高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+少年弗蘭克的心靈蛻變之旅

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)少年弗蘭克的心靈蛻變之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文FrankDailystareddownatthefrozenground.HekickedchunksofsnowwithhisnewNikeshoes.Heonlypretendedtolistentothechatofhisfriends,NormandEd,astheyallgotonthenumber10busafterschool.Frankandhisfriendssatdownatthebackofthebusalongwithseveralotherhighschoolboys,somefromotherschools.ThebusheadedwestonBlueMoundRoad.Hestillrememberedanothercold,graydayjustamonthagoinNovemberwhenhisworldcrasheddownaroundhim,ashereadtheteamlist,searchingdesperatelyforhisname.Itwasn’tthere.4續(xù)寫原文Thebusbrakedsuddenly,andFranknaturallypressedhisNikesagainstthefloor.“Itmusthavebeenmysize,”hethought,“Five-feet-four.SinceI’mnewatMarquetteHigh,thecoachmusthavetakenonelookatmeandmyshoesanddecidedIwastoosmalltojointhebasketballteam.”Hehadbeenastarathleteinallthesportsinprimaryschool.Now,itseemedhewasanothing.ThebusstoppedattheCountyInstitutionsgrounds.Frankglancedupatthedriver,whohadanickname“Kojak”becauseofhisbaldhead.Anelderlywomanhungontothehandrailandslowlypulledherselfontothebus.Asshesankintotheseatbehindthebusdriver,herfeetkickedup,andFranksawthatshewasbarefoot.5續(xù)寫原文AsKojakgotthebusbackintotraffic,heyelledoverhisshoulder,“Whereareyourshoes,lady?Itwasbelow10degreesoutthere.”“Ican’taffordshoes,”thewomananswered.Shepulledherworn-outcoatcollararoundherneck.Someoftheboysatthebackexchangedglancesandlaughed.“Igotonthebusjusttogetmyfeetwarm,”thewomancontinued.“Ifyoudon’tmind,I’lljustridearoundwithyouforabit.”Kojakscratchedhisbaldheadandshouted,“Nowjusttellmehowcomeyoucan’taffordshoes?”“Myhusbandisbadlyillinthehospital,soweonlyhavemoneyforfoodandnecessities,”thewomansaidinalowvoice.6段首句Paragraph1：FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Paragraph2：ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了放學(xué)后，弗蘭克和朋友乘10路公交。他因身材矮小未入選?；@球隊(duì)，內(nèi)心失落。公交上，一位老年婦女上車，她因丈夫病重沒錢買鞋，只能光腳乘車取暖。其他男孩對(duì)她嘲笑，而弗蘭克看著自己嶄新的耐克鞋，內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生觸動(dòng)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.弗蘭克低頭盯著自己嶄新的耐克籃球鞋，內(nèi)心如翻江倒海般糾結(jié)。這雙鞋是他的寶貝，承載著他對(duì)籃球的熱愛與夢(mèng)想?？裳矍袄先斯饽_的模樣，讓他心中涌起一陣酸澀。他不禁想到自己沒能入選籃球隊(duì)的失落，和老人面臨的困境相比，顯得如此微不足道。他在心里不斷權(quán)衡，一方面是心愛的鞋子，另一方面是老人的困境。終于，善良戰(zhàn)勝了不舍，他深吸一口氣，雙手緩緩伸向鞋帶，手指微微顫抖著解開鞋帶，眼神中透露出堅(jiān)定。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.接著，弗蘭克迅速起身，拿著鞋子快步走向車門。他來到老人面前，微微彎腰，將鞋子輕輕放在老人腳邊。老人先是一愣，隨即眼中滿是驚訝與感動(dòng)。弗蘭克輕聲說：“奶奶，您穿上吧，別凍著腳?！避嚿系钠渌泻⑾仁求@愕，隨后有的露出羞愧之色。弗蘭克轉(zhuǎn)身下車，雖然雙腳踩在冰冷的地面上，但他的內(nèi)心卻無比溫暖。他邁著堅(jiān)定的步伐，朝著家的方向走去，此刻他明白，真正的價(jià)值并非體現(xiàn)在籃球場上，而是藏在這小小的善舉之中。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Afiercestruggleragedwithinhim.Theseshoeswerenotjustfootwear;theyweresymbolsofhisdreamsforthebasketballcourt.However,thesightoftheelderlywoman'sbarefeet,redandshivering,madehisheartache.Comparinghisdisappointmentofnotmakingtheteamtoherdesperatesituation,hefeltasenseofshame.Afteralongmomentofhesitation,hedecidedtotakeaction.Heknewitwasadifficultdecision,buthecouldn'tstandbyandwatchhersuffer.Withadeterminedlook,hebegantountiethelacesofhispreciousshoes.Hishandstrembledslightly,showinghisinnerconflict,buthisresolveremainedunshaken.14范文呈現(xiàn)ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.Holdingtheshoestightlyinhishands,hewalkeduptotheelderlywoman.Hebentdownslightlyandplacedtheshoesgentlyinfrontofher.Thewomanlookedupathim,hereyeswidewithsurpriseandgratitude."Here,ma'am.Pleaseputtheseon.Youshouldn'tbewalkingaroundwithoutshoesinthiscoldweather,"Franksaidsoftly.Someoftheboysonthebuswhohadlaughedatthewomanearliernowlookedashamed.Withoutanotherword,Franksteppedoffthebus.Thecoldgroundstunghisfeet,buthisheartwasfilledwithawarmfeelingofsatisfaction.Hewalkedawaywithhisheadheldhigh,knowingthathehaddonetherightthing.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)FranklookeddownathisnewNikebasketballshoes.Astormofconflictingemotionssweptthroughhim.Theseshoes,whichsymbolizedhispassionforbasketball,nowpaledincomparisontotheplightoftheelderlywomanwithbarefeet.Itwasthenthatherealizedhowtrivialhisowndisappointmentwas.Afteramomentofsoul-searching,hemadeuphismind.Withhisheartpounding,hestarteduntyingthelaces,hishandsbetrayinghisinnerstruggle.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenFrankhurriedtothedoorandwasabouttostepdown.Shoesinhand,heapproachedthewoman,wholookedathimwithamixofsurpriseanddisbelief."Please,takethese,"hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithkindness.Asheplacedtheshoesatherfeet,thebusfellsilent.Someoftheboyswhohadmockedthewomanearliernowhungtheirheadsinshame.Steppingoffthebus,Frankfeltacoldbreezeonhisbarefeet,buthisheartwasablazewithwarmth.Hewalkedaw