2025年中考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)講練測(cè)（全國(guó)）第21講 書(shū)面表達(dá)之建議信（練習(xí)）（解析版）

第21講書(shū)面表達(dá)之建議信（模擬精練+真題演練）（2023·湖南永州）最近你的筆友Mike在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫(xiě)郵件向你尋求幫助，請(qǐng)你以李華的身份給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，提出你的一些建議，幫助他解決煩惱。注意：1）文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)人名。2）詞數(shù)：不低于80詞，文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：share,solve,friendly,respect(尊重)DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.First,whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinessswiththem.Theywillhelpyousolvetheproblem.Second,whenyougetalongwithyourfriends,youaresupposedtorespectthem.Third,youshouldbefriendlytopeoplearoundyou.Youcanhelpeachother.Lastbutnotleast,youhavetobehonesttoyourfriends.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏注意事項(xiàng)中“提示信息”的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“很抱歉聽(tīng)到你與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。依照提示詞匯得到的要點(diǎn)——與同學(xué)分享悲傷和快樂(lè)、尊重對(duì)方、友善待人等均要一一闡述。第三步：書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我希望你很快好起來(lái)”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①shareyoursadness分享你的悲傷②befriendlyto對(duì)……友好③Lastbutnotleast最后的但不是最不重要的[高分句型]①whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinesswiththem.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.(賓語(yǔ)從句)2．（2023·陜西咸陽(yáng)）假如你是李華，你的朋友王磊給你發(fā)郵件說(shuō)他最近很不開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語(yǔ)給他回一封電子郵件，給他提一些建議，幫助他盡快擺脫煩惱。問(wèn)題1）家庭作業(yè)多，幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間休息；2）壓力大，經(jīng)常感到緊張。建議1）制訂學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法；2）學(xué)會(huì)放松；3）多與父母、老師或朋友交談。參考詞匯：nervous(緊張的),greatpressure(壓力大),makeaplan,goforawalk,relax…要求：1）參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4）詞數(shù)：不少于50詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.Yousayyouhavetoomuchhomeworkeverydayandhavelittletimetorest.Becauseofgreatpressure,youoftenfeelnervous.Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldmakeaplanforyourstudyandtrytofindyourownwaysofstudying.Second,trytofindtimetorelax,suchaslisteningtolightmusicandgoingforawalk.Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?Theymayhelpyoufeelbetter.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的關(guān)鍵信息，回復(fù)電子郵件給王磊提一些能解決他的煩惱的建議。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)信目的，簡(jiǎn)述王磊的問(wèn)題并引出自己的建議；第二步，分條給出建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①everyday每天②becauseof因?yàn)棰踫uchas例如④helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事[高分句型]①Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.（let祈使句）②Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?（whynotdosth.?固定句式；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）（2023上·陜西延安）青少年在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中難免會(huì)遇到一些困惑。假如你是李華。昨天你收到你的美國(guó)筆友Jim的電子郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他提出的問(wèn)題，給他回一封電子郵件，向他提出合理的建議。DearLiHua,How’severythinggoing?Iamnotgoodthesedays.IhavelotsofhomeworkeverydayandIhavenotimetodowhatIlike.AndIamalittlefat.Iworryaboutmyhealth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Iexpecttoreceiveyourreply.Yours,Jim要求：（1）語(yǔ)句通順，邏輯合理，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；（3）70詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.Yousaythatyouhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavenotimetodowhatyoulike.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourteachers?Ifyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.Also,youcanmakegooduseofyourtime.Youarealsoworriedaboutyourhealth.Ithinkdoingsportscanhelpyoualot.What’smore,youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables.You’dbetternotstayuplate.Itisnormaltohaveproblemsinlife.Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作材料已給出，注意不要遺漏材料中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，先針對(duì)郵件中的第一個(gè)問(wèn)題，作業(yè)很多，沒(méi)有時(shí)間做喜歡的事情給出建議。第二步，再針對(duì)郵件中的第二個(gè)問(wèn)題，身體健康問(wèn)題提出合理的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①makegooduseof充分利用②hadbetternotdo最好不要做某事③stayup熬夜[高分句型]①I(mǎi)fyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）②Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）（2023·浙江湖州）假設(shè)你是李華，以下是你的英國(guó)朋友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)一封郵件。注意：（1）郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；（2）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To:LiHuaFrom:TonyHi,LiHua,Longtimenosee.Ileftmyhometownwithmyparentsandwenttoanewschool.ButIdon’thaveanyfriendsnowsoIfeelupsetthesedays.LifeiskindofboringsoIwanttofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Canyougivemesomeadvice?Hopetogetyourreplysoon.Yours,TonyHiTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.Yousaidyouwenttoanewschoolandwantedtofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Therearesomewaystodealwithyourproblems.First,itisagoodideatomakeaplanforyourdailywork.Ifyouhavesomethingtodo,youwon’thavewildthoughts.Second,youcanjoinsomeclubswhereyoucanmakesomefriends.Ithinkyouwillhavegreatfunthere.Finally,youcanvideowithyourparentsifyoumissthem.Itcouldrelieveyourhomesickness.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文是給建議，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；③提示：根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給出合理的建議，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，用“Tony的當(dāng)前面臨的困境”引出下文；第二步，給出合理的建議；第三步，表達(dá)希望建議有效的美好期許。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dealwith處理②makefriends交朋友[高分句型]①itisagoodideatomakeaplanforyourdailywork.（動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)）②youcanjoinsomeclubswhereyoucanmakesomefriends（定語(yǔ)從句）③youcanvideowithyourparentsifyoumissthem.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）（2023·江蘇常州）假如你是李蕾，剛剛收到一封來(lái)自英國(guó)朋友Sandy的郵件。她在郵件中說(shuō)自己想上一門(mén)藝術(shù)課，但是不知道選什么好，想聽(tīng)聽(tīng)你的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，選擇或自擬1—2門(mén)藝術(shù)課，給出建議并闡述理由，用英語(yǔ)給Sandy回復(fù)一封郵件。SuggestionsReasonspainting/drawinglessons.makeyoucreative…piano/violin/guitarlessonsmakeyourelaxed…dancing/singinglessonshelpyoustayhealthy…要求：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)：100左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiLei【答案】例文DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.Isuggestyouchoosethemusiclessons.Youknow,learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.What’smore,itwillbethemostenjoyabletolistentosomebeautifulsongsafteralongday’sstudy.Itcanmakeyourelaxed.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.AndIthinkitwillhelpyouinothersubjects.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiLei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容給對(duì)方一些建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，提出自己建議的藝術(shù)課以及理由；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①hearfrom收到……的來(lái)信②playtheguitar彈吉他[高分句型]①learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))②Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.(that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考三模）假如你是李華，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中學(xué)的初三學(xué)生，中考將至，她寫(xiě)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)你，如何緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容，用英文給她回復(fù)一封郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：Howtorelieve(緩解)studypressure?listentosomesoftmusicwatchsomeinterestingmoviesaskyourparentsorteachersforhelp……寫(xiě)作要求：1.文中須包含以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能提及本人的真實(shí)姓名、地名和校名；3.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?Inyoure-mail,youaskedhowtorelievestudypressure.Ihavesomeadvicetotellyou.Firstofall,youcanlistentosomesoftmusic.Musiccanmakeyourelaxed.Youcanalsowatchsomeinterestingmovieswhichwillmakeyoufeelhappy.Thenyoucanlearnmuchbetter.Besides,it’sagoodideatoaskyourparentsorteachersforhelpifnecessary.Atlast,exerciseisagoodway,too.EverythingwillbeOK.Ihopethesesuggestionscanbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件，要求就如何減輕學(xué)習(xí)壓力給好友提些建議。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主③提示：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，就好友關(guān)于緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力的問(wèn)題回一封電子郵件，給出一些建議，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容擴(kuò)展。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步聚]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題。第二步，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，給出一些建議，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。第三步，表達(dá)祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②ask...forhelp向……尋求幫助③atlast最后[高分句型]①Youcanalsowatchsomeinterestingmovieswhichwillmakeyoufeelhappy.（which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）②Besides,it’sagoodideatoaskyourparentsorteachersforhelpifnecessary.（it作形式主語(yǔ)）（2023·安徽合肥·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mike作為交換生，將于下個(gè)月來(lái)你校交流學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，向他介紹你們學(xué)校并提出一些旅行建議。要點(diǎn)如下：（1）介紹學(xué)校：課程多樣，活動(dòng)豐富；（2）旅行建議：綠色出行，體驗(yàn)文化……要求：（1）語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；（3）詞數(shù)80—100。DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’llvisitourschoolasanexchangestudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’llvisitourschoolasanexchangestudent.Ourschoolhasmanycourses,suchasEnglish,art,dance,andbasketball.Afterclass,ouractivitiesarealsoverycoulorful.Ilikeplayingbasketball.Ioftenplaywithmyfriendsafterclass.Wealsohavemanyactivitygroups.WecanlearnPaperCuttings,cookandPekingOpera.Ifyouenjoytraveling,Isuggestyougogreen.Youcanrideabikeorwalk.YoucanvisitmuseumsandparkstoexperienceChineseculture.Ihopeyouhaveahappytimehere.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【詳解】①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中對(duì)自己學(xué)校的介紹，并提出一些旅行建議。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山直接介紹自己的學(xué)校。第二步，具體闡述自己的旅行建議。第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“祝福以及盡快見(jiàn)面”的想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①suchas例如②likeplayingbasketball喜歡打籃球③learnPaperCuttings學(xué)剪紙④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①I(mǎi)fyouenjoytraveling,Isuggestyougogreen.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。）②Ihopeyouhaveahappytimehere.（Ihope+賓語(yǔ)從句。）8．（2023·天津河西·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假設(shè)你是戴安娜老師，你的學(xué)生Steve轉(zhuǎn)入另一個(gè)城市的一所高中。Steve給你發(fā)郵件，傾訴他在新學(xué)校的一些煩惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve回一封郵件，提出如下建議。(1)主動(dòng)問(wèn)候同學(xué)，課間和同學(xué)交談；(2)課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；(3)參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)和學(xué)校社團(tuán)(如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、歌詠比賽等)；(4)你希望……參考詞匯：小組討論groupwork

表達(dá)express要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDiana,Ijustcametoanewschool.Imissyouallverymuch.Ifinditdifficulttogetonwellwithmynewclassmates.WhatshouldIdo?Steve※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※DearSteve,Ihavelearnedaboutyourproblems.Ithink____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Diana【答案】例文DearSteve,Ihavelearnedaboutyourproblems.Ithinkifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem.Trytotalkwithyourclassmatesatbreak.Inaddition,youshouldbeactiveingroupworkinclassandbebraveenoughtoexpressyourideas.Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant.Youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeeting,footballgamesandsingingcompetitions.I’msureyouwillsoonbeamongfriends,andIhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimewithyourclassmates.Bestwishes,Diana【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，不能遺漏信息，以第二人稱(chēng)為主。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)所給的中文提示給Steve具體的建議；第二步，表達(dá)自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getonwellwithsb和某人相處融洽②forgettodosth忘記做某事③inaddition此外[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkifyouwanttogetonwellwithyourclassmates,don’tforgettosayhellowhenyoumeetthem.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Beingfriendlyandhelpfulisalsoveryimportant.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）（2023·浙江杭州·統(tǒng)考二模）美國(guó)朋友Sam發(fā)來(lái)的郵件，請(qǐng)閱讀后以電子郵件的形式回復(fù)。要求：①可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容讓行文通順、連貫。②字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。To:LiPingFrom:SamSubject:WhatshouldIdo?DearLiPing,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?I’mstressedoutthesedays.MylastexamresultsdroppedonceagainandIreallydon’tknowhowtoimprovemygrades.What’sworse,myparentsalwayscomparemewithothersandexpecttoomuchfromme.It’sdifficulttogetonwellwiththem.Iamsoupset.WhatshouldIdo?Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply!Yours,Sam____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearSam,I’msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Firstofall,onetestdoesn’tmeananything.Aslongaswecontinuetostudyhard,I’msureyourgradeswillimprove.Ifyouhaveanyproblems,besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.Secondly,youcanfindsometimetohaveagoodtalkwithyourparents.Andtheywillsurelyunderstandyou.Finally,youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanrelaxyourselfbylisteningtomusic,doingrunning,etc.,anddoingsomethingyoulike.Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)郵件中的提到的問(wèn)題給對(duì)方一些建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提到的問(wèn)題具體給出相應(yīng)的建議；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①aslongas只要②intime及時(shí)③listentomusic聽(tīng)音樂(lè)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)fyouhaveanyproblems,besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句)②Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.(賓語(yǔ)從句)（2023·浙江杭州·校聯(lián)考二模）假定你是李平，你的筆友Rose發(fā)來(lái)一封郵件，她計(jì)劃九月份來(lái)杭州觀看第19屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)Rose在電子郵件中的提問(wèn)，給她寫(xiě)回信。詞數(shù)80左右。To

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rose@Hi,LiPingHowareyoudoingrecently?I’mreallyexcitedtotellyouthatIwillgotoyourcityHangzhoufortheAsianGamesinSeptember.Ithinkitwillbeagoodchanceformetolearnmoreaboutyourcityandyourcountry.I’mplanningtolearnChinese.CanyougivemesomesuggestionsabouthowIcanlearnitwell?AndIknowHangzhouisfamousforsomethingliketea,umbrellas,scissorsandsoon.Iwanttobuysomeofthemformyfriendsasgifts.Couldyougivemesomesuggestionsaboutit?HopeIcouldgetsomegoodideasfromyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,RoseTo

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liping@DearRose,Yours,LiPing【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearRose,Iamdoinggreat!Howareyou?I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.YouaskedmehowtolearnChinesewell.Here’ssomeadviceforyou.Ithinkit’simportanttotakeChineseclasses.You’llfindithelpful.What’smore,youcouldimproveyourChinesebywatchingChinesemovies.ItisalsoagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.You’lllearnmoreChinesewordsbydoingthat.Ifpossible,youcanevenmakesomeChinesefriends.Theywillbepleasedtohelpyouandit’sagoodchanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Asforgifts,Isuggestyoubuytea.ItisasymbolofChinesecivilization.Yourfriendswillloveit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming!Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出自己將提供一些建議；第二步，具體闡述這些建議；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begladto高興做某事②What’smore另外③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①it’sagoodchanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.(it固定句型)②Learningisalifelongjourney.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))（2023·河北·統(tǒng)考中考真題）王梅的英國(guó)朋友Tony要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，下面是Tony給她發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件的部分內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，以王梅的名義回復(fù)。Youknow,inEnglish,givennames(名字)comefirstandfamilynames(姓)comelast.HowaboutChinesenames?AndcanyouhelpmechooseaChinesenameandtellmeitsmeaning?注意：（1）回復(fù)郵件須回答所給郵件內(nèi)容中的兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）回復(fù)郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于備選名字。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。備選名字：王?。╓angJian）；李聰（LiCong）；張友好（ZhangYouhao）HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei【答案】例文HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese.ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.Wealwaysputourfamilynamefirst.Theyarefromourfamily,andit’ssurelyourChinesetradition.Thengivennamescomelast.Secondly,IpreferLiCongasyourChinesename.Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.Justlikeyou!AsfarasIamconcerned,thenamesarethecultureofacountry.Agoodnamestandsforagoodluck.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求針對(duì)郵件內(nèi)容給出答復(fù)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明學(xué)好中文的必要性；第二步，介紹中國(guó)的姓名文化并為對(duì)方推薦一個(gè)名字；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①importantanduseful重要的和有用的②Chinesetradition中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)③standfor代表[高分句型]①ThereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportantandusefultolearnChinesewell.（Thereisnodoubtthat...句型）②Ithinkthisnamerepresentsintelligenceandcleverness.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）（2023·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國(guó)筆友Amy發(fā)來(lái)郵件，向你訴說(shuō)她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過(guò)節(jié)食減肥，以更美的面貌進(jìn)入新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)給她回封郵件，談一談你對(duì)這問(wèn)題的見(jiàn)解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節(jié)食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內(nèi)在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀，可適當(dāng)加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【答案】例文DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou’llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容提出建議，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題，提出要給Amy的建議；第二步，具體闡述給Amy同學(xué)的三個(gè)建議；第三步，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)期望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thereisnoneedtodosth沒(méi)必要做某事②stayawayfrom…與……保持距離③havecouragetodosth有勇氣做某事[高分句型]①I(mǎi)hopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）（2022·廣西河池·統(tǒng)考中考真題）今年4月，教育部頒發(fā)了《義務(wù)教育勞動(dòng)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》。從2022年秋季學(xué)期起，多種勞動(dòng)技能將納入中小學(xué)課程，引發(fā)同學(xué)們的熱議和關(guān)注。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容對(duì)即將開(kāi)設(shè)的勞動(dòng)課（laborclasses）寫(xiě)一封信給校長(zhǎng)，提出你的想法及建議。1.感覺(jué)非常高興及興奮。從中可以學(xué)到一些勞動(dòng)技能，學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己（learnsomelaborskills,lookafter）。2.希望學(xué)校能提供給每班勞動(dòng)課的場(chǎng)地。每周開(kāi)課兩節(jié)。由生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的老師教授同學(xué)們?nèi)绾巫鲲?、種菜……（補(bǔ)充兩個(gè)內(nèi)容）（provide...for,withrichexperience,teach）。3.希望學(xué)校在期末舉行各種勞動(dòng)技能比賽；邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)們參觀并分享勞動(dòng)課成果（attheendof,hold,laborachievements）。寫(xiě)作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；2.內(nèi)容需包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰；4.詞數(shù)100左右。（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.

Ifeelveryhappyandexcited.Ithinkwecanlearnsomelaborskillsandlearntolookafterourselves.Ihopet