelyreplywouldbemuchappreciated. Or:Iamlookingforwardverymuchtohearingfromyousoon.開頭：表達(dá)寫信咨詢的原因Withthewinterholidayaroundthecorner,weplantopayavisittoChina.I’mwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithspecificinformationregardingyourcountry.隨著寒假的臨近，我們計(jì)劃去中國(guó)旅游。我寫信是想知道你是否能給我提供有關(guān)貴國(guó)的具體信息。中間：分點(diǎn)敘述咨詢內(nèi)容1.詢問(wèn)的第一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：什么時(shí)候課程開始。Tobeginwith,couldyoubesokindastotellmewhenthecoursewillstart.首先，你能告訴我課程什么時(shí)候開始嗎？用這種彬彬有禮的句子來(lái)詢問(wèn)，肯定會(huì)得到非常細(xì)致的回復(fù)。2.詢問(wèn)的第二點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，學(xué)費(fèi)和住宿Inaddition,itisstilluncleartomehowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.另外，我還不清楚我需要支付多少學(xué)費(fèi)，是否包括住宿。3.最后，詢問(wèn)課程的內(nèi)容Lastly,IwouldbemorethanobligedifyoucouldkeepmeinformedofthecontentofthecourseindetailssothatIcanmakeproperarrangements.最后，如果您能將課程內(nèi)容詳細(xì)告知我，我將不勝感激，以便我做出適當(dāng)?shù)陌才?。結(jié)尾再次表達(dá)感謝，期待回信Yourimmediateattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.Mayyoubeblessedineverythingyoudo.如能立即收到這封信，將不勝感激。愿你萬(wàn)事亨通。1．假定你是李華，你報(bào)名參加了國(guó)外的一項(xiàng)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，下個(gè)星期要進(jìn)行面試。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給交換生James寫一封郵件，咨詢面試技巧，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.描述現(xiàn)狀；3.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，你最喜歡的歌手下周將到你市演出。最近你準(zhǔn)備和幾個(gè)同學(xué)成立一個(gè)歌迷俱樂(lè)部。請(qǐng)你給你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack寫一封電子郵件，向他詢問(wèn)一些建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.喜歡該歌手的原因；2.咨詢?nèi)绾无k好歌迷俱樂(lè)部。注意：詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，當(dāng)你得知你校和另外一所國(guó)際學(xué)校計(jì)劃共同籌辦一場(chǎng)“最美中國(guó)”現(xiàn)場(chǎng)書畫比賽，號(hào)召書畫愛好者踴躍參加，你有意參加此次活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給組委會(huì)用英文寫封咨詢信，內(nèi)容包括：1.參賽作品種類2.是否自備書畫工具3.其他需要詢問(wèn)的內(nèi)容注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右DearSir/Madam，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHua4．假如你是李華，一名高二學(xué)生，因癡迷看小說(shuō)，熬夜，嚴(yán)重影響了健康和學(xué)習(xí)。希望有所改變，寫信向老師咨詢建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.陳述所受影響；2.表達(dá)期望和感激。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)在80詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文流暢。DearMr.Li,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你所就讀的高中準(zhǔn)備舉辦心理健康月系列活動(dòng)。你得知美國(guó)筆友Rogers最近組織過(guò)類似的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一封電子郵件，向Rogers咨詢以下內(nèi)容：1.活動(dòng)準(zhǔn)備；2.活動(dòng)安排；3.注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：心理健康月MonthofPsychologicalHealthDearRogers,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。通過(guò)網(wǎng)上得知英國(guó)一所中學(xué)正在全球范圍內(nèi)向高中學(xué)生征集畫作進(jìn)行展出。請(qǐng)寫一封郵件咨詢相關(guān)事項(xiàng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的;2.咨詢相關(guān)信息(主題，作品形式，提交方式等，……);3.表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHua7．假定你是李華，了解到你校國(guó)際部正在招募儒家思想宣傳大使志愿者，在暑期面向外國(guó)友人宣傳中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。你對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)很感興趣，準(zhǔn)備報(bào)名參加。由于活動(dòng)信息不太明確，你準(zhǔn)備寫一封咨詢信，詢問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);(2)參選的要求;(3)期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100詞左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。(3)參考詞匯：儒家思想Confucianism________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李華，最近你的視力下降嚴(yán)重，看不清楚周邊的事物。為此你感到十分焦慮。請(qǐng)你給美國(guó)外教MissEvans寫封信，咨詢她如何保護(hù)視力。要點(diǎn)：1.陳述視力下降的原因；2.詢問(wèn)保護(hù)視力的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMissEvans,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua9．假設(shè)你是高中生李華，你熱愛英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)，但在學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)自己看不懂一些英語(yǔ)笑話。請(qǐng)給一名英文報(bào)刊的編輯寫一封信，就此問(wèn)題進(jìn)行咨詢。內(nèi)容包括：1.熱愛英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)；2.不能理解英語(yǔ)笑話的幽默之處；3.詢問(wèn)原因，尋求建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：笑話joke

幽默humourDearEditor,IamLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua10．假定你是紅旗中學(xué)高二年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，你在網(wǎng)站看到了亞青會(huì)(theAsianYouthGames)志愿者招募的消息，你有興趣報(bào)名參加。請(qǐng)你向負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Li寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容主要包括：1.自我介紹；2.咨詢相關(guān)情況(招募條件，有何類別志愿者，報(bào)名時(shí)間和方式等)；3.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文流暢；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：招募recruitDearMr.Li,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua11．假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部在校園網(wǎng)上發(fā)布了一則有關(guān)“英語(yǔ)微電影大賽”的活動(dòng)啟事，你對(duì)此非常感興趣。請(qǐng)你給該俱樂(lè)部的負(fù)責(zé)人Brown外教寫一封郵件，申請(qǐng)參加比賽，要點(diǎn)包括：1．咨詢比賽信息(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、要求等)；2．你的優(yōu)勢(shì)；3．期待回復(fù)。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMrBrown,HearingtheEnglishMicroFilmCompetitionwillbeheldinourschool,I’mwritingtoapplytoenterit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua參考答案1．DearJames,I’mdelightedtotellyouthatI’lltakepartinasummercamp.However,therewillbeaninterviewnextweek,whichmakesmeworried.Iamwonderingifyoucouldtellmesomeinterviewskills.Asyouknow,myspokenEnglishisnotgood.Itmakesthecommunicationdifficultwithnativespeakers.IthinkthequestionisthatIamalwaysfloodedwithasenseofnervousnesswhentalking.SoI’mextremelyafraidtofailnow.Ihopetopasstheinterviewsuccessfullyandthereisanopportunitytomakemorefriendsandknowaboutthelocalculture.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你報(bào)名參加了國(guó)外的一項(xiàng)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，下個(gè)星期要進(jìn)行面試。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給交換生James寫一封郵件，咨詢面試技巧?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累高興的：delighted→glad參加：takepartin→participatein擔(dān)心的：worried→concerned機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Ihopetopasstheinterviewsuccessfullyandthereisanopportunitytomakemorefriendsandknowaboutthelocalculture.拓展句：IhopetopasstheinterviewsuccessfullysothatIcanhaveanopportunitytomakemorefriendsandknowaboutthelocalculture.【典型句式】[高分句型1]However,therewillbeaninterviewnextweek,whichmakesmeworried.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]IthinkthequestionisthatIamalwaysfloodedwithasenseofnervousnesswhentalking.(運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句)2．DearJack,I’mgladtotellyouthatmyfavouritesingerwillcometoourcitytoperformnextweek.I’msopleasedatthenewsthatIdecidetosetupamusicfanclubwithsomeofmyclassmates.Allofuslikehimandenjoyhissongsverymuch.Heisverycharmingandfantastic!Hissongsaregreat,whichnotonlysoundnicebutcanalsotouchourheart.Wecansingmostofhissongsandwouldliketoknowmoreabouthim.Butwedon’tknowhowtostartamusicfanclubandwhatactivitiesafanclubshouldhave.Couldyougiveussomegoodadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreplysoon!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你最喜歡的歌手下周將到你市演出。最近你準(zhǔn)備和幾個(gè)同學(xué)成立一個(gè)歌迷俱樂(lè)部。請(qǐng)你給你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack寫一封電子郵件，向他詢問(wèn)一些建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.喜歡該歌手的原因；2.咨詢?nèi)绾无k好歌迷俱樂(lè)部?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy迷人的：charming→attractive創(chuàng)立：start→found建議：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展合并句子原句：Allofuslikehimandenjoyhissongsverymuch.Heisverycharmingandfantastic!拓展句：Heissocharmingandfantasticthatallofuslikehimandenjoyhissongsverymuch.【典型句式】【高分句型1】I’mgladtotellyouthatmyfavouritesingerwillcometoourcitytoperformnextweek.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】I’msopleasedatthenewsthatIdecidetosetupamusicfanclubwithsomeofmyclassmates.(運(yùn)用了so...that引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型3】Hissongsaregreat,whichnotonlysoundnicebutcanalsotouchourheart.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)3．DearSir/Madam，Iheardthatourschoolandanotherinternationalschoolplanedtojointlyorganizea“mostbeautifulChina”livecalligraphyandpaintingcompetition.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthislivepaintingcompetition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Ialsowanttoparticipateinit.Iamwritingtoaskabouttheinformation.First,Iwanttoknowthedifferentkindsofthepaintingentries.Second,Iwouldliketoknowwhetherweshouldtakethepaintingtoolswithus.Lastbutnotleast,Iwanttoknowwhentheresultswillbeannounced.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanoffermesomerelevantinformation.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英文寫一封咨詢信，詢問(wèn)學(xué)校和另外一所國(guó)際學(xué)校計(jì)劃共同籌辦一場(chǎng)“最美中國(guó)”現(xiàn)場(chǎng)書畫比賽的情況?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累計(jì)劃做某事：plantodosth.→bescheduledtodosth.比賽：competition→contest提供：provide→offer參加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iamwritingtoaskabouttheinformation.拓展句:Iamwritingtoaskabouttheinformation,whichisusefulforme.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthislivepaintingcompetition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Second,Iwouldliketoknowwhetherweshouldtakethepaintingtoolswithus.（運(yùn)用了whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）4．DearMr.Li,I’mLihua,aseniortwostudent.Sufferingfrompoorhealthandworseningacademicperformanceduetomyaddictiontoreadingnovels.Iamwritingtoseekyourattainableadviceonhowtohandletheproblem.Ialwaysfinditabigstruggletosetasidethenovelsathand.SoabsorbedamIinreadingnovelsthatIwillseizeeveryopportunitytoreadthem,inclassorafterclass,especiallydeepintothenight,whichunavoidablybringsseveredamagetomyhealthontheonehandandinattentivenessandinefficiencyinclassontheotherhandwithsleepshortage.Facedwiththeproblem,Iamattemptingtohavemyhealthrestoredandmyacademicperformanceimprovedwithabalancemadebetweenmyreading,attendingclassandsleeping.Iwouldappreciateitalotifyouwillgivemesomeproductiveadvice,withwhichIbelieveIwillchangeforthebetter.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌虬V迷看小說(shuō)，熬夜，嚴(yán)重影響了健康和學(xué)習(xí)，要求考生寫信向老師尋求建議?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累解決：handle→tackle巨大的：big→huge抓?。簊eize→grasp有效的：productive→effective2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ialwaysfinditabigstruggletosetasidethenovelsathand.拓展句：Ialwaysfindthatitisabigstruggletosetasidethenovelsathand.【典型句式】【高分句型1】SoabsorbedamIinreadingnovelsthatIwillseizeeveryopportunitytoreadthem,inclassorafterclass,especiallydeepintothenight,whichunavoidablybringsseveredamagetomyhealthontheonehandandinattentivenessandinefficiencyinclassontheotherhandwithsleepshortage.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Iwouldappreciateitalotifyouwillgivemesomeproductiveadvice,withwhichIbelieveIwillchangeforthebetter.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句和省略連詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句)5．DearRogers,I’mLiHua,chairmanofthestudents’union.MyhighschoolisgoingtoorganizeaseriesofactivitiesduringMonthofPsychologicalHealth.Iheardyourecentlyorganizedasimilarevent.Togetsomerelevantinformation,I’mwritingtomakesomeinquiriesconcerningtheevent.I’mwonderingonthespecificactivitiesthroughouttheweek,becausetheinformationcanhelpusmakebetterpreparationsandpromoteourarrangements.Besides,whatmattersneedpayingattentionto.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucoulddealwithmyinquiriesatyourconvenience.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給美國(guó)筆友Rogers寫一封電子郵件，表示咨詢他組織過(guò)的“心理健康月”的相關(guān)事宜。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累獲得：get→obtain促進(jìn)：promote→advance需要：need→require感激的：appreciated→grateful2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Togetsomerelevantinformation,I’mwritingtomakesomeinquiriesconcerningtheevent.拓展句：BecauseIwanttogetsomerelevantinformation,I’mwritingtomakesomeinquiriesconcerningtheevent.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Iheardyourecentlyorganizedasimilarevent.(運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]I’mwonderingonthespecificactivitiesthroughouttheweek,becausetheinformationcanhelpusmakebetterpreparationsandpromoteourarrangements.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句)6．Dearsir/madam,

Recently,IlearnedthroughtheInternetthatyourschooliscollectingpaintingsfromhighschoolstudentsaroundtheworldforexhibition.Asaloverofpainting,Iamveryinterestedinthisactivity.Sowiththeaimofgettingtoknowsomemorespecificinformation,I’mwritingtheletter.

Firstofall,inordertomakegoodpreparationsforthepainting,Iameagertoknowaboutwhatthesubjectofthispaintingis?Asformycollections,mypaintingcontentsaremoreextensive,soIhavetochoosepaintingsthataremostfitforthethemeofthisactivity.Secondly,whatisthemainformoftheworktobesubmittedorisitunlimitedinform?Furthermore,it’svitalformetoknowthewaytosubmitmypaintings.ShouldIsubmititbyemailorjustlogontoyourwebsiteandsubmititonline?

ThankyousomuchfortakingthetimetorespondtomyquestionsaboveandI’mlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.(171)

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件，咨詢英國(guó)一所中學(xué)正在全球范圍內(nèi)向高中學(xué)生征集畫作進(jìn)行展出的相關(guān)事項(xiàng)?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累近來(lái)：recently→lately全世界：aroundtheworld→throughouttheworld目的：aim→purpose渴望：beeagerto→beanxiousto2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Sowiththeaimofgettingtoknowsomemorespecificinformation,I’mwritingtheletter.轉(zhuǎn)換句：I’mwritingthelettertoknowsomemorespecificinformation.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Recently,IlearnedthroughtheInternetthatyourschooliscollectingpaintingsfromhighschoolstudentsaroundtheworldforexhibition.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Asformycollections,mypaintingcontentsaremoreextensive,soIhavetochoosepaintingsthataremostfitforthethemeofthisactivity.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）7．DearMadamorSir,ThegreatjoyisbeyondexpressionuponlearningthatyouarerecruitingvolunteerstopromoteConfucianism,andI’mwonderingifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmeofrelevantinformationregardingtheevent.Togetmyselffullypreparedandhighlyfunctional,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldinformmeofthespecifictimeandtheplaceofthelong-anticipatedactivity.ConsideringwearegoingtoserveasthepromoterofConfucianism,anotherpointIwouldalsoliketoinquireistherequirementsforeachvolunteer,namelyourknowledgeaboutthemainprinciplesofConfucianismorthelanguagecompetencetocommunicatewithforeigners.Furthermore,whatdeservesmyspecialattentioniswhetherthereisadresscodewhentryingoutfortheprogram.IwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldbesokindastoprovidemewiththeinformationaboveandI’meagerlywaitingforyourfavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.YoursLiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校國(guó)際部寫一封咨詢信，了解關(guān)于招募儒家思想宣傳大使志愿者，在暑期面向外國(guó)友人宣傳中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)的相關(guān)信息，包含了解活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，參選的要求，期待回復(fù)表示感謝?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累關(guān)于：regarding→concerning→about準(zhǔn)備好：prepared→ready充當(dāng)，擔(dān)當(dāng)：serveas→actas此外：furthermore→what’smore2.句式拓展不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)變?yōu)槟康臓钫Z(yǔ)從句作狀語(yǔ)原句：Togetmyselffullypreparedandhighlyfunctional,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldinformmeofthespecifictimeandtheplaceofthelong-anticipatedactivity.拓展句：InorderthatIcangetmyselffullypreparedandhighlyfunctional,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldinformmeofthespecifictimeandtheplaceofthelong-anticipatedactivity.【典型句式】【高分句型1】ThegreatjoyisbeyondexpressionuponlearningthatyouarerecruitingvolunteerstopromoteConfucianism,andI’mwonderingifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmeofrelevantinformationregardingtheevent（運(yùn)用了that和if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句以及it作形式主語(yǔ)，不定式作真正主語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】Furthermore,whatdeservesmyspecialattentioniswhetherthereisadresscodewhentryingoutfortheprogram.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，whether引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句以及省略句）8．DearMissEvans,Iamsorrytotroubleyou,forIwanttogetsomehelpfulsuggestionsfromyou.Recently,IhavefeltIcan’tseethingsasclearlyasbeforethoughIwearglasses,whichworriesmealot.Iguesstherearetwocausesmakingthishappen.Foronething,Iamaddictedtomymobilephonethesedays.SometimesIevenplaygamesonthephoneforalongtime.Foranother,Ilackenoughexercise.Iknowyouhaveexcellenteyesight.Couldyouputforwardsomepracticalproposals?Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanrespondatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)外教MissEvans寫封信，咨詢她如何保護(hù)視力。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累原因：causes→reasons建議：proposal→advice提出：putforward→bringforward回復(fù)：respond→reply2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iguesstherearetwocausesmakingthishappen.拓展句：Iguesstherearetwocauseswhichmakethishappen.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Recently,IhavefeltIcan’tseethingsasclearlyasbeforethoughIwearglasses,whichworriesmealot.（運(yùn)用了though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Iguesstherearetwocausesmakingthishappen.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)）9．IamLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent.IloveEnglishverymuch,andIamwritingtoaskyouforsomehelp.IhavebeenlearningEnglishforaboutsevenyears.Iworkhardatit,andmyteacheralwayspraisesmeformyprogress.However,IamquiteconfusedwhenIreadsomeEnglishjokesinmagazinesornewspapersbecauseldon’tunderstandthem.AlthoughIknowallthewordsinthejokes,Ijustcan’tgetthehumour.Whyisthat?WouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtounderstandEnglishjokes?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英文報(bào)刊的編輯寫一封信，就學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中出現(xiàn)的看不懂英語(yǔ)笑話這一問(wèn)題向編輯咨詢?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累困惑的：confused→puzzled向你求助：askyouforhelp→seekhelpfromyou理解：understand→comprehend建議：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iworkhardatit,andmyteacheralwayspraisesmeformyprogress.拓展句：MyteacheralwayspraisesmeformyprogressasIworkhardatit.【典型句式】【高分句型1】However,IamquiteconfusedwhenIreadsomeEnglishjokesinmagazinesornewspapersbecauseldon’tunderstandthem.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】AlthoughIknowallthewordsinthejokes,Ijustcan’tgetthehumour.（運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）10．DearMr.Li,Havinglearntfromtheinternetthatyouarerecruitingsomevo