高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：珍妮與布魯西：馬拉松夢想的陪伴之旅

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)珍妮與布魯西：馬拉松夢想的陪伴之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Jennyalwaysadmiredpowerfulandattractivemarathonrunnersanddreamedthatonedayshecouldalsorunamarathon.Tomakeit,oneday,shebegantoseriouslyprepare.Atfirst,sheonlysetthesmallgoalofrunningonekilometereachmorning.However,shestillfoundittiringandsoongaveuprunning.Asdayswenton,herweightgraduallyincreased.Upsetaboutherhealth,shefinallydecidedtoloseweightbydoingexercise.Shebeganrunningagain.Asusual,inthefollowingdays,herbigproblemwithexercisingwasalwayshowtostaymotivated.Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.Shefollowedtheadvice,buthumanexercisecompanionsalwaysletherdown.Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,“It’smyturntodothedishes”atsixo’clockinthemorning!Shehatedtoadmitit,butshehadmadesimilarexcusestoothersanddisappointedtheminsimilarways.4續(xù)寫原文ThenBrucieappearedinJenny’slife,abirthdaygiftfromherhusband,John.Johncouldn’tworkoutwithJennybecausehehadabadback.SothatjobwaslefttoBrucie,ayellowdog.Bruciewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestined（注定的）tobearunningpartner.Inthebeginning,BrucieandJennyranonlyfiftypacesatatime,eachsetmixedwithonehundredpacesofwalking.“Idon’tlookfoolishstartingthisway,”thoughtJenny,“becauseBrucie’sbonesaretooyoungtomakehimrunmuchharder.”Shewasright,andBrucie’searlylimitationsgavehertimetostartslowlywithoutfeelingawkward.5續(xù)寫原文Afteraboutninemonths,though,BruciewasoldenoughtorunseveralmilesadayandJennywasfitenoughtokeepup.Fromspringtoautumn,theyloggedthemilestogethereveryday.However,aswinterapproachedandtheweathergotcolder,maintainingadailyrunningroutinerequiredlotsofdedication（熱忱）anddetermination.AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersandthatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.6段首句Paragraph1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Paragraph2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9珍妮羨慕馬拉松選手，決定自己嘗試，起初因困難放棄后又因健康問題重新開始。她嘗試找人類伙伴但都失望，后來丈夫送的小狗布魯西成為她的伙伴。開始時他們跑量很少，隨著時間推移，布魯西成長且珍妮體能提升，可冬天時珍妮擔(dān)心布魯西也會放棄。布魯西卻用行動證明了自己的堅持，最終在春天的馬拉松比賽中，布魯西陪伴珍妮完成了比賽，實現(xiàn)了她的夢想。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.后來發(fā)生的事證明珍妮錯了。在寒冷的冬日清晨，布魯西依舊會準時跑到珍妮的床邊，用它溫暖的舌頭舔著珍妮的手，眼神中滿是期待。當珍妮裹著厚厚的棉衣出門時，布魯西歡快地在雪地里奔跑跳躍，仿佛在向寒冷宣戰(zhàn)。它會在前面領(lǐng)跑一段距離，然后回頭看看珍妮，汪汪叫幾聲，像是在鼓勵她跟上。每次珍妮想要放棄時，布魯西就會跑回來，圍著她轉(zhuǎn)圈，蹭蹭她的腿，給予她繼續(xù)前進的力量。在布魯西的陪伴下，珍妮度過了一個又一個艱難的冬日跑步時光，她的體能也在不斷提升。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.一個春天的早晨，珍妮迎來了她的第一次馬拉松比賽，布魯西陪伴在她身旁。比賽現(xiàn)場人聲鼎沸，彩旗飄揚，珍妮深吸一口氣，和布魯西站在了起跑線上。發(fā)令槍響后，布魯西迅速沖了出去，珍妮緊跟其后。一路上，布魯西始終保持著穩(wěn)定的速度，為珍妮引領(lǐng)著節(jié)奏。當珍妮感到疲憊不堪時，布魯西會用身體輕輕撞一下她，給她傳遞力量。在最后的沖刺階段，珍妮和布魯西一起加速，向著終點全力奔跑。當他們沖過終點線的那一刻，珍妮激動得熱淚盈眶，她蹲下身，緊緊抱住布魯西，感謝它一路以來的陪伴與支持，實現(xiàn)了自己長久以來的夢想。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Inthefreezingwintermornings,BruciewouldstillcometoJenny'sbedsideontime.Itlickedherhandwithitswarmtongueandlookedatherexpectantly.WhenJennywentoutwrappedinthickclothes,Bruciewouldrunandjumpmerrilyinthesnowasifdeclaringwaronthecold.ItwouldrunaheadforawhileandthenlookbackatJenny,barkingafewtimesasifencouraginghertocatchup.WheneverJennywantedtogiveup,Bruciewouldrunback,circlearoundherandrubagainstherlegs,givingherthestrengthtomoveforward.WithBrucie'scompany,Jennygotthroughthedifficultwinterrunningdaysandherphysicalfitnessimprovedcontinuously.14范文呈現(xiàn)Onespringmorning,JennystartedherfirstmarathonwithBruciebyherside.Theracesitewascrowdedwithpeopleandcolorfulflagswereflying.JennytookadeepbreathandstoodatthestartinglinewithBrucie.Afterthestartinggunfired,BrucierushedoutquicklyandJennyfollowedclosely.Alongtheway,BruciemaintainedastablespeedtosetthepaceforJenny.WhenJennyfeltextremelytired,Bruciewouldgentlybumpintohertogiveherstrength.Inthefinalsprintstage,JennyandBrucieacceleratedtogetherandrantowardsthefinishlinewithalltheirstrength.Whentheycrossedthefinishline,Jennywassoexcitedthattearsfilledhereyes.ShecroucheddownandhuggedBrucietightly,thankingitforitscompanyandsupportallthewayandfulfillingherlong-cherisheddream.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhatensuedlaterdemonstratedthatJenny'smisgivingswereunfounded.Duringthefrigidwintermornings,BrucieunfailinglypresenteditselfatJenny'sbedsidepreciselyontime.Withitswarmtongue,itaffectionatelylickedherhand,itseyesbrimmingwithanticipation.OnceJenny,bundledupinthickgarments,steppedoutdoors,Bruciewouldboundandfrolicgailyinthesnow,seeminglydefyingthecold.ItwoulddashaheadforaspellbeforeglancingbackatJenny,emittingafewbarksthatservedasanencouragementforhertokeeppace.WhenevertheurgetoquitbesetJenny,Bruciewouldpromptlyscamperback,circlearoundher,andnuzzleagainstherlegs,endowingherwiththeimpetustopersevere.ThankstoBrucie'ssteadfastcompanionship,Jennysuccessfullynavigatedthroughthearduouswinterrunningsessions,andherphysicalprowesssteadilyenhanced.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onespringmorning,JennyembarkedonhermaidenmarathonwithBrucieashertrustycompanion.Theracevenuewasteemingwithaboisterouscrowd,andcolorfulbannersflutteredinthebreeze.Takingadeepbreath,JennytookherpositionatthestartinglinebesideBrucie.Theinstantthestartinggunshatteredthesilence,Brucieshotforwardlikeanarrow,andJennyhastenedtofollowsuit.Througho