高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：感恩節(jié)前夕的等待與意外：家庭的溫暖重聚

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習感恩節(jié)前夕的等待與意外：家庭的溫暖重聚1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inourkitchen,therewasawoodentableandthreechairs—oneforDad,oneforMom,andoneforme.Inthecellar(地窖),theverylastjarofapplejamlayquietlyontheshelf,waitingtobeturnedintoanapplepiewhenDadcameback.Momsatatoneendofthetable.IsatinthemiddlebetweenherandDad.ItriednottolookatDad’semptyplace.Dadhadgonetothecitytolookforworkforalongtime.Everynight,Ilayawakeinbedandwaitedforthetraintostop.Waitedtohearthecreaky(嘎吱作響的)gateDad’sgoingtofixwhenhecamehome.Waitedtohearthesoundofhisworkbootsdroppingonthestepbythekitchendoor,andhisvoicecalling,“I’mhome!”4續(xù)寫原文Everynight,asIlaythere,IstaredatthewindowandthecurtainsMommadefromemptyfloursacks(麻布袋).Everynight,Momcametokissmegood-night—afterthetrain’sgoneby.Shehadbeenlistening,too.“Gotosleep.Yourdadwillbehomesoon.MaybeforThanksgiving.”Timedraggingby,itfinallycamethedaybeforeThanksgiving.Iwenttosleepwiththesoundoftrainwheelsinmyhead,whispering,“Maybetomorrow,maybetomorrow.”5續(xù)寫原文Earlythenextmorning,thesmellofcoffeewokeme.Iranintothekitchen.Therehewas!Dadliftedmeontohisshouldersandpretendedtostaggerfrommyweight.“How’smyboy?You’vegottensobigthatIcanbarelyliftyouupanymore.”Heputmedown,andIstaredatthetwosacksonthetable.OnesaidFLOUR—Iknewthatword.Itriedreadingtheother:S-U-G-A-R.Dadwhistledadmiringlyandwinkedatme.MomandIhadbeenpracticingmylettersmostdays.IcouldseethatMomwaspleasedwithme.“I’mgoingtobakeapieforyourdad’shomecomingdinner.Jimmy,bringmethatjarofapplejamfromtheshelfinthecellar.”Momsmiledatme.6段首句Paragraph1：Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.Paragraph2：“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9家中廚房有一張木桌和三把椅子，爸爸去城里找工作久未歸，“我”和媽媽每晚都盼著爸爸回家。感恩節(jié)前夕爸爸終于回來，他帶來了面粉和糖，媽媽準備用地窖里最后一罐蘋果醬做派來慶祝?！拔摇奔泵θサ亟涯锰O果醬，卻不小心摔碎了罐子，滿心自責。爸爸安慰“我”，雖有波折，但一家人終得團聚，充滿溫情。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.聽到媽媽的話，我心急如焚，一步兩個臺階地沖向地窖。地窖里有些昏暗，我在架子上急切地尋找著那罐蘋果醬。當我終于看到它時，伸手去拿，可也許是太激動了，手一滑，罐子瞬間從我的手中滑落，在地上摔得粉碎，蘋果醬濺得到處都是。我一下子呆住了，滿心的自責和害怕。過了好一會兒，我才緩過神來，垂頭喪氣地回到廚房，聲音顫抖地對媽媽說：“媽媽，我不小心把蘋果醬罐子摔碎了?！眿寢尩男θ菽淘诹四樕?，我低著頭，不敢看她和爸爸的眼睛。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.“別在意，孩子，意外總會發(fā)生的。”爸爸說著，用他那寬厚的手輕輕擦去我臉上的淚水。他把我拉到身邊，讓我坐在他的腿上，溫柔地說：“這沒什么大不了的，我們可以想辦法解決。”爸爸的安慰讓我心里好受了一些，但我還是很難過。這時，媽媽走過來，摸了摸我的頭說：“寶貝，沒關系，我們還有其他好吃的?！卑职挚粗覀儯χf：“對，今天我們一家人團聚才是最重要的?！痹诎职值墓膭钕?，我漸漸恢復了笑容，一家人又充滿了溫馨和快樂。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingthis,IrushedtothecellarasquicklyasIcould,takingthestepstwoatatime.Itwasabitdarkinthecellar.Isearchedeagerlyforthejarofapplejamontheshelf.WhenIfinallyfounditandreachedforit,perhapsbecauseIwastooexcited,myhandslippedandthejardroppedfrommyhandandsmashedontheground,withtheapplejamsplashingeverywhere.Iwasstunnedandfullofself-blameandfear.Afterawhile,Icamebacktomysensesandwentbacktothekitchendejectedly.IsaidtoMominatremblingvoice,"Mom,Iaccidentallybrokethejarofapplejam."Mom'ssmilefrozeonherface.IhungmyheadanddarednotlookintoherandDad'seyes.14范文呈現(xiàn)"Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,"Dadsaidandwipedmytearsgentlywithhisbighand.Hepulledmeclosetohimandletmesitonhislap.Hesaidsoftly,"It'snotabigdeal.Wecanfiguresomethingout."Dad'scomfortmademefeelalittlebetter,butIwasstillsad.Atthistime,Momcameoverandtouchedmyheadandsaid,"Honey,it'sokay.Wehaveotherdeliciousfood."Dadlookedatusandsmiledandsaid,"Yes,themostimportantthingisthatourfamilyistogethertoday."WithDad'sencouragement,Igraduallyregainedmysmileandthefamilywasfullofwarmthandhappinessagain.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingthis,Ihastenedtowardsthecellarwithaneagerheart,skippingtwostepsatatime.Thecellarwassomewhatdimlylit.Ifranticallysearchedforthejarofapplejamontheshelf.Finally,whenIlaidmyhandsonitandattemptedtograspit,perhapsduetoexcessiveexcitement,myhandslippedandthejartumbledfrommygrasp,shatteringonthegroundwiththeapplejamsplatteringhitherandthither.Iwaspetrified,consumedbyself-reproachandtrepidation.Afteramoment,Iregainedmycomposureandreturnedtothekitchendejectedly.Withaquiveringvoice,IconfessedtoMom,"Mom,Iinadvertentlyshatteredthejarofapplejam."Mom'ssmilefrozeonhercountenance.Ihungmyhead,unabletomeetherandDad'sgaze.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Nevermind,boy,accidentsareinevitable,"Dadmurmuredashegentlywipedawaymytearswithhisbroadpalm.Hedrewmecloseandseatedmeonhislap.Softly,heconsoled,"It'sofnogreatconsequence.We'llfindawayout."Dad'swordsofcomfortalleviatedmydistresstosomeextent,yetIremaineddowncast.Atthisjuncture,Momapproachedandstrokedmyhead,saying,"Dear,it'sallright.Wehaveotherdelectabletreats."Dadglancedatusandbeamed,"Indeed,theparamount