高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+成長類+跑步伴侶：Jenny與Bruce的動力之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習跑步伴侶：Jenny與Bruce的動力之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Jennyalwaysadmiredpowerfulandattractivemarathonrunnersanddreamedthatonedayshecouldalsorunamarathon.Tomakeit,oneday,shebegantoseriouslyprepare.Atfirst,sheonlysetthesmallgoalofrunningonekilometereachmorning.However,shestillfoundittiringandsoongaveuprunning.Asdayswenton,herweightgraduallyincreased.Upsetaboutherhealth,shefinallydecidedtoloseweightbydoingexercise.

Shebeganrunningagain.Asusual,inthefollowingdays,herbigproblemwithexercisingwashowtostaymotivated

allthetime.Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.

Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.Shefollowedtheadvice,buthumanexercisecompanionsalwaysletherdown.

Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,“It’smyturntodothedishes”atsixo’clockinthemorning!Shehatedtoadmitit,butshehadmadesimilarexcusestoothersanddisappointedtheminsimilarways.4續(xù)寫原文ThenBruceappearedinJenny’slife,abirthdaygiftfromherhusband,John.Johncouldn’tworkoutwithJennybecausehehadabadback.SothatjobwaslefttoBruce,ayellowdog.Brucewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestined

(注定的)tobearunningpartner.Inthebeginning,BruceandJennyranonlyfiftypacesatatime,eachsetmixedwithonehundredpacesofwalking.“Idon’tlookfoolishstartingthisway,”thoughtJenny,“becauseBruce’sbonesaretooyoungtomakehimrunmuchharder.”Shewasright,andBruce’searlylimitationsgavehertimetostartslowlywithoutfeelingawkward.Afteraboutninemonths,though,BrucewasoldenoughtorunseveralmilesadayandJennywasfitenoughtokeepup.Fromspringtoautumn,theyloggedthemilestogethereveryday.However,aswinterapproachedandtheweathergotcolder,maintaining

adailyrunningroutinerequiredlotsofdedication

(熱忱)anddetermination.AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersand

thatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.5段首句Para1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.

Para2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.

6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章主要講述了渴望跑馬拉松的Jenny在鍛煉時一直苦于保持動力，直到她從丈夫那里收到了一只充滿活力的黃色小狗Bruce做為生日禮物。起初，由于Bruce還很小，他們的訓練進度較為緩慢。但九個月后，他們已經(jīng)能每天共同跑下數(shù)英里。盡管Jenny曾懷疑Bruce能否在嚴冬中保持動力，但他最終證明自己是一位專注且可靠的跑步伙伴，這不僅加深了他們之間的情感，還幫助珍妮實現(xiàn)了健身目標。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“后來發(fā)生的事證明Jenny是錯的”可知，第一段可描寫B(tài)ruce非常可靠，成為Jenny理想的跑步伙伴，Bruce是如何陪伴Jenny跑步的以及他的存在讓Jenny保持動力。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“一個春日早晨，Jenny在Bruce的陪伴下開始了她的首場馬拉松比賽”可知，第二段可描寫Jenny在比賽中的感受——她發(fā)自內(nèi)心地感謝Bruce的陪伴，以及比賽結(jié)束后得到的感悟。11續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材1.turnout證明是；結(jié)果是2.unwavering

adj.

不動搖的；堅定的3.milestone

n.

重要事件；里程碑4.finishline

終點線12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材1.Hisunwaveringdedicationandenthusiasmservedasaconstantreminderofthecommitmentshehadmadetoherself,helpinghermaintainhermotivationeveninthetoughestconditions.（動詞-ing形式短語作狀語）他堅定不移的奉獻精神和熱情時刻提醒著她對自己的承諾，即使在最艱難的條件下，這也能幫助她保持動力。13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材2.Astheycrossedthefinishlinetogether,

Jennycouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepconnectionwithherloyalrunningpartner,whohadnotonlyhelpedherachieveherdreambutalsotaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceanddetermination.（as引導時間狀語從句、who引導限制性定語從句）當他們一起沖過終點線時，Jenny不禁與這位忠實的跑步伙伴產(chǎn)生了深厚的感情，他不僅幫助自己實現(xiàn)了夢想，還讓她懂得了堅持和決心的真正含義。14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.

Bruceturnedouttobethemostreliablerunningpartnershecouldhaveeverhopedfor.Nomatterhowcoldanddarkitwas,hewouldalwayseagerlywaitbyherside,readytostarttheirdailyrunning

together.Hisunwaveringdedicationandenthusiasmservedasaconstantreminderofthecommitmentshehadmadetoherself,helpinghermaintainhermotivationeveninthetoughestconditions.16范文呈現(xiàn)Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.

Theracewaschallenging,butwitheachstepshetook,shefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofaccomplishmentandgratitude.SheknewthatwithoutBruce’sunwaveringsupportandcompanionship,shewouldneverhavebeenabletoachievethisincrediblemilestone.Astheycrossedthefinishlinetogether,Jennycouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepconnectionwithherloyalrunningpartner,whohadnotonlyhelpedherachieveherdreambutalsotaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceanddetermination.17范文譯文后來發(fā)生的事情證明珍妮錯了。事實證明，布魯斯是她所希望的最可靠的跑步伙伴。無論天氣多么寒冷和黑暗，他總是熱切地在她身邊等待，準備開始他們每天的跑步。他堅定不移的奉獻精神和熱情時刻提醒著她對自己的承諾，幫助她即使在最艱難的條件下也能保持動力。一個春天的早晨，珍妮在布魯斯的陪同下開始了