Unit 1 Animal Friends習(xí)題課件 人教版（2024）七年級下冊寫作專訓(xùn)　Project

寫作專訓(xùn)ProjectUnit1AnimalFriends01佳作賞析02素材積累03寫作演練目錄

[經(jīng)典例題]一批美國孩子到你家鄉(xiāng)的光明動物園來參觀熊貓和老虎。假如你是一名志愿者解說員，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給遠(yuǎn)道而來的客人做個解說。老虎（Tai

Ge）：來自吉林省，4歲，有點(diǎn)嚇人但有趣，喜歡吃肉。熊貓（Li

Li）：來自四川省，3歲，害羞，喜歡吃竹子和睡覺。[高分范文]Welcome

to

Guangming

Zoo.

I

want

to

tell

you

about

two

animals-a

tiger

called

Tai

Ge

and

a

panda

called

Li

Li.This

is

Tai

Ge.

He

is

from

Jilin.

He

is

a

four-year-old

tiger.

He

likes

to

eat

meat.

①

He’s

a

little

scary

but

interesting.

This

is

Li

Li.

She

is

from

Sichuan.

She

is

three

years

old.

②

She

likes

to

eat

bamboo

and

she

also

likes

to

sleep.

She

is

beautiful，

but

she

is

shy，

so

please

be

quiet.③

How

cute

the

two

animals

are！

④

I

hope

they

can

bring

you

great

pleasure.[名師點(diǎn)評]本文作者能嚴(yán)格按照書寫要求進(jìn)行表達(dá)，語句通順，層次分明。具體優(yōu)點(diǎn)還有：①

a

little使用恰當(dāng)，具體陳述了這只老虎的性格。②這是一個由and連接的并列句，具體表達(dá)了熊貓的喜好。③本句為how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，結(jié)構(gòu)正確，重點(diǎn)突出了兩種動物的特點(diǎn)。④這里具體提出了作者的希望，合乎情理。

[開頭句]1.

Can

you

name

the

animals

in

the

photo？2.

What’s

your

favourite

animal？3.

Many

kinds

of

animals

are

in

great

danger

now.4.

The

elephant/panda/...

is

my

favourite

animal.[中間句]1.

Penguins

can’t

fly

like

other

birds，

but

they

can

swim

fast.2.

Elephants

look

very

different

from

other

animals.3.

Elephants

are

an

important

part

of

Thai

life

and

culture.4.

We

should

plant

more

trees

rather

than

cut

them

down.[結(jié)尾句]1.

Don’t

give

them

your

sandwich！

It’s

not

good

for

them.2.

Let’s

save

the

forests

and

not

buy

things

made

of

ivory.3.

Animals

are

our

friends，

and

we’d

better

be

friendly

to

them.[名言警句]1.

Animals

are

our

friends.

Please

take

care

of

them.動物是我們的朋友。請愛護(hù)它們。2.

Love

life；

stop

killing.

We

have

a

common

earth.關(guān)愛生命；停止殺戮。我們擁有一個共同的地球。3.

Protecting

wildlife

is

everyone’s

duty.保護(hù)野生動物，人人有責(zé)。

[小試身手]假如你是Peter，你和你的三位好朋友都對動物非常友好，你還有很多的動物玩具。請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容，以“Our

favourite

animals”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹你們各自最喜歡的動物。人

物最喜歡的動物原

因Sally長頸鹿美麗的Jack老虎……Susan狗……Peter…………要求：1.根據(jù)提示寫作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容完整、通順；2.詞數(shù)60左右。[思路點(diǎn)撥]本次寫作要求介紹最喜歡的動物。寫作時，將好朋友們和自己最歡的動物以及原因介紹清楚即可，結(jié)尾可表達(dá)對動物們友好的態(tài)度。時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。[寫作提綱][妙筆生花]Our

favourite

animalsMy

three

good

friends

and

I

like

animals，

but

our

favourite

animals

are

different.My

three

good

friends

and

I

like

animals，

but

our

favourite

animals

are

different.Sally

loves

beautiful

animals，

so

she

likes

giraffes

best.

Jack’s

favourite

animals

are

tigers.

Some

people

think

they

are

kind

of

scary，

but

they’re

very

cool

and

strong

for

Jack.

He

wants

to

run

fast

like

a

tiger.

What

about

Susan？

She

likes

dogs

best

because

they’re

smart

and

can

help

people

do

many

things.

Cats

are

my

favourite

animals

because

they

look

so

cute.

I

like

to

play

with

my

three

pet

cats.

I

also

have

lots

of

toy

cats

at

home.Animals

are

important

to

people.

My

good

friends

and

I

think

we

should

be

friendly

to

them.Sally

loves

beautiful

animals，

so

she

likes

giraffes

best.

Jack’s

favourite

animals

are

tigers.

Some

people

think

they

are

kind

of

scary，

but

they’re

very

cool

and

strong

for

Jack.

He

wants

to

run

fast

like

a

tiger.

What

about

Susan？

She

likes

dogs

best

because

they’re

smart

and

can

help

people

do

many

things.

Cats

are

my

favourite

animals

because

they

look

so

cute.

I

like

to

play

with