高考英語(yǔ)寫作專題復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫錢包失而復(fù)得故事續(xù)寫 講義

andisknownforherfondnessofbookshopsOneevening,asshewasheadingbacktoherhomefromapark,Ms.Eleanorsuthatherpursewasmissing.Sheretracedhersteps,searchingeverycornerofthepark.Herheartsankwitheachpassingmoment,asthepursecontainedatreasuredphotographofherdepartedhusband,whichshecarriedasaprecisenseoflossandhopelessness.Inthemeantime,ayoungmannamedTomwaswalkinghomefromhercherishedjobatthecommunitylibrary.Ashepassedbythebookshopwvisitedearlierthatday,hespottedsomethingnestpickeditupanddiscoveredittobeawell-wornleatherpurse.Tomopenedtheidentificationtoreturnittoitsowner.Itwasn'tlongbeforehesawtinside.Recognizingthesignificanceofwhatheheld,hedecidedtowaitatthespotthepurse,hopingthattheownerwouldreturntosearAsnightfallblanketedthecity,Ms.Eleanor,withaheavbookshoptomakeherlastattempdeterminationwasstrong.Asshedrewneartothebookshop"Pardonme,youngperson.Iwaswonderingifyouhappenedtocomeacrossanoldpurse?"Ms.totheelderlylady.However,heactuallybelongedtothee注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；Paragraph2:Tomsaid"It'smypleasure.Forgetaboutthemoney."錢包失而復(fù)得故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段要點(diǎn)：著重描寫埃莉諾女士確認(rèn)錢包歸屬時(shí)的細(xì)節(jié)，比如她回憶照片時(shí)的表情、聲音的變化，眼中流露出的深情與眷戀，通過這些細(xì)節(jié)展現(xiàn)她對(duì)錢包內(nèi)物品的珍視。同時(shí)細(xì)致刻畫湯姆的反應(yīng)，從最初的猶豫，到認(rèn)真傾聽埃莉諾女士的描述，眼神中透露出的思考與判斷，最后確信后放心遞還錢包的動(dòng)作，如雙手恭敬地遞出。第二段要點(diǎn)：深入描繪湯姆拒絕報(bào)酬時(shí)的堅(jiān)決態(tài)度，如堅(jiān)定的眼神、擺手的動(dòng)作、誠(chéng)懇的語(yǔ)氣。詳細(xì)描述埃莉諾女士和湯姆聊天的內(nèi)容，除了工作，還可以涉及對(duì)書籍的熱愛、對(duì)社區(qū)生活的看法等，展現(xiàn)兩人的共鳴。最后描述兩人分別時(shí)的場(chǎng)景，周圍環(huán)境的烘托，如溫暖的燈光、輕柔的晚風(fēng)，以及他們內(nèi)心的感受，突出善良帶來的美好。情感線起初，埃莉諾女士丟失錢包后滿心焦急、失落與絕望，尤其是想到錢包里亡夫的照片，內(nèi)心充滿痛苦。湯姆撿到錢包時(shí)，懷著想要?dú)w還失主的單純善意。當(dāng)埃莉諾女士出現(xiàn)，湯姆因不確定歸屬而猶豫，埃莉諾女士則緊張擔(dān)憂。確認(rèn)歸屬后，埃莉諾女士轉(zhuǎn)為欣慰與感激，湯姆為幫助他人感到滿足。拒絕報(bào)酬時(shí)，埃莉諾女士更加感動(dòng)，兩人聊天增進(jìn)了解，分別時(shí)都被善良帶來的溫暖所感染，情感得到升華。故事線錢包丟失：埃莉諾女士從公園回家途中發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包丟失，里面有亡夫的珍貴照片，她焦急地沿路尋找。錢包被撿：湯姆下班路過書店，在人行道角落撿到埃莉諾女士的錢包，決定原地等待失失主出現(xiàn)：埃莉諾女士來到書店尋找錢包，看到湯姆站在路燈下，上前詢問。確認(rèn)歸屬：埃莉諾女士通過描述錢包內(nèi)物品，尤其是亡夫照片的細(xì)節(jié)，讓湯姆確信她是失主，湯姆歸還錢包。拒絕報(bào)酬：埃莉諾女士要給湯姆報(bào)酬，湯姆堅(jiān)決拒絕，兩人開始聊天。溫暖告別：聊天中埃莉諾女士了解到湯姆的工作和愛好，邀請(qǐng)他喝茶，兩人帶著溫暖的心情告別。主旨升華句andbustleofurbanlife,thesimpleactofkindnessandhonestycanstillshinebrightly,bridgthegapbetweenstrangersandbringingwarmthtoourhearts.(埃莉諾女士和湯姆的這次相遇美好地提醒著我們，在喧囂的城市生活中，善良和誠(chéng)實(shí)的簡(jiǎn)單舉動(dòng)依然能夠閃耀光芒，彌合陌生人之間的差距，溫暖我們的心靈。)Throughthelostandfoundofthepurse,wewitnessthepowerofhumarestoresthelostitembutreceiver.(通過錢包的失而復(fù)得，我們見證了人性善良的力量。它不僅找回了丟失的物品，還建立了一種聯(lián)系，豐富了給予者和接受者的生活。)showsthatasingleactofhonesty,likeTom'sreturnofthepurse,canig湯姆的故事表明，像湯姆歸還錢包這樣一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的誠(chéng)實(shí)舉動(dòng)，就能點(diǎn)燃希望的火花，恢復(fù)我們對(duì)人性善良的信心。)thatkindnesshasnoboundaries.Itcanbringpeoplefromdifferentwalksoflifetogetherandcreateamomentofpurejoyandconnection.(埃莉諾女士和湯姆因丟失的錢包而建立的聯(lián)系證明了善良沒有界限。它可以將來自不同生活背景的人聚集在一起，創(chuàng)造出純粹的快樂和聯(lián)系的時(shí)刻。)Thisheartwarmingstorybetterplacetolivein.(這個(gè)溫暖人心的故事告訴我們，即使是歸還丟失錢包這樣最微小的善之地。)Sensingtheyoungman'sworry,Ms.Eleanordecidedtoconfirmherownerglistenedwithunshedtearsasshebegan,"Thatbeach.Myhusband,withhiskindsmile,heldthatphotohasbeenmymostpreciouspossessihenoddedandhandedthepursetoherwitharelievedsmile.Tomsaid"It'smypleasure.Forgetaboutthemoney."Ms.Eleanorwasdeeplymovedbyhisselflessness.Shetookhisexperiencesofhelpingstudentsfindthersaid,"I'vealwayslovedtheyparted,thecityseemedofkindness.Then,shementionedtheuniquedesignohusbandhadmadeforhewasconvinced.HeplacedthewalletinherhandletoutasighofreliefandthankedhimprofuselyTomsaid"It'smypleasure.Forgetaboutthemoney."Ms.Eleanorwastouchedbygenerosity.Sheinsistedongivinghimsomething,butTomfirmlyMs.Eleanorwasimpressedandsaid,"I'vealwaysIhopetoseeyouagainsoon."changedthem,makingthembelievemoreinthebeautyofkindness.【答案】參考范文：Sensingtheyoungman'sworry,Ms.Eleanordecidedthecontentsofthepurse,mentioningthephotographofherlatehusbandwhomsheexplained.Tom,movedbyherwordsandtheevidentsorrow,handedthwoman.TheladywasfullofgraTomsaid,"It'smypleasure.Forgetabosenseofreliefandenlightenmentenvelopedhim.Tomadded,"It'sIwhoshouldbegrateful.Yourheartfeltthanksismorepreciousth