熱點(diǎn) 07 共享單車(chē) 2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語(yǔ)最具熱度話(huà)題作文（教師版）

熱點(diǎn)07共享單車(chē)共享單車(chē)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話(huà)題是：共享單車(chē)?！绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）假如你是Sam、請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇英文日記。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，描述你今天放學(xué)看到的事情，并表達(dá)自己的想法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.今天放學(xué)，你看到了一個(gè)男士破壞共享單車(chē)的車(chē)鎖。2.當(dāng)他沒(méi)有得逞之后，使勁的踢共享單車(chē)，還把它扔到了路上。3.一個(gè)女孩經(jīng)過(guò)的時(shí)候，把共享單車(chē)扶起來(lái)并把其它共享單車(chē)擺好。4.你對(duì)這段經(jīng)歷的感受……參考詞匯：sharedbike共享單車(chē)，convenient便利的（adj）寫(xiě)作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名：2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整。語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚；4.詞數(shù)80-100（日記的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）March12th,2019TuesdaySunnyWhenIwentbackhomeafterschool,Inoticedthat_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】March12th,2019TuesdaySunnyWhenIwentbackhomeafterschool,Inoticedthatamanwasdestroyingthelockonasharing-bike.Afterhefailed,hekickedthesharing-bikehardandthrewitontheroad.Thenagirlwalkedpast,shepickedthesharing-bikeupandputallsharing-bikesinorder.Inmyopinion,sharing-bikesareconvenient,becausetheyarecheapandenvironmental,andyoucanparkthemeverywhereyouwant.Wearesupposedtousethemcorrectlyandnottodestroythem.Thus,sharing-bikescanbringconveniencetoeveryone.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一片日記。日記中描述了放學(xué)后看到別人破壞共享單車(chē)，其他人把共享單車(chē)擺放好的經(jīng)歷，從而表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文采用的是第三人稱(chēng)，描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情用的是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。句子通順，邏輯性強(qiáng)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：pickup撿起；inorder整齊；inone’sopinion在某人看來(lái)；besupposedtodosth應(yīng)該做某事。句子：WhenIwentbackhomeafterschool,Inoticedthatamanwasdestroyingthelockonasharing-bike句中when引導(dǎo)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；Inmyopinion,sharing-bikesareconvenient,becausetheyarecheepandenvironment,andyoucanparkthemalmosteverywhereyouwant句中because引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語(yǔ)從句。（二）你喜歡騎自行車(chē)嗎?你聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)共享單車(chē)（sharedbikes）嗎?（共享單車(chē),即有需要的人通過(guò)掃描單車(chē)二維碼，就可以租騎的一種共享自行車(chē)。）現(xiàn)在電臺(tái)的"Today"欄目就共享單車(chē)這一話(huà)題,向我們征集稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以Sharedbikes為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文。要點(diǎn)提示:在青島,有許多共享單車(chē),且越來(lái)越受歡迎。原因:1.騎單車(chē)花錢(qián)少,出行方便;2.有更少的污染;3.有益于健康。問(wèn)題:1.到處停放,難以保持城市整潔;2.弄壞單車(chē),甚至偷走或帶回家。要求:1.內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn),并談?wù)勀愕目捶?2.詞數(shù)80-100。Sharedbikes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SharedbikesDoyoulikeridingbikes?Haveyoueverheardofsharedbikes?InQingdao,therearesomanysharedbikes,andtheyarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithpeople.Nowmoreandmorepeopleenjoyridingbikesinsteadofcarstomakeshortjourneysincities.Becauseridingbikesisveryconvenientandcostslessmoney.Itcannotonlykeepthecity'senvironmentclean,butalsocanbegoodforourhealth.Butinourlife,itcausessomeproblemsaswell,forexample,somepeopleputthemeverywhereandmakethecityinamess.Somepeoplebreakthem,andevenstealthemaway.Ithinkifthegovernmenttakesactiontodealwiththeseproblems,ourcitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，表達(dá)如今共享單車(chē)受歡迎的原因以及存在的問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用以及不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ)：bepopularwith，比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)，insteadof，begoodfor，inamess，notonly...butalso...,aswell,forexample。高分句型：Ithinkifthegovernmenttakesactiontodealwiththeseproblems,ourcitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful中Ithink后引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，在賓語(yǔ)從句中，if引導(dǎo)的條件句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，即“主將從現(xiàn)”原則?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如bepopularwith，比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)，insteadof，begoodfor，inamess，notonly...butalso...,aswell,forexample等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（一）共享單車(chē)(bike-sharing)被譽(yù)為中國(guó)現(xiàn)代新四大發(fā)明之一。如今廈門(mén)的大街小巷也隨處可見(jiàn)共享單車(chē)的身影。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車(chē)的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。DevelopmentFirstusedinHolland,1965introducedinChinain2007beenpopularsince2016InstructionscantheQRcode(二維碼)unlockthesmartlockpaythebillOpinionhealthy,...blocking(堵塞)theway,...要求：1.必須包含所提示信息，字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示詞：sharedbikes共享的自行車(chē)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,sharedbikesareseeneverywhere.ItwasfirstusedinHollandin1965.ItwasintroducedinChinain2007andithasbeenpopularsince2016.Howcanweusethesharedbikes?Firstly,weneedtoscantheQRcodeifwewanttousethem.Secondly,whenwegettoourdestination,weshouldunlockthesmartlock.Finally,weneedtopaythebill.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutsharedbikes.Somepeoplebelievethatridingsharedbikesishealthy.Itcanbuildupourbody.However,othersarguesthatitblockstheway.Inmyopinion,itisgoodtoridesharedbikes,becauseitisgoodforourhealth.What’smore,wecanenjoybeautifulscenery.Nevertheless,weshouldusethemproperly.【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格中所給出的內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車(chē)的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要是第一、第三人稱(chēng)。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。（二）共享單車(chē)為人們的出行帶來(lái)了越來(lái)越多的便利，可是人們?cè)谙碛玫臅r(shí)候卻帶來(lái)了一系列的問(wèn)題。比如有人把單車(chē)帶回了老家，有人使用自己的二維碼騙取使用者的錢(qián)財(cái)，有人隨意停放共享單車(chē)，有人甚至將共享單車(chē)扔到溝里，河里……請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)，倡議人們熱愛(ài)公共資源，保護(hù)公共資源，合理使用公共資源，如此，我們的生活才會(huì)因?yàn)楣苍O(shè)施的改善而變得更加美好。請(qǐng)從以下三個(gè)方面去談：1.共享單車(chē)方便了人們的出行，減少污染，有利于環(huán)境的改善。2.列舉人們對(duì)共享單車(chē)的破壞行為。3.合理使用共享單車(chē)，熱愛(ài)公共資源，做一個(gè)文明的深圳人。要求：1.詞數(shù)至少80詞，要包含上述三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，不必字字翻譯。2.所給詞匯僅作參考，不必都用。3.文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：QRCode（二維碼）,publicresources（公共資源）,cheatpeopleoftheirmoney（騙錢(qián)）,environmentallyfriendly（環(huán)保的），low-carbonlife（低碳生活）,civilization（明）,progress（進(jìn)步）DearallRecently,moreandmorecolorfulsharedbikescanbeseeninthestreets.Theyaremakingourtravellinginthecitymuchmoreconvenient.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearallRecently,moreandmorecolorfulsharedbikescanbeseeninthestreets.Theyaremakingourtravellinginthecitymuchmoreconvenient.Peoplecanuseitanytimeandanywhere.Sometimespeopleworksolatethattheydon’thaveacar,sotheycangohomebysharebikes.Therearealsopeoplewhoareusuallybusywithworkanddon’thaveenoughtimetoexercise.Theywillsharebikestogotoworkinsteadofdriving,whichcannotonlyreducethedamageandenvironmentalpollutionbutalsobebeneficialtophysicalandmentalhealth.However,peoplehavebroughtaseriesofproblemswhenenjoyingbicyclesharing.Forexample,someonebroughtthebikebacktohishometown,someoneusedhisownQRcodetocheattheuser'smoney,someoneparkedthebikeatwill,somepeopleeventhrewthebikeintoaditch,ariverandsoon.Ithinkpeopleshouldlovepublicresourcesandprotectthem,notdestroythem.Onlyinthiswayourliveswillbebetterbecauseoftheimprovementofpublicfacilities.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇議論文，主要是針對(duì)共享單車(chē)給人們帶來(lái)的便利以及人們對(duì)共享單車(chē)的一些破壞行為的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，對(duì)帶來(lái)的便利和人們對(duì)其的破壞闡述的比較詳細(xì)，也是本文的重點(diǎn)可以通過(guò)三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要說(shuō)明共享單車(chē)給人們的生活帶來(lái)的便利好處，第二段主要寫(xiě)了人們對(duì)共享單車(chē)所做的一些破壞行為，第三段主要寫(xiě)了一些倡議，提倡人們熱愛(ài)公共資源。文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較緊密，語(yǔ)言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：bebusywith；insteadof；bebeneficialto；aseriesof；forexample；notonly…butalso。句型：so…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；Ithink＋賓語(yǔ)從句。（三）近年來(lái)，以共享單車(chē)為例的共享經(jīng)濟(jì)浪潮向全球席卷而來(lái)。在我國(guó)，共享單車(chē)成為時(shí)下最流行的出行方式。某校九年級(jí)學(xué)生在社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)中就“你眼中的共享單車(chē)”這一話(huà)題展開(kāi)調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āB(tài)度理由贊同1、便利了人們的出行；2、健康、環(huán)保的生活方式；反對(duì)1、無(wú)序停放妨礙交通；2、個(gè)別人惡意破壞單車(chē)；你……注意：(1)文章必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；(2)看法至少兩條。(3)詞數(shù)：80~100；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息；(4)短文開(kāi)頭僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,bikesharingcomesintopeople’slives.Ithasbecomemoreandmorepopular.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,bikesharingcomesintopeople’slives.Ithasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Alargenumberofcolorfulbicyclescanbeseeneverywhereinthestreets.Bike-sharingisahealthywaytogoout.Ridingisagoodexerciseandisgoodforourhealth.Ithelpstoreducetrafficstress.Italsohelpstoprotecttheenvironment.Butithascausedsomeproblems.Somepeoplecan’tusebicyclesproperly.Sometimespeopleparkshared-bikesinpublicplaces,whichbringsdifficultiestocitymanagement.Ihopethatpeopleshouldkeepbicyclesinorderafterridingthem.Weshouldtakegoodcareofbicycles.【詳解】1、題干解讀：題目要求以“你眼中的共享單車(chē)”這一話(huà)題，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇短文，匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果，包括贊同和反對(duì)共享單車(chē)的理由以及你的看法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；描述贊同或反對(duì)共享單車(chē)的理由以及你的看法時(shí)，要詳細(xì)具體，敘述完整，保證條理清晰。（四）如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車(chē)（bike-sharing），它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時(shí)也引發(fā)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示以＂Bike-sharing＂為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Bike-sharingToday,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages.Soit’senjoyedbylotsofpeople.Firstofall,it’sveryconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Also,ithelpstoreducethetrafficpressure.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it’shelpfultopeople’shealth.However,italsobringssomeproblems.Forexample,somepeoplethrowthemawayafterusingbikes.Evensomepeopledamagethem,andsomebikesarestolen.Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldtrytobecivilizedandfollowtherulesofusingbikes.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如asagreener，moreandmorepopular，lotsofpeople，firstofall，becauseof，inthisway，forexample，throwthemaway，inmyopinion，aslongas，takegoodcareof，betterandbetter等。而bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities./itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,等比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)和從句結(jié)構(gòu)It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages./Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。（一）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作．假設(shè)你是"共享小圖"海報(bào)中的BryanLim，經(jīng)過(guò)三個(gè)月的運(yùn)營(yíng)之后，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封電子郵件給ToddBol，談?wù)勀銓?duì)"共享小圖"的感受．內(nèi)容包括：1．簡(jiǎn)單介紹你的身份，并說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信意圖；2．這種圖書(shū)館的好處（兩點(diǎn)）；3．"共享小圖"存在的問(wèn)題及其原因，并詢(xún)問(wèn)建議．作文要求：1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．2．語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右．作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上．DearTodd,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestregards,BryanLim【答案】DearTodd,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.IamBryanLim,adirectoroftheLittleFreeLibraryforourneighborsinSunshineParkCommunity.Knowingthatyourunalittlefreelibraryaswell,Iwouldliketosharemyexperiencewithyou.Ononehand,thiskindoflibraryiscreativeandveryconvenientforpeoplewhoenjoyreading.Moreover,ontheotherhand,notonlycanitbebeneficialtoourneighborsbutalsoitcanbefunctionedmuchmoreeasily.However,everythinghasitsprosandcons.Thelibraryisfree,whichmeansitisfreeforeverybody.Therefore,it'sveryhardforustomonitorwhetherbookscanbereturnedontime.Iamnotsofamiliartodealwiththeproblems.Iurgentlyneedyouradvice.Canyoudomethefavor？Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.BestregardsBryanLim【詳解】作文分析：1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，為一篇書(shū)信，寫(xiě)作應(yīng)該承接上文。題干給出了文章的內(nèi)容，學(xué)生只需要根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行翻譯和擴(kuò)充即可。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文雖然沒(méi)有分段，采用了一段式，但是文章內(nèi)容邏輯清晰。主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行描述，采用了較多的高級(jí)句式。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：aswell；Ononehand；ontheotherhand；Moreover；bebeneficialto；句型：notonly位于句首，采用倒裝；everythinghasitsprosandcons；which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，如but,so,then等。（二）近來(lái)，中國(guó)掀起了一場(chǎng)共享單車(chē)（sharedbikes）熱潮，共享單車(chē)使人們的出行更方便，方式也更環(huán)保。但同時(shí)，隨著共享單車(chē)的流行，越來(lái)越多的問(wèn)題也暴露出來(lái)，某英文報(bào)以"SharedBikes"為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，以及你的看法。提示：1、短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；2、短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3、詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。SharedBikesRecently,ridingsharedbikestoschools,workplacesortogosightseeinghasbecomemoreandmorepopular.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SharedBikesRecently,ridingsharedbikestoschools,workplacesortogosightseeinghasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Ridingsharedbikesprovidesuswithacompletelynewwayofgoingoutside.Itmakesitmuchmoreconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanhelpprotecttheenvironmentbyridingbikes.Insomeways,itcanalsohelpussavemoney.However,thesharedbikesalsoresultinsomeproblemssuchasillegalparking.Somepeopleevenkeepthebikesfortheirown.What’smore,someofthebikesaredamagedonpurposebypeople.Tosolvetheseproblems,Ithinkit’snecessarytomakesomerulesabouthowtousesharedbikes.Everyoneissupposedtofollowtherules.【詳解】題目解讀：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文，根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖可知，文章要包含共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)以及自己的觀點(diǎn)。提示的信息，文章中需要包括，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，體裁是議論文。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文分成三段，第一段介紹共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第二段介紹缺點(diǎn)，最后一段以個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾。觀點(diǎn)明確，條理清晰。文章靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)名詞、不定式以及動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)不單一。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：What'smore；onpurpose；suchas；resultin；besupposedto。句型：不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)Tosolvetheseproblems,Ithinkit’snecessarytomakesomerulesabouthowtousesharedbikes.；it作形式賓語(yǔ)Itmakesitmuchmoreconvenientforpeopletogoout.（三）目前，共享單車(chē)已經(jīng)成為了廣州市民出行必不可少的交通工具，它給人們帶來(lái)便利的同時(shí)也導(dǎo)致了不少問(wèn)題。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部邀請(qǐng)你面向國(guó)際交流生做一個(gè)演講，題目為“SharedBikesinGuangzhou”。請(qǐng)注意演講稿的用詞得體性，且要具有說(shuō)服力。在廣州很受歡迎1.掃二維碼即可使用，很方便；2.鍛煉了身體，也更加環(huán)保；導(dǎo)致的問(wèn)題1.用自行車(chē)時(shí)，不注意愛(ài)惜，如……（請(qǐng)列舉1~2點(diǎn)）；2.亂停放，如……（請(qǐng)列舉1~2點(diǎn)）；請(qǐng)你給共享單車(chē)公司提1~2點(diǎn)建議或你的希望？要求：1.參考詞匯：掃描scan；二維碼theQRcode；2.文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容,并可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80詞以上（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。SharedBikesinGuangzhouHello,everyone,I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutusingsharedbikesinGuangzhou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SharedBikesinGuangzhouHello,everyone,I'mgladtotellyousomethingaboutusingsharedbikesinGuangzhou.ItbecomesmoreandmorepopularinGuangzhou.Wecanseethosebikeseverywhere.Surely,theybringusalotofconveniencewhiletherearealotofproblemsatthesametime.First,it’sconvenienttousethesharedbikes.YoucanusethesharedbikesbyscanningtheQRcode.Second,itnotonlycanhelpusexerciseourbody,butalsoprotectourenvironment.However,therearesomeproblemsaswell.Somepeoplebreakthebikesonpurposeorevenstealthebikes.Somepeopleparkthebikesdisorderly.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldlearnhowtousethesharedbikesproperlysothatitcanmakeourlifeeasierandmakeourcitybetter.【詳解】1、題干解讀：題目要求以“SharedBikesinGuangzhou”寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，文章必須包含表格所給提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用四段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；例文詳細(xì)介紹了共享單車(chē)的利弊處；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強(qiáng)。3、高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：moreandmorepopular；atthesametime；onpurpose；makeourlifeeasier。句型：倒裝句itnotonlycanhelpusbuildourbody,butalsoprotectourenvironment；sothat引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句peopleshouldlearnhowtousethesharedbikesproperlysothatitcanmakeourlifeeasierandourcitybetter。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如moreandmorepopular；atthesametime；onpurpose；makeourlifeeasier等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（四）隨著科技的發(fā)展，共享單車(chē)進(jìn)入人們的生活。請(qǐng)你談?wù)勊侨绾位菁澳愕纳睢?.共享單車(chē)出行非常方便。想出去騎自行車(chē)的時(shí)候，隨時(shí)都可以找到自行車(chē)。2.使用簡(jiǎn)單。只需要下載App，然后掃碼就可以使用它。3.費(fèi)用很低。只需要支付一元錢(qián)每小時(shí)?！螅?.詞數(shù)80左右，可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.