讀后續(xù)寫+暗夜援手：打破鄰里堅冰+講義 高三下學(xué)期4月高考模擬（二模）考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Wehadaniceandlaid-backSaturday.Wetookthekidstotheparkhavingagreattimeduringthedayandweorderedpizzafordinner.AfterIgotthekidsintobed,Iwenttothekitchentogetadrinkformyself.ThatwaswhenIunintendedlylookedoutofthewindowtoourneighbor’shouseacrossthestreet.Tomysurprise,itwascompletelydark.Ourneighborwasanolderwoman,Mrs.Biddle.Shewasthekindofwomanwhokepttoherself.Shelivedinabighousebyherselfandrarelyleftexcepttogogroceryshopping.Hersonwouldvisitfromtimetotime.AlthoughIhadattemptedtogetclosetoher,allmyeffortstobeneighborlytowardherfailed.Itriedtostrikeupconversations,butshewouldcutmeshort.Oftentimes,ifshesawmewalkingtoherhouse,itwasobviousfromtheexpressiononherfacethatshedidn’twanttobebothered.Shewouldhurryinsidetoavoidme.Nowlookingatherhouse,Ithoughtitwasoddthatallherlightswereoff.Mrs.Biddleneverwentoutatnight.Asamatteroffact,shewasanightowllikeme,withherlightsusuallyburningwaypastmidnight.That’swhenithitme:Ihadtogoovertoherhouse.Iknewsomethingmustbewrong.Concernedabouthersafety,Iwalkedacrossthestreetandrangherdoorbellseveraltimes.Therewasnoanswer.Withagrowingdesire,Itriedpeekingthroughherwindow,buthercurtainsweredrawn.IwentbacktoherdoortoringthebellagainwhenIheardsomethingstirinside.“Mrs.Biddle?”Icalledoutloudly.ThenIheardasmallvoice.Icouldn’tmakeoutwhatshewassaying,butIknewitwasMrs.Biddle,andsheneededhelp.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個閑適的周六夜晚，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)對面鄰居家Mrs.Biddle的房子漆黑一片，這很不尋常，因為她通常是個夜貓子且很少外出?！拔摇被叵肫鹬霸噲D與她友好相處卻屢次被拒的經(jīng)歷，但此刻還是出于擔(dān)憂前去查看。敲門無人應(yīng)答后聽到屋內(nèi)有動靜，確定她需要幫助，故事在此處續(xù)寫，講述“我”和丈夫如何救助Mrs.Biddle以及這一事件對彼此關(guān)系產(chǎn)生的積極影響，展現(xiàn)鄰里之間從陌生隔閡到溫暖互助的轉(zhuǎn)變過程，突出關(guān)愛與善意能打破隔閡的主題。故事分析伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：Mrs.Biddle性格孤僻，很少與鄰居交流，對“我”的友好舉動很冷淡。

回應(yīng)：“我”在發(fā)現(xiàn)她房子異常黑暗后，依然不顧之前的冷漠對待，選擇去關(guān)心她，為后續(xù)幫助她的情節(jié)做鋪墊，體現(xiàn)“我”的善良和熱心，同時也為Mrs.Biddle態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變埋下伏筆。伏筆：Mrs.Biddle通常是個夜貓子，夜晚燈光常亮至午夜以后。

回應(yīng)：當(dāng)看到她家漆黑一片時，“我”敏銳地察覺到異常，這成為“我”決定去查看情況的關(guān)鍵原因，推動了故事的發(fā)展，使情節(jié)發(fā)展合情合理。伏筆：“我”之前多次嘗試與Mrs.Biddle親近卻失敗，表明兩人關(guān)系疏遠(yuǎn)。

回應(yīng)：這次意外事件打破了隔閡，讓“我”有機(jī)會真正走進(jìn)她的生活，幫助她，進(jìn)而改變了彼此的關(guān)系，從陌生走向友好，突出了善良和意外事件對人際關(guān)系的影響。伏筆：Mrs.Biddle獨自居住在大房子里，且兒子只是偶爾來看望。

回應(yīng)：這解釋了她為何容易陷入無助的境地，也為“我”作為鄰居的關(guān)心和幫助提供了合理性，同時暗示她可能內(nèi)心孤獨，為后文她態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變和與“我”建立友誼做了鋪墊。伏筆：“我”看到Mrs.Biddle家異常黑暗后內(nèi)心的擔(dān)憂，以及聽到屋內(nèi)微弱聲音的細(xì)節(jié)描寫。

回應(yīng)：促使“我”更加堅定地要幫助她，引發(fā)后續(xù)叫丈夫、叫救護(hù)車等一系列救助行為，強(qiáng)化了故事的緊張感和情感張力，突出了鄰里之間的關(guān)愛之情。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldimmediatelycalled911andwerushedbacktoMrs.Biddle'shouse.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,wemanagedtogetintouchwithherson.Whentheparamedicsarrived,theycarefullycarriedMrs.Biddleoutonastretcher.Weaccompaniedhertothehospitalandstayedwithheruntilhersonarrived.Shewasdiagnosedwithabrokenhipandwasinneedofsurgery.第二段：Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shewasinbetterspiritsandwasverygratefultous.Sheapologizedforherpreviouscoldnessandexplainedthatshehadbeengrievingthelossofherhusbandandhadshutherselfofffromtheworld.Fromthatdayon,Mrs.Biddlebecameadifferentperson.Shewasmoreopenandfriendly,andwedevelopedaclosefriendship.Shewouldofteninviteusoverforteaandsharestoriesaboutherlife.Ouractofkindnesshadnotonlysavedherbutalsotransformedbothourlives.情感線：起初，“我”對Mrs.Biddle因她的冷漠而有些失落，但仍保持友好的初心；發(fā)現(xiàn)她可能遇到危險時，“我”充滿擔(dān)憂并果斷采取行動；救助過程中焦急等待；在醫(yī)院看到她好轉(zhuǎn)后欣慰；之后Mrs.Biddle態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變，我們建立友誼，彼此溫暖，情感從陌生隔閡到關(guān)心、欣慰再到友好親密，體現(xiàn)了善良和幫助能融化人心的主題。故事線：周六晚上，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)Mrs.Biddle家漆黑異常。回憶起之前與Mrs.Biddle交流不暢，關(guān)系生疏。“我”前往查看，敲門無人應(yīng)后聽到屋內(nèi)聲音，確定她需要幫助?！拔摇被丶腋嬷煞颍煞虼螂娫捊芯茸o(hù)車，聯(lián)系其兒子。救護(hù)車送Mrs.Biddle去醫(yī)院，“我”和丈夫陪同。續(xù)寫部分，第二天去醫(yī)院看望，關(guān)系改善。主旨升華句：Asingleactofkindnesscanbreakdownthewallsofindifferenceandbuildbridgesoffriendship.（一個小小的善舉可以打破冷漠的高墻，架起友誼的橋梁。）Inthefaceoflonelinessandisolation,ahelpinghandisthewarmestlightthatcanpenetratethedarkestheart.（在孤獨和孤立面前，一只援助之手是能穿透最黑暗心靈的最溫暖的光。）Sometimes,thepeoplewethinkarethehardesttoreacharetheoneswhoneedourkindnessthemost.（有時，我們認(rèn)為最難接近的人恰恰是最需要我們善意的人。）Trueneighborlinessliesnotinhowclosewelive,butinhowquicklywerespondtoeachother'sneeds.（真正的鄰里關(guān)系不在于住得有多近，而在于我們對彼此需求的回應(yīng)有多快。）Thepowerofkindnessislimitless;ithastheabilitytotransformlivesandcreatebondsthatlastalifetime.（善良的力量是無限的；它有能力改變生活，建立起持續(xù)一生的紐帶。）寫作示范第一篇

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldsprangintoaction,dialing911withoutamoment'sdelay.WedashedbackacrossthestreettoMrs.Biddle'shouse,ourheartspoundingwithworry.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,ItriedtocomfortMrs.Biddlethroughthedoor,assuringherthathelpwasontheway.Whentheparamedicsfinallyarrived,theyskillfullyenteredthehouseandfoundherlyingonthefloor,weakandinpain.Wefollowedtheambulancetothehospital,whereshewasrushedintotheemergencyroom.Hersonwasinformedandwasonhisway.Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shegreeteduswithawarmsmileandtearsinhereyes.Sheexpressedherdeepgratitudeforourkindnessandapologizedforherpastaloofness.Sherevealedthatshehadbeenstrugglingwithgriefandlonelinesssinceherhusband'spassing.Thisincidenthadmadeherrealizetheimportanceofhumanconnection.Fromthenon,ourrelationshipblossomed.Wewouldcheckonherregularly,bringhermeals,andshewouldsharewithusthewisdomofheryears.Ouractofreachingouthadnotonlysavedherlifebutalsoenrichedourown,teachingusthatkindnessisalanguagethatcanhealeventhemostwoundedhearts.第二篇

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldimmediatelygrabbedhisphoneandcalledforemergencyassistance.WehurriedbacktoMrs.Biddle's,ourmindsfilledwithconcern.Aswewaited,wetriedtofindawaytogetinside,fearingtheworst.Whentheambulancearrived,theparamedicsquicklyassessedthesituationandcarefullytransportedMrs.Biddletothehospital.Weaccompaniedher,holdingherhandandofferingwordsofcomfort.Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shelookedmuchbetterandwasvisiblytouchedbyourpresence.Sheopeneduptousaboutherlife,herlosses,andherfears.Welistenedattentively,andinthatmoment,abondwasformed.Shethankedusagainandagain,promisingtobeabetterneighbor.Inthedaysthatfollowed,Mrs.Biddlebecameanimportantpartofourlives.Welearnedthatkindnesshasthepowertobreakdownbarriersandcreatebeautifulrelationships.Itwasalessonwewouldcherishforever,knowingthatasimpleactofcaringcanchangelivesinthemostprofoundways.

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