高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：一年級(jí)頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴上的意外驚喜

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)一年級(jí)頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴上的意外驚喜1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Momsatdownatthekitchentableandlookedattheawardsdinnerinvitationasthoughshehadreceivedbadnewsfromfaraway.“Baby,itmightbeamistake.Sometimestheyaccidentallysendthesethingsouttothewrongpeople.”Shespokeslowlyandwithsympathyinhervoice.Iwasonlyinthefirstgrade;Ididn’tunderstandthebigdealanddidn’treallycareaboutamistake.Iwasembarrassedbytheprocessoflearning.Onthefirstdayofschoolmymomtalkedtomyteacherforalongtimewhilelsatatoneofthelittletablesandmetpeoplewhowouldbemyfriendsforyears,includingKatie.Iwassoabsorbedinmyfriend-makingthatIdidnotcarewhatmymomwassayingtomynewteacher,andIcertainlycouldnothaveknownthatshewasexpressingherconcernaboutmepossiblyhavingalearningdisability.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Myacademicprogresswasneveratopicofconversation.Ididnotknowanythingaboutgradesorscholarlycompetition.Ididn’tcare.Ijustlikedmybeautifulteachers.Ilovedmyfriends.Ienjoyeddoingalltheworksheetsandactivities.Mygradesdidnotmeananythingtome.Attheawardsdinner,wesatbymybestfriendKatieandherfamily.SheandItalkedandlaughedallthroughthemeal.ButMomlookedlikeshewasstillexpectingbadnews.Shereachedacrossthetableandheldmyhandrightbeforetheprincipalstartedhandingoutawards.“Remember,sweetie,we’rejustheretoenjoythedinner.”Theawardsweregivenoutbysubject.Withineachsubject,thegradewinnerswereannouncedandreceivedacertificate,Math.NoRebecca,Science.NoRebecca.Reading.Katiegotthatone.Shesmiledbroadly.Icaughtmymom’sface.Shewasneartears.ShelookedatmeasifIwerehurt.ButIwasfine.Shewastheonewhowashurt,watchingalltheotherchildrengetawardswhileherownwaspassedoveragainandagain.5段首句Paragraph1：Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.Paragraph2：Afewsecondslater,“Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade—RebeccaYoungblood.”6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8文章講述了一年級(jí)的麗貝卡收到了頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴的邀請(qǐng)，母親認(rèn)為可能是發(fā)錯(cuò)了，因?yàn)樗龘?dān)心麗貝卡有學(xué)習(xí)障礙。麗貝卡對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程感到尷尬，她不關(guān)心成績(jī)和學(xué)術(shù)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，只喜歡老師和朋友。在頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴上，按科目頒發(fā)獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)時(shí)，麗貝卡的名字一直未被念到，母親很傷心，而她卻毫不在意，仍與朋友談笑風(fēng)生。但最后，她迎來(lái)了意想不到的結(jié)果。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.所有學(xué)科的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)都頒發(fā)完畢，始終沒(méi)有聽(tīng)到我的名字。媽媽的臉色愈發(fā)難看，她的眼眶中似乎有淚水在打轉(zhuǎn)。她一直期望我能在學(xué)習(xí)上有所成就，看到其他孩子紛紛上臺(tái)領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)，而我卻一次次落空，她心里肯定不好受。但我卻沒(méi)有太多失落感，我還沉浸在和凱蒂的歡樂(lè)交談中。不過(guò)，現(xiàn)場(chǎng)突然安靜下來(lái)，大家都在等待著什么。我也好奇地看向舞臺(tái)，媽媽緊緊握著我的手，那力度讓我感受到她內(nèi)心的緊張與不安，她或許已經(jīng)做好了再次失望的準(zhǔn)備。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2Afewsecondslater,“Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade—RebeccaYoungblood.”幾秒鐘后，“下面頒發(fā)一年級(jí)綜合成就獎(jiǎng)?wù)?，獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)呤恰愗惪?揚(yáng)布拉德?！甭?tīng)到這個(gè)消息，我瞬間愣住了，大腦一片空白，完全不敢相信自己的耳朵。過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，我才反應(yīng)過(guò)來(lái)，激動(dòng)得差點(diǎn)跳起來(lái)。媽媽先是一臉驚愕，隨后臉上綻放出無(wú)比燦爛的笑容，她激動(dòng)地把我緊緊摟在懷里，聲音顫抖地說(shuō)：“寶貝，你做到了！”我走上領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)，從校長(zhǎng)手中接過(guò)獎(jiǎng)?wù)拢且豢?，我看到臺(tái)下媽媽欣慰的笑容和凱蒂為我鼓掌的身影。我知道，這個(gè)獎(jiǎng)?wù)虏粌H屬于我，也讓媽媽感到無(wú)比驕傲。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.Mom'sexpressionturnedevengloomier,andtearsseemedtowellupinhereyes.ShehadalwayshopedthatIcouldachievesomethinginmystudies.SeeingotherchildrengouponstagetoreceiveawardsoneafteranotherwhileIwasleftoutagainandagain,shemusthavebeenverydisappointed.However,Ididn'tfeeltoosad.IwasstillimmersedinthehappyconversationwithKatie.Butsuddenly,thescenebecamequiet,andeveryonewaswaitingforsomething.Ialsolookedatthestagecuriously.Momheldmyhandtightly,andthestrengthofhergripmademefeelherinnernervousnessanduneasiness.Shemighthavebeenpreparingherselfforanotherdisappointment.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afewsecondslater,"Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade—RebeccaYoungblood."WhenIheardthis,Iwasstunnedforamoment,andmymindwentblank.Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Afterawhile,IcametomysensesandwassoexcitedthatIalmostjumpedup.Momwasfirstshocked,andthenabrilliantsmilespreadacrossherface.Shehuggedmetightlyandsaidinatremblingvoice,"Baby,youmadeit!"Iwalkedontothestageandreceivedthemedalfromtheprincipal.Atthatmoment,IsawMom'sgratifiedsmileandKatie'sapplauseintheaudience.IknewthatthismedalnotonlybelongedtomebutalsomadeMomextremelyproud.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Allthesubjectawardsweredispensed,yetmynameremainedunannounced.Mom'scountenancedarkenedperceptibly,andglisteningtearsthreatenedtospillfromhereyes.Havinglongharboredhopesofmyacademicsuccess,witnessingotherchildrenascendthestagetoclaimtheiraccoladeswhileIwasrepeatedlyoverlookedmusthavebeenabitterpillforhertoswallow.Nevertheless,Iremainedunfazed,myattentionfirmlyfixedonthejovialbanterwithKatie.Suddenly,ahushfellovertheauditorium,andalleyeswererivetedonthestage,anticipationpalpableintheair.Curiositypiqued,Itooturnedmygazetowardsthestage.Mom'sgriponmyhandtightened,herknucklesturningwhite,betrayingherinnerturmoil.Evidently,shewasbracingherselfforyetanotherletdown.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewsecondselapsedbeforetheprincipal'svoiceresoundedthroughthehall:"Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade—RebeccaYoungblood."Thewordshitmelikeaboltfromtheblue,leavingmemomentarilystunned,mymindacompleteblank.Ittookamomentfortherealitytosinkin,andthen,asurgeofexcitementcoursedthroughme,nearlypropellingmeoutofmyseat.Mom'sinitialshockwass