高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)+騎車去森林保護(hù)區(qū)野餐時(shí)車壞了幸好好心人及時(shí)幫助+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)騎車去森林保護(hù)區(qū)野餐時(shí)車壞了，幸好好心人及時(shí)幫助1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文In1995Ibrokemyleftfootonabikeride.Luckily,Icouldstilldrive,soIcontinuedmylifewithcrutches(拐杖).OneSundayIdrovetoapicnicinaforestpreserveanhourfrommyhome,inmycomfortable,butuncertain,whitecar.Thepicnicwasgreat,withgoodfood,goodfriendsandgoodweather.LateintheafternoonIleftthepartyandbeganmydrivehome.ItookthescenicroutethroughWestChicago,asmalltownabout25mileswestofChicagoproper.EverythingcloseddownonSundaythere,soitwashardtofindsomeonedrivingontheroad.4續(xù)寫原文AsIstartedupabridgemycarstartedtomovewithashortsuddenaction.Theproblemwasthatmycar'salternator(交流發(fā)電機(jī))wentwrong,resultinginthecar'sbatterydying.Ithought,notnow,nothere!Finally,thecardied.Irolledbackwardsontoasaferplace,andpulledtheemergencybrake(緊急制動(dòng)).Ofcourseitwasstartingtogetdark.Ihadtogoouttowalk,butwherewouldIgo?Andoncrutches?Howlongbeforeacarwouldcomeby,andwouldtheybekindenoughtostophelp?Itwouldbeveryexpensivetogetmycartotheautomechanicshop(汽車修理店)ofmyhometown.CouldIgohomesafely?5續(xù)寫原文ThenIsawahouserightthereatthebottomofthebridge,withafamilyoutsidehavingapicnicwiththeirfriends!Someofthemwerelookinginmydirection;somewomenwereclearingawaythecompletedpicnicmeal.Ihadgreattroublewalkingwithcrutches,soIgotout,leanedonthecarandwavedonecrutchovermyhead.Theirresponsewasimmediate.ThreepeopleranuptothecartoseewhatIneeded.Itoldthemmystoryandtheytookactionatonce.6段首句Para1：Tomygreatjoy,thefamilyownedanautomechanicshop.Para2：Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以作者去森林保護(hù)區(qū)野餐為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者在負(fù)傷的情況下，驅(qū)車去森林保護(hù)區(qū)野餐，結(jié)果在回來(lái)的路上，車壞了。幸運(yùn)的是，遇到一些熱心人幫助作者脫離困境的故事。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Tomygreatjoy,thefamilyownedanautomechanicshop.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“令我非常高興的是，這家人擁有一家汽車修理店?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫熱心人幫助作者修車，作者表示感激。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“又一次令人難以置信的幸運(yùn)，有人開(kāi)車送我回家?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡叩玫綆椭?，脫離困境后的感悟，要把愛(ài)心傳遞下去。12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材修車——幫助——感謝——回家——傳遞愛(ài)心——感悟13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①.修理：fix/repair②.傳遞：deliver/passon情緒類①.感謝：showingmyappreciation/showmygratitude/begrateful②.開(kāi)心：feelhappy/bejoyful14續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1].IwassogratefulthatIhopedtogivethemsomereward.(運(yùn)用了so…that句型，that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2].Ithoughtitwasthesewarm-heartedpeoplewhohadmademenothavetogohungryandspendthiscoldnightinthewild.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)15Part3范文呈現(xiàn)16范文呈現(xiàn)Tomygreatpleasure,thefamilyownedacarrepairshop.Fortunately,theirrepairshopwasnotfarfromhere.Oneofthemwentbacktogettoolsandhelpedmerepairmycar.Theychangedthebatteryandrestartedthecar.Myworriescompletelydisappeared.IwassogratefulthatIhopedtogivethemsomereward.Buttheysaidtome,“It’sourpleasuretohelppeopleintroubleoutoftrouble.”Theywerereallymytimelyhelp!Becauseitwaslateandtheysawthatitwasnoteasyformetomove,theywereverywillingtocontinuetohelpmeandtakemehome.17范文呈現(xiàn)Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.Ifeltveryhappytobetakencareof,especiallyinthisdifficulttime.Myheartwasfullofgratitudeandincomparablewarmth.Inthecarwetalkedhappilyalltheway.Ithoughtitwasthesewarm-heartedpeoplewhohadmademenothavetogohungryandspendthiscoldnightinthewild.Imustpassonthiskindofloveforhelpingothers.Lettheworldbefullofloveforever.18范文譯文令我非常高興的是，這家人開(kāi)了一家汽車修理店。幸運(yùn)的是，他們的修理廠離這里不遠(yuǎn)。其中一個(gè)人回去拿工具，幫我修車。他們更換了電池并重新啟動(dòng)了汽車。我的擔(dān)憂完全消失了。我非常感激，希望給他們一些獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。但他們對(duì)我說(shuō)：“我們很樂(lè)意幫助有困難的人擺脫困境?！彼麄冋娴氖俏壹皶r(shí)的幫助！因?yàn)闀r(shí)間很晚了，他們看到我搬家不容易，他們非常愿意繼續(xù)幫助我，帶我回家。又是難以置信的幸運(yùn)，我搭便車回家了。我很高興能得到照顧，