2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：救助松鼠：女孩們的愛心之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)救助松鼠：女孩們的愛心之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasawarmandsunnyday.Zoe,a10-year-oldgirlandhergoodfriend,Doris,werehavingfunintheparkneartheirhouses,runningandlaughing.Allofasudden,theynoticedsomethingmovinginthebushes.Curious,theystoppedtotakeacloserlook.Totheirsurprise,theyfoundthatafrightenedandwoundedsquirrel(松鼠)layinthebushes.Itstinybodywastrembling(發(fā)抖),lettingoutsoftcries.Itseyeswerefilledwithfearandpain,andoneofitslegswasinjured,bleedingandswollen.4續(xù)寫原文Thegirlswereimmediatelyfilledwithsympathy.Theybentdown,speakingsoftlytocalmitdown.“Don’tworry,littlesquirrel.We’llhelpyou.”Zoe,withherkindheart,gentlyreachedoutherhand.Seemingtounderstandtheirkindness,thesquirrelhesitatedforamomentbutthenallowedLilytotouchit.Doris,abravegirl,gentlytouchedthesquirrel’sleg,andthesquirrelcriedinpain.“Wehavetodosomething.Let’stakeittothevet(獸醫(yī)),”Dorissuggested,andZoeagreed.ThenDorisrushedbackhomeandabouttenminuteslaterreturnedwithacardboardboxinhand.Theygentlyplacedthesquirrelinsidethebox.5續(xù)寫原文Carefullycarryingtheboxwiththesquirrelinit,theysetoffforthevet’sclinic.Thejourneywasnoteasybecausetheyhadtobeextremelycautiousnottohurtthesquirrelandcausemorepain.Everystepwasastruggle,buttheypersevered.Exhaustedbutrelieved,theyreachedtheclinicsafely.Dr.Smith,thelocalvetwhowasknownforhiskindnessandexpertisebroughtouthismedicalbagandgottoworkimmediately.Thevetexaminedthesquirrelthoroughlyandpraisedthechildrenbecausetheyhaddonetherightthingbybringingitin.However,hisexpressionturnedserious.“Thesquirrel’slegisbrokenandthewoundisstillbleeding,”hesaid.“Butdon’tworry.Changingthebandageontime,withpropercare,itshouldrecover.”Thechildrensighedinrelief.“Andremember,thelittlebuddybelongstonature,”Dr.Smithadded.6段首句Paragraph1：Therewerealotofthingsforthegirlstodointhefollowingdays.Paragraph2：Thesquirrelhavingrecovered,theyknewitwasthetime.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在一個溫暖的晴天，10歲的佐伊和多麗絲在公園玩耍時，發(fā)現(xiàn)一只受傷且驚恐的松鼠。出于同情，她們決定帶它去看獸醫(yī)。獸醫(yī)檢查后告知松鼠腿部骨折，傷口在流血，但通過按時換藥和悉心照料可以康復(fù)。接下來的日子里，女孩們?yōu)樗墒笞隽嗽S多事，而當(dāng)松鼠康復(fù)后，又會發(fā)生什么呢？點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Therewerealotofthingsforthegirlstodointhefollowingdays.在接下來的日子里，女孩們有許多事情要做。她們每隔幾天就會去一趟獸醫(yī)診所，每次都不忘帶上新鮮的水果和堅果，希望能給松鼠補(bǔ)充營養(yǎng)。每次去，她們都會緊緊盯著獸醫(yī)換藥的過程，不放過任何一個細(xì)節(jié)，還不停地向獸醫(yī)詢問松鼠的恢復(fù)情況。在獸醫(yī)的指導(dǎo)下，她們學(xué)會了如何照顧松鼠。把松鼠帶回家后，她們在房間的一角精心布置了一個溫暖舒適的小窩，讓松鼠能安心養(yǎng)傷。每天晚上，她們都會坐在小窩旁邊，輕聲地和松鼠聊天，給它講公園里的趣事。漸漸地，松鼠似乎熟悉了她們的聲音，不再像一開始那樣害怕。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thesquirrelhavingrecovered,theyknewitwasthetime.松鼠康復(fù)了，她們知道分別的時候到了。盡管心中滿是不舍，但她們也明白，松鼠屬于大自然。她們帶著裝松鼠的盒子來到了最初發(fā)現(xiàn)它的公園。佐伊緩緩地打開盒子，松鼠先是小心翼翼地探出頭，觀察著周圍的環(huán)境。過了一會兒，它似乎認(rèn)出了這里，興奮地跳出盒子，在草地上蹦蹦跳跳。佐伊和多麗絲站在一旁，看著松鼠重獲自由，臉上露出了欣慰的笑容。她們知道，雖然會想念松鼠，但能讓它回歸自然，才是對它最好的愛。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Therewerealotofthingsforthegirlstodointhefollowingdays.Theyvisitedtheclinicregularly,alwaysbringingfreshfruitsandnutsforthesquirrel.Eachtimetheywent,theywatchedintentlyasthevetchangedthebandage,askingmanyquestionsaboutthesquirrel'srecovery.Underthevet'sguidance,theylearnedhowtotakecareofthesquirrel.Aftertakingithome,theysetupawarmandcomfortablecornerintheroomforthesquirreltorecover.Everynight,theywouldsitbesidethelittlenest,chattingsoftlywiththesquirrel,sharinginterestingthingsthathappenedinthepark.Gradually,thesquirrelseemedtogetusedtotheirvoicesandbecamelessfrightened.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thesquirrelhavingrecovered,theyknewitwasthetime.Althoughtheywerereluctanttopartwithit,theyknewthatthesquirrelbelongedtonature.Theycarriedtheboxwiththesquirreltotheparkwheretheyhadfirstfoundit.Zoeslowlyopenedthebox,andthesquirrelfirstpeekedoutcarefully,observingthesurroundings.Afterawhile,itseemedtorecognizetheplaceandjumpedoutoftheboxexcitedly,bouncingaroundonthegrass.ZoeandDorisstoodaside,watchingthesquirrelregainitsfreedom,withrelievedsmilesontheirfaces.Theyknewthatalthoughtheywouldmissthesquirrel,lettingitreturntonaturewasthebestwaytoloveit.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Intheensuingdays,thegirlswereimmersedinaflurryofactivitiescenteredaroundthesquirrel.Regularly,theymadetheirwaytotheclinic,bearingbasketsfilledwithfreshfruitsandnuts,allinanefforttoboostthesquirrel'snutrition.Eachvisitwasmarkedbytheirintensefocusasthevetskillfullychangedthebandage,pepperinghimwithinquiriesaboutthesquirrel'sprogress.Guidedbythevet'sexpertise,theymasteredtheartofsquirrelcare.Oncethesquirrelwasbackhome,theytransformedacozycorneroftheroomintoahavenforitsrecovery.Everynight,theywouldperchbesidethenest,engaginginhushedconversationswiththelittlecreature,regalingitwithtalesofparkadventures.Gradually,thesquirrel,attunedtotheirvoices,sheditsinitialtimidity.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withthesquirrelfullyrecovered,theyknewtheinevitablemomenthadarrived.Despitethetingeofmelancholythataccompaniedthethoughtofseparation,theywereacutelyawarethatthewildwasthesquirrel'srightfulabode.Theyjourneyedtotheparkwheretheirpathsfirstcrossed,theboxcradledgentlyintheirarms.Zoe