專題六-書面表達-09-祝賀類(解析版)

體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請信寫郵件邀請外教進行一次訪談全國卷乙卷說明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向?？磉_自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向校刊表達自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國朋友建議，哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人2020全國卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請幫忙指導(dǎo)英語中，祝賀信使用的頻率很高，當親友晉升、畢業(yè)、獲獎等時會寫祝賀信。祝賀信的用詞應(yīng)親切有禮，表達出真誠的喜悅之情。結(jié)構(gòu)一般如下：①、點明祝賀事由并表示祝賀②、詳述祝賀的事情并肯定對方為此付出的努力③、再次祝賀并表示祝愿素材精粹【高分句型】首段：表明寫信目的I'mwritingtocongratulateyouon...../Hearingthatyou.....，I'mwritingtocongratulateyou.我寫信是為了祝賀你…/獲悉你……，我寫信向你表示祝賀。Goodnewstravelsfast！Pleaseacceptmysincere/warmcongratulationson.....好消息傳得快！請接受我對……真誠的/熱烈的祝賀。主體部分：陳述對方獲得成功的原因Youwouldnothaveachievedthiswithoutdiligenceandperseverance.沒有勤奮和毅力，你是不可能做到這一點的。Personally，itisyourutmosteffortsto......thatleadtoyourbrilliantachievements.在我看來，正是你對…付出的最大努力給你帶來輝煌成就。尾段：再次表示祝賀Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer！祝你前程似錦/事業(yè)有成！I'msureatalentedpersonlikeyouwillmakegreaterachievementsandliveafullerlife.我相信像你這樣有才華的人將會取得更大的成就，過上更充實的生活。佳作共賞DearMr.Johns，Goodnewstravelsfast！I'msoexcitedtohearthatyouhavebeenratedasoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.I'mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulationstoyou.Icansincerelysaythatyoudeservethetitle.Wehaveseenhowmucheffortyouhaveputinteaching.Besides，kindandknowledgeable，youalwayshaveawayofmakingyourclasslivelyandinteresting.HowluckyIamtobeyourstudent！IhopeonedayIcanbeateacherlikeyou.Pleaseacceptmysincerestcongratulationsandbestwishes.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua*注：本書"佳作共賞"欄目中畫波浪線的部分可作模板背誦。（2022·四川省內(nèi)江市第六中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假如你是李華。最近收到筆友John的電子郵件，得知他在學(xué)校的英語競賽（Englishcompetition）中獲得一等獎。請跟據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫封電子郵件。1.祝賀他取得的優(yōu)異成績；2.告訴他你在學(xué)習(xí)中的苦與樂；3.請他介紹他的學(xué)習(xí)方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJohn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyougotthefirstprizeintheEnglishcompetitioninyourschool.Congratulations!Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.It'sbeentwoyearssinceIenteredtheseniorhighschool.SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.ButIfeelcontentmoreoftenbecausestudyoccupiesmostofmytime,forIknowsuccessliesinhardwork.OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.Youaresogoodatstudying,sowouldyoupleaseintroducesomeofyourlearningmethodstome?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生向筆友John寫一封信，祝賀John在英語競賽中獲得一等獎，并分享自己在學(xué)習(xí)中的苦與樂，向他求教學(xué)習(xí)方法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興：glad→happy導(dǎo)致、帶來：contributeto→resultin/leadto沮喪的：depressed→dejected/disheartened源自于：liein→resultfrom2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.拓展句：OnlyifIcanmakeeveryeffort,Icanrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.【點睛】【高分句型1】Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.（運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）（2022·山東師范大學(xué)附中模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華。你校交換生Henry在校英語報舉行的“留學(xué)生講中國故事”征文比賽中獲得一等獎，并將代表學(xué)校去市里參加比賽，他寫信向你征求意見。請你給他封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示祝賀；2．詢問備賽情況并給出建議；3．預(yù)祝成功。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearHenry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHenry,Hearingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheessaycompetitionof“ForeignStudentsTellingChineseStories”heldbyourschoolEnglishnewspaper,IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations.AsfarasIknow,youwillgotothecitytoparticipateinthecompetitiononbehalfofourschool.I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.Igreatlysupportyouractiveparticipationinthiscompetition.Thecompetitioncallsfordailypractice,confidenceandperseverance.Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.Besides,youshouldhaveenoughsleepandgetfamiliarwiththecompetitionrulesandenvironment.Practicemakesperfect!Lookingforwardtoyourexcellentperformanceandbeingawardedinthecompetition.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生Henry回信，對他獲得“留學(xué)生講中國故事”征文比賽一等獎表示祝賀，同時詢問備賽情況并給出建議，最后預(yù)祝成功?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累比賽：competition→match建議：suggestion→advice此外：besides→what’smore參加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.拓展句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowyoucanprepareforthecompetition.【點睛】【高分句型1】IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations..(運用了so…..that…..句型)【高分句型2】Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.(運用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句的省略)（2022·寧夏·石嘴山市第三中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會期間提供志愿者服務(wù)，并被評為優(yōu)秀志愿者。請你給他寫封電子郵件，表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對安排的相關(guān)事宜；注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAnn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearAnn，KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.AndI'dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I'msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會期間提供志愿者服務(wù)，并被評為優(yōu)秀志愿者的事情，寫封電子郵件，表示祝賀?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：selected→chosen此外：Inaddition→what’smore高興：happy→glad/pleased渴望：beeagerto→longfor2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.拓展句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefood,whichwascookedbymyself.【點睛】【高分句型1】KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.（運用了非謂語動詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語。）【高分句型2】Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.（運用了連詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。）（2022·吉林長春·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，聽說英國朋友John所在的籃球隊獲得了學(xué)校籃球比賽的冠軍。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.祝賀獲獎；2.肯定付出；3.期待見面交流。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJohn,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupinthebasketballcompetition.Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.Asyoutoldmebefore,therewereservealoutstandingbasketballteamscompetinginthisbasketballgame,andit’sreallyhardtowinthisgame.However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopractiseplayingbasketball.Yourpassionforbasketballsometimesexceedsmyimagination.Youdeservetowinthisprize!Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生按要求給英國朋友John寫一封電子郵件，祝賀他所在的籃球隊獲得了學(xué)?；@球比賽的冠軍?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累開心的：delighted→glad/cheerful出色的：outstanding→excellent/remarkable熱情：passion→enthusiasm值得：deserve→beworthyof2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball.拓展句：Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball,soyoumadeitatlast.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.(運用how引導(dǎo)賓語從句)【高分句型2】Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.(運用sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句)（2022·河南·寶豐縣第一高級中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會期間提供了志愿服務(wù)并且被評選為優(yōu)秀志愿者。請你給她寫封電子郵件表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對的安排。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAnn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAnn,KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.AndI’dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I’msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給新西蘭朋友Ann寫封電子郵件，對她被評選為北京冬奧會優(yōu)秀志愿者表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對的安排?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：select→choose高興的：happy→delighted禮物：gift→present提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.拓展句：IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening,thepurposeofwhichistocelebrateyourachievement.【點睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.(運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.(運用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)（2022·全國·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你的英國朋友John獲得了在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.祝賀獲獎；2.肯定付出；3.期待見面交流。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.IknowyouwerenotverygoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpractisedspeakingChinesealmosteveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.”Andyoureffortspaidoffatlast!Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoonandcatchinguponalltheupdates.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的英國朋友John寫一封電子郵件，祝賀他在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累想要：wouldliketo→wantto比賽：competition→match冠軍：champion→winner期望：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展句式轉(zhuǎn)換原句：IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.拓展句：KnowingthatyouhavewonthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyou.【點睛】[高分句型1]Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.（運用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)的主語從句）[高分句型2]Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.（運用了賓語從句）（2022·北京·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生好友Andy在你市舉辦的“中國成語大會”比賽中獲得了外國選手組一等獎。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧他付出的努力；3.期待交流。參考詞匯：中國成語大會：ChineseIdiomContest注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAndy,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAndy,Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.Forseveralyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChineseidioms,NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.Youdeservetheprize.Hopetohaveatalkwithyouandexchangeourexperienceoflearningidioms.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。你的留學(xué)生好友Andy在市舉辦的“中國成語大會”比賽中獲得了外國選手組一等獎。要求考生給他寫一封電子郵件?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累提供：offer→provide驚奇：surprise→astonishment比賽：contest→competition熱情：enthusiasm→warmth2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.拓展句：WhenIlearnthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.【點睛】【高分句型1】Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的主語從句）【高分句型2】NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.（運用了notonly…butalso…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒裝）（2022·湖南常德·模擬預(yù)測）在2022年北京冬奧會上，EileenGu（谷愛凌）獲得了兩金一銀的好成績，她的自信、聰慧和勤奮給我們留下了深刻印象。假設(shè)你是李華，你校外刊開設(shè)了“WhatIwanttosaytoEileenGu”專欄，請你給她寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.對她的成就表示祝賀；2.作為同齡人她對你的影響和啟迪；3.表達祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按以下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearEileen,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Iamimpressedbyyourconfidence,intelligenceanddiligence.Yourattitudetowardslifewillneverstopinfluencingmythoughtsandactions.Wishyouliveamorewonderfullife.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給我國選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封信，祝賀她在北京冬季奧運會上贏得了兩金一銀的好成績、她對你的影響和啟迪以及表達對她的祝愿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累為……作貢獻：contributeto→makeacontributionto以……為驕傲：beproudof→takepridein鼓舞：inspire→encourage決定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【點睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.(運用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.(運用了強調(diào)句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）（2022·北京·模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是李華，請你用英文給我國選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封祝賀信。她在第24屆北京冬季奧運會上贏得兩金一銀獎牌，為中國隊獎牌數(shù)名列前三做出了突出貢獻。內(nèi)容包括：1．表示祝賀；2．她在奧運會上的優(yōu)異成績；3．個人感想。注意事項：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；2．開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當增加細節(jié)使語句連貫、通順。DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Theotherday,whenwatchingtheraceonTV,Iwasfullyattractedbyyourexcellentperformanceinyourevents.AndIfeltthrilledandcheeredforyouthemomentyoureachedyourgoalsskillfullyandsuccessfully.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給我國選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封祝賀信，祝賀她在第24屆北京冬季奧運會上贏得兩金一銀獎牌，為中國隊獎牌數(shù)名列前三做出了突出貢獻?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累以……為驕傲：beproudof→takepridein興奮的：thrilled→excited實現(xiàn)：reach→achieve決定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【點睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.（運用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.（運用了強調(diào)句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）（2022·四川·石室中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。你的學(xué)長兼好友林波被北京大學(xué)錄取，請你寫封郵件表示祝賀。內(nèi)容如下：1．表示祝賀；2．你的感受和評價；3．請教學(xué)習(xí)方法。注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLinBo,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLinBo,How'severythinggoing?HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.Beingyourbestfriend,I’mmorethanproudofyou.Asamatteroffact,itcameasnosurprisetomethatyoumadeit.Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.Itwasallyoureffortthatpaidoff.Asaseniorthreestudent,whatworriesmeisthatmygradesareaverage.Wouldyoupleasebekindenoughtosharewithmesomeusefulmethodsoflearning,whichwillbeofsignificancetome?Again,congratulations!Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreplytomeandgivemesomesuggestionsatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)讀】本篇書面表達屬于書信，假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。你的學(xué)長兼好友林波被北京大學(xué)錄取，請你寫封郵件表示祝賀。內(nèi)容如下：1．表示祝賀；2．你的感受和評價；3．請教學(xué)習(xí)方法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累一……就：themoment

→assoonas自豪：beproudof→takepridein成功：makeit→succeedindoing實用的：useful→practical2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.拓展句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasimmediatelyIheardthegoodnews.【點睛】[高分句型1]HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)（2022·全國·模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter在中國象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中榮獲一等獎?，F(xiàn)在，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示祝賀，要點如下：1.表示祝賀；2.贊揚對方的付出；3.向?qū)Ψ綄W(xué)習(xí)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

LiHua【答案】DearPeter,

It'swonderfulthatyouhavewonfirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetitionasaforeigner.Icouldhardlywaittoexpressmysincerecongratulationstoyou.

Inthepastfewyears,youhavespentyourabundanttimeimprovingyourskills.Itisyourdevotion,diligenceanddeterminationthatleadtoyoursuccess.Yousetagoodexampleformeandpushmetomoveforward.Asachesslover,Iwanttoinviteyoutoteachmechessskillsinordertorenewmylevel.

Pleaseletmeknowwhenyouareavailable.Bestwishestoyou.

Yours

LiHua【解析】【詳解】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter在中國象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中榮獲一等獎?，F(xiàn)在，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示祝賀?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累急切做某事：beeagertodo→couldhardlywaittodo祝賀：congratulatesb.onsth→expressone’ssincerecongratulationstosb.大量的時間：enoughtime→abundan