讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+打破隔閡溫暖鄰里+講義 高一下學(xué)期4月期中聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Myfamilyhadonlyrecentlymovedintoanewneighborhood.Allofmyneighborshavebeenveryfriendlyandhelpfulsincewemovedin.However,MrsDavis,anelderlyladylivinginthelasthouseontheothersideoftheroad,escapedassociatingwithus,oranyoneelse.WhenIaskedaroundtheneighborhoodwhy,theywarnedmenottogoafterherbecausetheythoughtshewasinsane(精神失常的)andpreferredstayingaloneafterlosingherhusbandandonlydaughterinanaircraftcrash.Afterthat,shestayedisolated(孤立的)fromalltheneighbors,refusingallthecareandhelp.Ioftensawheronthestreetsduringtheevening,butshewasalwaysbyherself.SheappearedweakandIalwayswantedtohelpher,butafterhearingwhatmyneighborshadsaidabouther,Iwasn’tsurewhetherIshould.Oneday,whenIwasonmywaytothesupermarket,ourpathscrossed.Iwaswalkingpastherandoverheardhersingingatune.Itimmediatelydrewmyattentionbecausemyparentsusedtosingthesamesongwithme.Ibegantosingalongwithher,andshesmiledatmeforthefirsttime.ButwhenIsmiledback,shequicklyhurriedherpaceandwenthome.Sheseemedverydifferenttomethatday.Irefusedtotrustmyneighbors’claimsthatshehadcutherselfofffromtherestofsocietybecauseshewasinsane,sothenextday,Iknockedonherdoor.MrsDaviswashome,andinsteadoflettingmein,shejustlookedatmesilentlythroughthewindow.Inoticedherstaringatmeandwasabouttowalktothewindowwhenshequicklyclosedthecurtains.Thenextday,Irevisitedherhouse.“Hello,Ibroughtyousomething,”Icalledouttoher.“It’stherecordofthemusicyouweresingingyesterday.”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意作者一家新搬到一個(gè)街區(qū)，鄰居們都很友好，但戴維斯夫人在飛機(jī)失事中失去丈夫和女兒后，變得孤立，鄰居們認(rèn)為她精神失常且不愿與人交往。作者?？吹剿?dú)自行走，一次偶然聽(tīng)到她唱自己父母常唱的歌，便想接近她。作者第一次敲門(mén)時(shí)她只透過(guò)窗戶默默看，第二次去送她唱的歌的唱片。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)（一）伏筆戴維斯夫人的孤立：她在失去家人后與鄰居隔絕，為后續(xù)故事發(fā)展中作者努力打破這種孤立狀態(tài)做鋪墊，續(xù)寫(xiě)需圍繞作者如何進(jìn)一步走進(jìn)她的生活展開(kāi)。作者的好奇與善意：作者聽(tīng)到鄰居對(duì)戴維斯夫人的評(píng)價(jià)后仍想幫助她，且因歌曲產(chǎn)生共鳴，這推動(dòng)了情節(jié)發(fā)展，續(xù)寫(xiě)要體現(xiàn)作者的善意如何影響戴維斯夫人。戴維斯夫人的反應(yīng)：她對(duì)作者的微笑后又匆忙離開(kāi)，以及看到作者敲門(mén)時(shí)的沉默和關(guān)窗簾，表明她內(nèi)心的矛盾和對(duì)他人接近的復(fù)雜態(tài)度，在續(xù)寫(xiě)中她的態(tài)度可能會(huì)有所轉(zhuǎn)變。（二）續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)第一段：描述戴維斯夫人看到作者帶著唱片來(lái)時(shí)的驚訝及后續(xù)反應(yīng)，可能包括她逐漸放下戒備，與作者有初步的交流等，回應(yīng)作者的善意和努力。第二段：寫(xiě)幾天后有人按作者家門(mén)鈴，猜測(cè)是戴維斯夫人并描述見(jiàn)面場(chǎng)景及兩人關(guān)系的進(jìn)一步發(fā)展，體現(xiàn)故事的溫暖結(jié)局和鄰里關(guān)系的改善。三、續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（一）第一段戴維斯夫人驚訝的表情和可能說(shuō)的話，如對(duì)作者到來(lái)的疑問(wèn)或?qū)Τ暮闷?。作者的解釋和友好的態(tài)度，試圖緩解她的緊張和戒備。他們之間可能的簡(jiǎn)短交流，以及戴維斯夫人對(duì)作者態(tài)度的初步轉(zhuǎn)變，比如邀請(qǐng)作者進(jìn)屋或至少開(kāi)始愿意交談。（二）第二段作者開(kāi)門(mén)看到戴維斯夫人時(shí)的驚喜，以及戴維斯夫人的狀態(tài)和她來(lái)的目的描述。兩人可能的互動(dòng)和對(duì)話，體現(xiàn)關(guān)系的進(jìn)一步融洽，如戴維斯夫人表達(dá)感謝或分享一些感受。對(duì)鄰里關(guān)系改善的展望，以及作者內(nèi)心的感受，強(qiáng)調(diào)溫暖和友好在鄰里間的傳遞。四、故事線以作者一家搬到新街區(qū)為背景，聚焦作者與戴維斯夫人的接觸過(guò)程，從作者對(duì)戴維斯夫人的好奇和善意，到兩次主動(dòng)接近，再到可能的關(guān)系改善，故事線圍繞打破鄰里隔閡展開(kāi)。五、情感線作者從最初的好奇、猶豫到堅(jiān)定的善意，戴維斯夫人從戒備、矛盾到可能的逐漸接受，情感線體現(xiàn)了人與人之間從陌生到建立聯(lián)系的變化，充滿溫暖與希望。六、主旨升華句（5句英文）Compassionandperseverancecanbreakdownthewallsoflonelinessandbuildbridgesofconnectioninacommunity.

（同情和堅(jiān)持可以打破孤獨(dú)的墻壁，在社區(qū)中建立聯(lián)系的橋梁。）Smallactsofkindnesscanopentheheartsofthosewhohavebeenclosedoff,leadingtobeautifulfriendshipsandasenseofbelonging.

（小小的善舉可以打開(kāi)那些封閉心靈的大門(mén)，帶來(lái)美好的友誼和歸屬感。）Inaneighborhood,understandingandreachingoutcantransformastrangerintoafriend,fillingourliveswithwarmthandlove.

（在一個(gè)街區(qū)里，理解和主動(dòng)接觸可以將一個(gè)陌生人變成朋友，讓我們的生活充滿溫暖和愛(ài)。）Eveninthefaceoflossandisolation,thepowerofhumanconnectioncanhealandbringbackthelightofhopeandfriendship.

（即使面對(duì)失去和孤立，人與人之間的聯(lián)系的力量可以治愈并帶回希望和友誼的光芒。）Asimplegestureofkindnesscanstartachainreactionofpositivechange,makinganeighborhoodamoreharmoniousandcaringplace.

（一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善意姿態(tài)可以引發(fā)積極變化的連鎖反應(yīng)，使一個(gè)街區(qū)成為一個(gè)更和諧和關(guān)愛(ài)的地方。）七、寫(xiě)作示范（一）ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”sheaskedhesitantly.Ihelduptherecordandsaidwithasmile,“Ithoughtyoumightlikethis.Youseemedtoenjoysingingthatsong.”Shestaredattherecordforamoment,thenasmallsmiletuggedatthecornersofhermouth.“Comein,”shesaidsoftly.Iwalkedintoherhouse,whichwassimplebutclean.Wesatdownandstartedtalkingaboutthesong.Shetoldmeitwasherhusbandanddaughter’sfavoritesong.Aswetalked,Icouldseethepaininhereyes,butalsoaglimmerofgratitudeformycompany.Thatday,wespentapleasantafternoontogether,andIcouldfeeltheicebetweenusstartingtomelt.Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse.IopenedthedoorandwasdelightedtoseeMrsDavisstandingtherewithaplateofcookies.“Thankyoufortherecordandforbeingsokind,”shesaid.Iinvitedherinandwesatinthelivingroom,chattinglikeoldfriends.Fromthenon,MrsDavisgraduallyopeneduptotheneighborhood.Shestartedattendingcommunityeventsandbecameapartofourlives.Oursimpleactofkindnesshadnotonlychangedherlifebutalsomadeourneighborhoodamoreinclusiveandwarmplace.Welearnedthatsometimes,allittakesisalittlepatienceandunderstandingtobringpeopletogetherandcreatebeautifulmemoriesinacommunity.（二）ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.Sheseemedabitflusteredbutdidn'tclosethedoorthistime.“Ibroughtyouthis,”Isaid,handinghertherecord.Shetookitslowly,herfingersbrushingagainstminebriefly.“Thankyou,”shemurmured.Itooktheopportunitytosay,“Ijustwantedtosharesomethingyoulike.Iunderstandyoumightlikeyoursolitude,butIalsothoughtitwouldbenicetohaveachatsometimes.”Shenoddedslightlyandinvitedmein.Herhousewasfilledwitholdmemoriesandphotos.Wesatdownandshestartedtalkingaboutherpast,hervoicefilledwithbothsadnessandnostalgia.AsIlistened,Irealizedhowmuchsheneededsomeonetolisten.Thatday,aconnectionwasmade,andIcouldseeachangeinherdemeanor.Severaldayslaterinthemorning,thedoorbellrangatmyhouse.IopenedittofindMrsDaviswithabouquetofflowers.“Theseareforyou,”shesaidwithashysmile.Wetalkedforawhile,andshetoldmeshehadstartedtofeelmoreateasewiththeneighborhood.Overtime,shebecamemoreinvolvedwiththecommunity.Ourinteractionhadnotonlybroughtheroutofherisolationbutalsostrengthenedthebondamongtheneighbors.Itshowedthatasmallgestureofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpact,andthatinaneighborhood,wecansupportandunderstandeachother,creatingamoreharmoniousandfriendlyenvironmentwhereeveryonefeelsincludedandcaredfor.參考范文：ThedooropenedandMrsDavis’eyeswidenedinsurpriseatthesightofmestandingthere.Iheldouttherecord,“Ithoughtyoumightenjoythis.”MrsDavisslowlytookitfrommyhands,staringatit.Foramoment,sheseemedlostinmemories.“Thankyou,”shewhispered.ThenIwasinvitedintoherhouse,feelingasenseofconnectionblossomingbe