初三下冊(cè)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí) 書面表達(dá) 豐富寫作內(nèi)容 課件

豐富寫作內(nèi)容初三下冊(cè)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)clearstructure1情景導(dǎo)入，整體感知goodwritingrichlanguagetightlogicbeautifulhandwritingcorrectgrammarcompletecontent

1情景導(dǎo)入，整體感知goodwritingrichlanguageclearstructurecompletecontent

審體裁、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)列審列提綱，構(gòu)框架擴(kuò)在主題句或支持句后面添加額外的句子，對(duì)文章的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理恰當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充說明，使內(nèi)容更豐富，表達(dá)更精準(zhǔn)。首句加黑是

。雙劃線句子代表

。綠色句子代表

。1情景導(dǎo)入，整體感知主題句支持句擴(kuò)寫句

DearMr.Hunt,MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwithmyfamily.

Relationsbetweenmyparentshavebecomedifficult.

①Theyfightalot,andIreallydon’tlikeit.

②It’stheonlycommunicationtheyhave.

③Idon’tknowifIshouldsayanythingtothemaboutthis.④Whentheyargue,it’slikeabig,blackcloudhangingoverourhome.Also,myelderbrotherisnotverynicetome.

①HealwaysrefusestoletmewatchmyfavoriteTVshow.

②Insteadhewatcheswhateverhewantsuntillateatnight.

③Idon’tthinkthisisfair.AthomeIalwaysfeellonelyandnervous.Isthatnormal?WhatcanIdo?SadandThirteen.例：選自八年級(jí)下冊(cè)u(píng)nit4reading2自主探究，觀察歸納

書面表達(dá)(2020重慶A卷)

國家提出了將勞動(dòng)教育（LaborEducation)納入中小學(xué)國家課程方案。為此，你校校報(bào)英語欄目EnglishWorld就開展勞動(dòng)教育的意義，以及如何在校園內(nèi)開展勞動(dòng)教育，發(fā)起征文。請(qǐng)你以“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinourschool”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。參考信息：1.勞動(dòng)教育的意義（學(xué)習(xí)生活技能，養(yǎng)成良好習(xí)慣......）；2.校內(nèi)勞動(dòng)教育建議（開設(shè)種植課，組織做蛋糕比賽......）;3......要求：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。2自主探究，觀察歸納

書面表達(dá)(2020重慶A卷)

國家提出了將勞動(dòng)教育（LaborEducation)納入中小學(xué)國家課程方案。為此，你校校報(bào)英語欄目EnglishWorld就開展勞動(dòng)教育的意義，以及如何在校園內(nèi)開展勞動(dòng)教育，發(fā)起征文。請(qǐng)你以“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinourschool”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。參考信息：1.勞動(dòng)教育的意義（學(xué)習(xí)生活技能，養(yǎng)成良好習(xí)慣......）；2.校內(nèi)勞動(dòng)教育建議（開設(shè)種植課，組織做蛋糕比賽......）;3......要求：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。列提綱，構(gòu)框架Beginning:ThemeaningofLaborEducationBody:AdviceaboutLaborEducationatschoolEnding:Expresshopeandfeeling1.learnsomelifeskills；2.developgoodhabits；1.offersomeplantingcourses；2.holdcakecompetition；3.setupsomeclubs.Iamlookingforwardtotakethecourse.2自主探究，觀察歸納WhydostudentsneedtohaveLaborEducationatschool?learnsomeusefullifeskillsdevelopgoodhabitsimportantmeaningfuleducationalBeginningvalueeverythingweown2自主探究，觀察歸納

tohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcan,andcanalsohelpus

.teachussomeusefullifeskillsdevelopgoodhabitsItisimportantandeducationalforus擴(kuò)1.勞動(dòng)教育對(duì)我們來是重要且有教育意義的2.因?yàn)樗芙虝?huì)我們一些有用的技巧，還能幫我們培養(yǎng)好的習(xí)慣。Beginning擴(kuò)寫原因2自主探究，觀察歸納CanyougivesomeadviceaboutLaborEducationatschool?holdcakecompetitionoffersomeplantingcoursessetupsomeclubsBody2自主探究，觀察歸納Theschoolcan

toteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.Theschoolcanalso

inordertoseewhoisthebest.Theschoolcan

,suchaspaper-cuttingclubandcookingclub.offersomecoursesholdcakecompetitionsetupsomeclubs擴(kuò)1.學(xué)校能提供一些課程來教我們?nèi)绾巫銮鍧嵑头N植。2.學(xué)校也能舉辦蛋糕比賽來看誰是最棒的。3.學(xué)校能設(shè)立一些俱樂部，例如剪紙和烹飪俱樂部。Body擴(kuò)目的擴(kuò)寫具體表現(xiàn)方法4.我認(rèn)為如此的活動(dòng)將會(huì)讓我們的校園生活更多彩更有意義。Ithinksuchactivitieswillmakeourschoollifemore

.colorfulandmeaningful擴(kuò)寫感受或者想法2自主探究，觀察歸納

takingthecourseinthenewterm.ifso,IbelieveIwilldowellinit.I’mlookingforwardto

擴(kuò)期待新學(xué)期能開設(shè)這些課程。我相信我會(huì)做的很好。Ending擴(kuò)寫條件I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.Ifso,IbelieveIwilldowellinit.It’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.

2自主探究，觀察歸納

Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanoffersomecourses

toteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.Theschoolcanalsoholdcakecompetition

to

seewhoisthebest.Theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchaspaper-cuttingclubandcookingclub.Ithinksuchactivitieswillmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful

ItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcanteachususefullifeskillsandcanalsohelpusformgoodhabits.加黑加粗句子是

。雙劃線句子代表

。綠色句子代表

。主題句支持句擴(kuò)寫句注意：所有支持句都圍繞主題句中心意思展開。所有內(nèi)容拓展部分也為主題句服務(wù)。I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.Ifso,IbelieveIwilldowellinit.ExpresshopeIt’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.

Doyouthinkitisapieceofgoodwriting?2自主探究，觀察歸納Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanoffersomecoursestoteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.Theschoolcanalsoholdcakecompetitionto

seewhoisthebest.Theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchaspaper-cuttingclubandcookingclub.IthinksuchactivitieswillmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningfulItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcanteachususefullifeskillsandcanalsohelpusformgoodhabits.EndingTheadviceaboutLaborEducationThemeaningofLaborEducation

BeginningBodyBodyclearstructurecompletecontentrichlanguagetightlogiccorrectgrammarbeautifulhandwrting2自主探究，觀察歸納goodwritingrichlanguageclearstructurecompletecontent

審體裁、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)列審列提綱，構(gòu)框架擴(kuò)tightlogicAtightlogiccanmakereadershaveabetterunderstandingofthewriting.連2自主探究，觀察歸納Howcanwehaveatightlogic?linkingwords

連接詞transitionalsentences

過渡句

Theschoolcanoffersomecoursestoteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.Theschoolcanalsoholdcakecompetitiontoseewhoisthebest.Theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchaspaper-cuttingclubandcookingclub.

2自主探究，觀察歸納Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.為啟下過渡句，也是本段的主題句。1.段落間的過渡句

2自主探究，觀察歸納WearecertaintoknowmoreabouttheworldbyexperiencingLaborEducation.I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.為啟上過渡句，也是對(duì)全文的總結(jié)，用不同的表達(dá)方式再次點(diǎn)題。1.段落間的過渡句

ItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcanteachususefullifeskillsandcanalsohelpusformgoodhabits.2自主探究，觀察歸納通過使用從句、銜接詞等，將原本孤立的簡(jiǎn)單句進(jìn)行邏輯連接。2.句子間的過渡句

ThereisnodoubtitisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcannotonlyteachususefullifeskills,butalsocanhelpusformgoodhabits.2自主探究，觀察歸納▲常用觀點(diǎn)類過渡句：1.Recentlywehavehadadiscussionabout...2.Everycoinhastwosides.Ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.3.Inmyview/opinion,...4.Isupposethat.../Iagreethat+句子/Iagreewith.../Idisagreewith...5.It’smyfeelingthatattitudeismoreimportantthanability.6.FromwhereIstand,...7.Istronglybelievethat...8.AsfarasIamconcerned,...9.Tobehonest/Totellthetruth,...2自主探究，觀察歸納linkingwords連接詞順序：first,then,next,finally轉(zhuǎn)折：but,however,instead遞進(jìn)：what’smore,besides,inaddition,notonly...butalso并列：aswellas,both…and…因果：because,as,so,therefore對(duì)比：while,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand總結(jié)：inaword,inbrief,inshort

linkingwordscanmakethepassageclearer.2自主探究，觀察歸納IlikeGuAilin.Sheisahard-workingandtalentedathlete.IlikeGuAilin,_______sheisahard-workingandtalentedathlete.becauseMakesentenceswithlinkingwords.2自主探究，觀察歸納

Although_________sheisveryyoung,shehaswonmanyprizes.Makesentenceswithlinkingwords.2自主探究，觀察歸納

soShedid___wellinBeijing2022WinterOlympics____everyonewassurprised.thatMakesentenceswithlinkingwords.2自主探究，觀察歸納

It’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.ItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcan

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,Theschoolcanoffersomecoursestoteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.

,Theschoolcanalsoholdcakecompetitiontoseewhoisthebest.

,Theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchaspaper-cuttingclubandcookingclub.Ithinksuchactivitiescanmakeourschoollifecolorfulandmeaningful.WearecertaintoknowmoreabouttheworldbyexperiencingLaborEducation.I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm,Ifso,IbelieveIwilldowellinitFillintheblankswithsuitablelinkingwords.notonlybutalsoFirstlySecondlyFinally2自主探究，觀察歸納

It’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.ItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Itcannotonlyteachususefullifeskills,butalsocanhelpusformgoodhabits.

Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Firstly,Theschoolcanoffersomecoursestoteachushowtodocleaningandgrowplants.Secondly,Theschoolcanalsoholdcakecompetitiontoseewhoisthebest.Finally,Theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,

WearecertaintoknowmoreabouttheworldbyexperiencingLaborEducation.I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewtermIfso,

IbelieveIwilldowellinit.clearstructurecompletecontenttightlogicrichlanguagecorrectgrammarbeautifulhandwrting3綜合運(yùn)用，實(shí)踐練兵Asweallknow,it’sveryimportantforustogetonwellwithothers.Ifyoucandothat,youwillhavemanyfriends.Howcanwegetalongwellwithothers?HereIhavesomesuggestions.

,sharingisveryimportant.Weca