讀后續(xù)寫+二手自行車?yán)锏纳畛粮笎郏簭氖渲廖驉?講義-浙江省麗水市五校高中發(fā)展共同體 高二上學(xué)期11月期中考試英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Tedpressedhisnoseagainstthestorewindowthatstoodbetweenhimandametallic-blue21-speedracer.“Lookatthatbike,Sam!Iwantthatbike!”“GetawayfromtherebeforeMr.Huanmakesyoucleanthedrool(口水)

fromhisstorewindow!”

HisfriendSamlaughedandpulledTedaway.“Well,mybirthday’stomorrow,andI’vebeendroppingalotofhintsathome,liketheadsandpicturesofthebike.I’vejustgottohaveitsoIcangoanywhereIwant!”“Yourdad’soutofwork,”Samsaidquietly,“andIbetthatbike’sawfullyexpensive.Butdon’tbesad,youcanridemybikearoundthelakeifyouwant.”Teddidn’tanswer.“Yeah,”hethought,“butyouonlyturn13once.MomandDadalwayspromisedmesomethingspecialwhenIbecameateenager.”Hejumpedonahydrant

(消防栓)andbalancedamomentbeforejumpingdownagain.“He’llfindajobsoon.”Whenhegothome,hisparentswereinthekitchentalking.Tedhuggedthemandwenttothelivingroom.Floppingdownonthecouch,hedugbetweenthecushionsfortheremote.AsheflippedthroughTVstations,hecaughtsnatches(片段)ofhisparents’conversation.Therewerewordslike“overqualified”and“mortgage”andsomethingaboutunemploymentchecks.Tedfeltupsetandturnedthevolumehigher.Thenextmorning,Ted’sfatherwokehim.“Hey,Son,Momhadtogotoworkearly,soI’llbemakingyourbirthdaybreakfast.Doyouwantanythingspecial?Maybesomethingwithwheels?”Tedwassuddenlywideawake.Hethrewbackthecoversandbounded(蹦著跑)intothekitchen.There,wrappedinnewspaperandtiedwithacrookedbow,wasabicycle-shapedpackage.“Dad!”Tedtorethroughthenewspaper,andthensuddenlystoppedandstared.Therestoodnottheshinyracingbikebutasecondhand10-speed.Thechromehadbeenshinedup,andtheframewasfreshlypainted,butitwasnotnew.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.______________________________________Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.____________________________文章大意：Ted看到商店里一輛心儀的金屬藍(lán)色21速賽車，渴望在生日時(shí)得到它，盡管他知道父親失業(yè)了。生日當(dāng)天，父親送給他一輛二手10速自行車，并非他期待的賽車。伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：提到Ted父親失業(yè)，暗示家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況不佳，為后文父親送二手自行車而非Ted心儀的昂貴賽車做鋪墊，續(xù)寫中Ted意識(shí)到父母的困境從而理解這份禮物。伏筆：Sam提醒Ted父親失業(yè)且自行車昂貴，讓Ted雖有期待但也有心理準(zhǔn)備，續(xù)寫中Ted因Sam的話而反思自己的行為。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：描述Ted看到二手自行車時(shí)的失落心情，可提及他對(duì)自行車外觀、性能與心儀賽車差距的感受。第二段：講述Ted內(nèi)心的轉(zhuǎn)變，意識(shí)到父母的愛與付出，以及自己不應(yīng)只看重物質(zhì)。情感線：起初是看到二手自行車的極度失望，隨后因回憶起家庭狀況和他人的善意而產(chǎn)生愧疚，最后轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閷?duì)父母的感激與理解。故事線：Ted生日得到非理想的自行車而失落，回憶家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困境和朋友話語(yǔ)后，理解父母的愛，接受自行車并感恩。主旨升華句：Loveisnotmeasuredbythepriceofagift,butbytheheartandeffortbehindit.（愛不是由禮物的價(jià)格衡量，而是由背后的心意與努力決定。）Truegratitudeliesinunderstandingthevalueofwhatwehave,ratherthanlongingforwhatwedon't.（真正的感恩在于理解我們所擁有的價(jià)值，而非渴望我們所沒有的。）Inthefaceofmaterialdesires,familyloveistheanchorthatholdsusbacktorealityandmakesusseetheessence.（面對(duì)物質(zhì)欲望，家庭之愛是將我們拉回現(xiàn)實(shí)并讓我們看到本質(zhì)的錨。）Sometimes,themostpreciouspresentsarewrappedinsimplicityandtiedwiththeribbonofsacrifice.（有時(shí)，最珍貴的禮物包裹在質(zhì)樸之中，系著犧牲的絲帶。）Aheartfilledwithappreciationcanturnanordinarygiftintoasymbolofextraordinarylove.（一顆充滿感激的心能將一份普通禮物變成非凡愛的象征。）寫作示范一：Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Ted'seyesdimmedashesurveyedtheoldbike.Thefadedpaintandsimpledesignwereafarcryfromthesleekracerhehadfantasizedabout.Hefeltalumpinhisthroat,tryinghardnottoshowhisdissatisfaction.Buthisdisappointmentwaspalpable.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Herememberedhisfather'ssleeplessnightsworryingaboutfinances.Hethoughtofhowhismotherworkedextrahours.AndSam'soffertosharehisbikeflashedthroughhismind.Tedunderstoodthatthisbikewasatestamenttohisparents'loveintoughtimes.Hewalkedovertohisfatherandhuggedhimtightly.“Dad,it'sthebestbirthdaypresentever.Iloveit.”寫作示范二：Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Tedstaredblanklyatthesecondhand10-speed,hisdreamsofspeedingaroundontheshinynewracershattered.Thebikeseemedsoordinary,andhecouldn'tmusterasmile.Hewassilent,hismindfilledwiththeimageoftheperfectbikeinthestorewindow.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Herealizedthathisparentsweredoingtheirbestdespitetheirhardships.Theloveandcaretheyhadputintorefurbishingthisoldbikewerepriceless.HerecalledSam'sselflessfriendship.Ted'sheartsoftened.Helookedathisfatherwithawarmsmile.“Thankyou,Dad.Thisbikemeansmoretomethananyother.I'msolucky.”參考答案Itwasnotwhathehadhopedfor.Ted'sshouldersslumpedashegazedatthesecondhandbike.Theold-fashionedgearsandtheslightlyworntiresmadeitlooksoinferiortotheonehehadbeenlongingfor.Hefeltawaveofsadnesswashoverhim,andhisexcitementfromearliervanishedcompletely.Suddenly,hewasashamedofhimself.Hethoughtabouthisfather'sproudsmilewhenhepresentedthebike,oblivioustoTed'sinitialdisappointment.Herememberedallthetimeshisparentshadsacrificedforhim.Thebikemightnotbetheflashyracer,b