新高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)練習(xí)考向51 應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之祝賀信和報(bào)道類寫(xiě)作(原卷版)

考向51應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之祝賀信和報(bào)道類寫(xiě)作祝賀信【寫(xiě)作示例】假定你是李華,得知你的外國(guó)筆友Peter獲得了“漢語(yǔ)橋”中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲,并給他寫(xiě)一封祝賀信,要點(diǎn)如下:1.天天練習(xí)講漢語(yǔ),從不會(huì)到流利,終于成功;2.繼續(xù)努力,有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)中國(guó)留學(xué);3.希望見(jiàn)面和交流。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:“漢語(yǔ)橋”中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest【考場(chǎng)審題】Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);一般過(guò)去時(shí)段落布局:開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題:表達(dá)祝賀主體段落:成功的原因并進(jìn)行鼓勵(lì)結(jié)尾:再次表達(dá)祝賀Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:expressmycongratulations,opportunity,communicate(2)佳句:①Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.②GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō):“成功屬于有準(zhǔn)備的人”。一般表達(dá):Thereisasayinggoinglikethis,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句)Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.

要點(diǎn)2:如果你繼續(xù)努力學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ),你就會(huì)有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá):IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.句式升級(jí)(分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ))GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.

Step4:銜接過(guò)渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewithyou.Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHua報(bào)道類【寫(xiě)作示例】假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5千米越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道,內(nèi)容包括:1.參加人員;2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下;3.活動(dòng)反響。注意:1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace【考場(chǎng)審題】Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱we時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)段落布局開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題:點(diǎn)明越野賽的時(shí)間、參與人員和目的主體段落:越野賽的過(guò)程結(jié)尾:表達(dá)參加越野賽的收獲Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:inspiresb.todosth.,ontheway,fallbehind,keeprunning,buildup,beofgreatimportance(2)佳句:①ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.②Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:參賽者是我們高三全體學(xué)生。一般表達(dá):AllthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinit.

句式升級(jí)(強(qiáng)調(diào)句式,高級(jí)詞匯)ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.

要點(diǎn)2:我們不僅意識(shí)到了鍛煉身體很重要,還對(duì)“堅(jiān)持就是勝利”體會(huì)更深了。一般表達(dá):Wehaverealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,andwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

句式升級(jí)(倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

Step4:銜接過(guò)渡斐然成篇【參考范文】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSunday,ourschoolheldafive-kilometercross-countryrunningrace.ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.At7a.m.wesetoffattheschoolgate.AndthenweranallthewaytothefootofSouthHill.Ontheway,althoughsomestudentsfellbehind,theykeptrunninguntilthefinishingline.Fromthisactivity,notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.【檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練】1．假如你是李華，得知美國(guó)好友Eric已成功申請(qǐng)耶魯大學(xué)（YaleUniversity），現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)封電子郵件向他表示祝賀，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.成功的祝賀；2.努力的肯定；3.未來(lái)的祝愿。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，你觀看了英國(guó)好朋友Leslie參加的學(xué)校演講比賽直播，他的演講“SuccesscomesfromHardWork”獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封祝賀信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀。2.評(píng)論及贊賞。3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李華，你的堂兄李國(guó)強(qiáng)在美國(guó)留學(xué)，后來(lái)去蘋(píng)果公司實(shí)習(xí)，最后婉拒公司的挽留，決定去華為技術(shù)有限公司（HuaweiTechnologiesCo.LTD）就職。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給他寫(xiě)封郵件表示祝賀。1.祝賀他學(xué)成回國(guó)；2.華為在信息與通信技術(shù)（ICT）領(lǐng)域的地位；3.你的感想。Dearcousin,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Lihua4．你校的體育節(jié)剛剛結(jié)束。請(qǐng)給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，報(bào)道體育節(jié)的主要活動(dòng)、精彩瞬間及意義。注意1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以通當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文連貫；3.報(bào)道的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:開(kāi)幕式openingceremony項(xiàng)目item______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者李華，上周日，你和班里的同學(xué)去參觀了杭州科技館，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一則新聞報(bào)道報(bào)道,內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容(至少兩項(xiàng)）；2.簡(jiǎn)短評(píng)論。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________