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閱讀下面的材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglasinhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadolikeaquilt.
"Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!"Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow."Iamsorry,"Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains."Notagain!"Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds."Wegottago!"
Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedaredscarfaroundherhair,"Let'sgobacktothecampsite."Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.
"It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!"Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm'sstrengthincreasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.Itwasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain.
"Cassie,overhere!"Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.
Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseetheshelter.Itwasn'tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing.
"Smartthinking,Laura,"Cassiesaid,herteethchattering(withcoldasshepressedherbackpackclosetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof1model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidtheyknow,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.
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"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:這篇文章講述了Laura和Cassie在一片花海中探險時遭遇突如其來的暴風雨。Laura聽到尖叫聲,誤以為Cassie遇到危險,卻發(fā)現(xiàn)Cassie正在專注于攝影。隨著霧氣和雨水的逼近,兩人意識到必須盡快返回營地。在逃跑的過程中,他們遇到了困難,道路變得滑膩,視線也變得模糊。最終,Laura發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個可以避雨的小洞穴,兩人暫時躲避了暴風雨。幾處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應:1.Cassie專注于攝影,沒有注意到天氣變化,這為她們需要迅速逃離埋下了伏筆。2.Laura提到“Notagain!”,暗示這不是她們第一次遇到這種情況,增加了故事的緊張感。3.Cassie的防水背包被提及,預示著這個背包將在后續(xù)的故事中發(fā)揮重要作用。續(xù)寫要點(分兩段):第一段:Laura建議Cassie檢查她的背包,因為里面可能有緊急情況下需要的物資。Cassie按照Laura的指示行動,并找到了一些有用的物品。第二段:隨著夜幕降臨,暴風雨開始減弱。兩人在洞穴中度過了艱難的一夜,但最終安全無恙,并對這次經(jīng)歷有了更深的理解和感悟。感情線:Laura和Cassie之間的表姐妹關系在這次冒險中得到了加深,她們互相依賴,共同面對困難。故事線:故事從兩人在花海中的探險開始,經(jīng)歷了突如其來的暴風雨,到找到避難所,最后安全度過難關。主旨升華句(5句英文):1."Inthefaceofadversity,it'sthebondsoffamilythatkeepusstrong."2."Sometimes,themostunexpectedmomentscanteachusthemostvaluablelessons."3."Nature'sbeautycanbeasfleetingasitispowerful."4."Preparednesscanmakeallthedifferencewhentheunexpectedstrikes."5."Thetruetestofcharacterisnothowwefacecalmseas,buthowwenavigatethestorm."參考范文:范文一:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Cassiequicklyunzippedthemaincompartmentandrummagedthroughthecontents.Tohersurprise,shefoundasmallfirst-aidkit,aflashlight,andacompactemergencyblanket."Dadalwayssaidthispackwouldsaveourlivesoneday,"shemuttered,amixofreliefandgratitudefloodinghervoice.Theyusedtheblankettodryoffandtheflashlighttocheckforanyinjuriesfromtheirscrambletosafety.Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thesistershuddledtogether,theirbodiesprovidingwarmthagainstthecold.Thehowlingwindoutsidethecavehadlessened,andtherainhadturnedintoasoftpatter.Theytalkedabouttheirclosecall,andhowtheywouldnevertakethebeautyanddangerofnatureforgrantedagain.Astheydriftedofftosleep,theyknewthatthisadventurewouldbeastorytheywouldshareforyearstocome,atestamenttotheirbondandtheirsurvival.范文二:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Cassienodded,herhandsshakingslightlyassheunzippedthewaterproofbackpack.Toheramazement,shefoundasmallbutsturdytent,acoupleofenergybars,andamulti-tool."Dad'salwaysright,"shewhispered,asmilebreakingthroughhershivering.Theysetupthetentinsidethecave,creatingacozysanctuaryamidstthechaosoutside.Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thecavewasdark,butthesoundoftherainhadsoftenedtoagentlepatter.LauraandCassiesatinthetent,sharingtheenergybarsandsippingwaterfromtheirbottles.Theytalkedabouttheirfears,theirhopes,andtheirloveforadventure.Thestormhadbroughtthemcloser,teachingthemthateveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysaglimmeroflight.Astheylaydowntorest,theyknewthattheyhadnotonlysurvivedthestormbuthadgrownstrongertogether.
Onepossibleversion:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful."Wemighthavesomethingthatcanhelpusstartafire."Cassienodded,herfingerstremblingassheunzippedthesidepocketofherbackpack.Shewasrelievedtofindaflashlight,acompactemergencyblanketandasmall,waterproofpouchcontainingwaterproofmatches."Bingo!"sheexclaimed,hervoicefilledwithamixofsurpriseandrelief.Theyquicklysettowork,usingthewaterproofmatchestoigniteasmallfirewiththedryleavesandtwigsLaurahadcollected.Thesurvivalblanketwasspreadout,providingathinlayerofinsulationagainstthecold,dampground.
Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thegirls,exhaustedbutdetermined,decidedtomakeamove.Theyknewthetrailwouldberiskyinthedark,bu
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