2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：視障女孩艾米麗的乒乓球逐夢(mèng)之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)視障女孩艾米麗的乒乓球逐夢(mèng)之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inasmalltown,therelivedayounggirlnamedEmily.Shehadadeeppassionfortabletennisanddreamedofbecomingaprofessionalplayer.Despiteheryoungage,shewasdeterminedtoworkhardandmakeherdreamcometrue.FromthemomentwhenEmilypickedupatabletennispaddle,shewasimpressedbythesport.Shespenteverysparemomentpracticinghershots,focusingonherfootworkandmasteringdifferenttechniques.Eachtimeshesteppedonthecourt,shewaseagertoimproveandpushedherselftothelimit.Unluckily,Emilyfacedavisualimpairment(缺陷)thatthreatenedtoslowherprogress.Shewasbornwithaconditionthataffectedhersight.Somepeopledoubtedherabilitytoplaytabletennisandsaid,“Emily,yourimpairmentisadisadvantage.Itisimpossibletoplaytabletenniswell!”4續(xù)寫原文ButEmilyrefusedtolettheirdoubtsconsumeher.Withsoliddetermination,Emilyturnedherimpairmentintostrength.Sheusedherotherheightenedsensestoheradvantage,relyingontouchandsoundtoanticipateheropponents’moves.Whileothersreliedonsight,shedevelopedanincrediblesenseofintuition(直覺)andstrategy.Emilyfinallyexcelledintabletennis,achievingincrediblemilestonesandrepresentinghertowninmanycompetitions.Shebecameanadvocateofthesportinhertown.However,Emilydecidednottosettleforwinninginhercomfortzonebuttochallengeforsomethinghigher.Shejoinedatrainingteamguidedbyaworld-classcoach,whichbroughttogethertheworld’stoptabletennisplayers.5續(xù)寫原文Inthetrainingteam,Emilywentthroughaseriesoftrials.Shecarriedouthigh-intensitytraining.Sheneededtoimprovenotonlythebattingskillsbutalsoperseveranceandthesenseofteamwork.Hercoachoftenencouragedherandsaid,“Anyone,regardlessofability,couldfindsuccess.”Afewyearslater,Emily’seffortspaidoff.Shegotherchance.Asamemberofthenationalteam,shetookpartinanimportantinternationalcompetition.Thatwasthestageforhertoshowherskills,anditwasalsotheimportantmomentforhertorealizeherdream.6段首句Paragraph1：Inthecompetition,Emilyfoundherselffacingastrongopponent,Lily.Paragraph2：Afterthecompetition,Emily’sstoryspreadthroughoutthetabletenniscommunity.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了小鎮(zhèn)女孩艾米麗熱愛乒乓球，夢(mèng)想成為職業(yè)選手。盡管她年紀(jì)小，但訓(xùn)練刻苦。然而，她天生視力有缺陷，一些人因此質(zhì)疑她打乒乓球的能力。但艾米麗沒有被這些質(zhì)疑打倒，她憑借頑強(qiáng)的決心，利用其他敏銳的感官，將缺陷轉(zhuǎn)化為優(yōu)勢(shì)。后來她在乒乓球領(lǐng)域表現(xiàn)出色，還加入了頂尖教練指導(dǎo)的訓(xùn)練隊(duì)。經(jīng)過幾年努力，她獲得了參加國際比賽的機(jī)會(huì)，在比賽中，她遭遇了強(qiáng)大的對(duì)手莉莉。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Inthecompetition,Emilyfoundherselffacingastrongopponent,Lily.在比賽中，艾米麗發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的對(duì)手是實(shí)力強(qiáng)勁的莉莉。莉莉的球速極快，腳步靈活，一開場(chǎng)就展現(xiàn)出了強(qiáng)大的統(tǒng)治力，艾米麗很快就輸?shù)袅说谝痪?。這讓艾米麗感到了巨大的壓力，但她沒有絲毫退縮的念頭。她回想起自己平日里艱苦的訓(xùn)練，還有教練給予的鼓勵(lì)，內(nèi)心逐漸堅(jiān)定起來。她迅速調(diào)整戰(zhàn)術(shù)，更加專注地運(yùn)用自己獨(dú)特的感官能力。她全神貫注地傾聽球與球拍碰撞的聲音，憑借聲音的細(xì)微差別精準(zhǔn)預(yù)判莉莉的擊球方向。每贏下一分，她的信心就增添一分。在這種狀態(tài)下，艾米麗逐漸掌握了比賽的節(jié)奏，最終成功逆轉(zhuǎn)局勢(shì)，憑借堅(jiān)定的信念贏得了比賽。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterthecompetition,Emily’sstoryspreadthroughoutthetabletenniscommunity.比賽結(jié)束后，艾米麗的故事迅速在乒乓球界傳開。她的經(jīng)歷成為了眾多年輕球員的榜樣，尤其是那些同樣身患?xì)埣驳倪x手。人們對(duì)她的勇氣和毅力驚嘆不已。許多媒體紛紛報(bào)道她的事跡，她還受邀參加各種公益活動(dòng)，分享自己的故事，鼓勵(lì)更多人勇敢追求夢(mèng)想。艾米麗也借此機(jī)會(huì)，積極推廣乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)，希望能讓更多人感受到這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的魅力。她的成功證明了，只要有堅(jiān)定的信念和不懈的努力，無論面對(duì)多大的困難，都能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，她也成為了大家心中的勵(lì)志偶像。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Inthecompetition,Emilyfoundherselffacingastrongopponent,Lily.Lilywasfamousforherextremelyfastshotsandwonderfulfootwork.Atthebeginningofthegame,Emilywasinadifficultsituation.Lilytooktheleadquicklyandwonthefirstseteasily.Emilyfeltagreatdealofpressure,butshedidn'tloseheart.Shethoughtaboutherhardtrainingdaysandthewordsofencouragementfromhercoach.Thenshebegantoadjustherstrategy.Shemadefulluseofherspecialsenses.ShelistenedattentivelytothesoundoftheballhittingthepaddleandaccuratelypredictedLily'smoves.Asshewonpointbypoint,herconfidencekeptrising.Finally,Emilymanagedtoreversethesituationandwonthegamewithherfirmbelief.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthecompetition,Emily’sstoryspreadthroughoutthetabletenniscommunity.Shebecameaninspirationtomanyyoungplayers,especiallythosewithdisabilities.Peoplewereastonishedbyhercourageandperseverance.Manymediareportedherstory,andshewasinvitedtovariouspublicwelfareactivitiestoshareherexperiences.Shehopedtoencouragemorepeopletopursuetheirdreamsbravely.Emilyalsotookthisopportunitytoactivelypromotetabletennis.Shewantedmorepeopletofeelthecharmofthissport.Hersuccessprovedthataslongasonehasafirmbeliefandmakesunremittingefforts,theycanachievetheirdreamsnomatterhowmanydifficultiestheyface.Shebecameanidolofinspirationinpeople'shearts.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Inthecompetition,Emilyfoundherselffacingastrongopponent,Lily.Lily,whowasrenownedforherlightning-fastshotsandremarkablefootwork,tookanearlylead.Atthestart,Emilywasunderimmensepressureandlostthefirstset.However,insteadofgivingin,sherecalledherarduoustrainingsessionsandthewordsofencouragementfromhercoach.Withthat,shebegantomaketacticaladjustments.Relyingonheruniquesenses,shelistenedintentlytothesoundoftheballhittingthepaddle,whichenabledhertoanticipateLily'smovesprecisely.Asshewonpointafterpoint,herconfidencesoared.Eventually,Emilymanagedtoturnthetablesandclinchedthevictorywithherunwaveringdetermination.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthecompetition,Emily’sstoryspreadfarandwideacrossthetabletenniscommunity.Shebecameabeaconofinspiration,especiallyforyoungplayerswithdisabilities.Peoplewereastoundedbyhercourageand