讀后續(xù)寫(老人的手套).ppt

1、寫作思路,On Christmas Eve, seventy-year-old George selected his food carefully. Skim milk was $2.99, white bread, 89 cents with a 10-cent discount. Leaving the cashier desk, he calculated that he had saved 80 cents today.,Time: On Christmas Eve-cold Character: seventy-year-old George Personality: poor,

2、thrift,At the exit, the wind reminded him of his gloves. “Where are they?” Not in the coat pockets. Not in the grocery bag either. He was sure he was wearing them when he entered the store. He clearly remembered putting them into the pocket of his coat. George made a second thorough search of all hi

3、s pockets, again including the grocery bag. Now he was sure they must have been dropped somewhere inside the store.,He found the gloves had been lost.,Where are they?,地點鎖定,Old George had bought the black leather gloves at a 25% discount, for just $35, ten years ago. They were soft and warm and very

4、durable(耐用的). He had taken care not to let a drop of water or rain touch his expensive gloves, so they looked like new. Losing this favorite possession(擁有物) was almost like losing a child to him.,He cherished the gloves very much.,George, calm on the outside but nervous inside, re-entered the store.

5、 He followed the same route he had walked before, starting at the bread counter, to the milk section, the corner where salt and sugar were placed, then the rest of the store. Several minutes of anxious searching turned out to be in vain (徒勞). He asked the customers whether they saw a pair of black l

6、eather gloves, but they said no. Then he went over to the cashier without hesitation to ask if she had received any lost gloves, but only received the same answer. His heart grew heavier.,He tried very hard to find the gloves but failed.,“Society has changed, people have changed,” he murmured to him

7、self. “Years ago, if somebody picked up something lost, they would give it back. Now a good action is lost.” Yet he did not give up hope. He started to stare at anybody wearing black gloves to see if they looked like his. The first two persons he sae did wear gloves but one was womens and the other

8、not black.,預(yù)測故事的結(jié)局： 1)老人有沒有找到對他來說很珍貴的手套？ 老人最后終于找到了自己的手套 2)手套是怎么找到的？ 有好心人把撿到的手套還給老人 3) 這個故事要說明一個什么樣的道理 要說明There is still good action in todays world.世界還是有好心人，寒冷的冬天還是有人間的溫暖，這個世界還是充滿希望的。,Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer. During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a ne

9、w pair.,預(yù)測第一段的主要故事內(nèi)容： 1)老人有沒有在第一段找到手套？ 沒有找到，因為第二段中寫到he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair. 2)第一段應(yīng)該寫什么？ 老人尋找手套的曲折的過程和因沒有找到而失落的心情。 3) 如何在寫作中體現(xiàn)尋找手套的曲折？ 他看見一副手套，他冒昧地去詢問，結(jié)果卻不是 4) 第一段中出現(xiàn)的lawyer怎么和老人之間發(fā)生聯(lián)系 律師有和老人差不多的手套,Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer.,他竟然戴著一副黑色的皮手套！ He was wearing

10、 a pair of black leather gloves! 他欣喜若狂！ He was wild with joy! A wild gaiety took hold of him. His eyes were sparkling like diamonds. His heart beat wildly. His heart beat so fast that he could hardly breathe. His face brightened up with joy / pleasure. His face lit up with excitement,他毫不猶豫地沖上前去，抓住那人

11、的手，指著手套問：“先生，你這手套是不是剛剛撿到的？” Without any hesitation he rushed up to the man , caught hold of his arm, pointing at the gloves and asked, “ Sir, are the gloves the ones you have just picked up?” 讓他倍感失望的是，律師模樣的人否認了這是老人的手套,有點惱怒。 To his great disappointment, the man looking like a lawyer denied it, appear

12、ing rather annoyed / upset.,老人道了歉，不情愿地走開了 The old man apologized and left reluctantly. 他坐在一個長凳上好一會，滿臉憂郁，嘆著氣。 He sat on a bench for a long time with glum looks on his face，sighing. 然后，他做了個決定。他請求收銀員萬一有人找到手套交給她們還請她們保管一下。 Then he made a decision. He walked up to the cashier and asked her to keep them in

13、 case the lost gloves were found. 最后他拖著沉重的腳步走向了商場的出口 Finally he dragged his heavy legs towards the exit.,During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair.,預(yù)測第二段的主要故事內(nèi)容： 1)老人有沒有在第二段找到手套？ 找到了 2)手套是怎么找到的？他的心情怎么樣？,Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer. During the whole

14、 holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair. 故事的總體發(fā)展可能是老George發(fā)現(xiàn)一個看起來像律師的人恰巧戴了一副黑色的皮手套，但是結(jié)果可想而知。臨走前他拜托收銀員幫他留意(第一段的可作要點)。整個圣誕期間，他肯定一直在猶像要不要再買一雙手套。抱著最后一線希望，他又去店里問了，他丟的手套居然被好心人撿到放在收銀臺，他真是喜出望外。,可能懷疑這個男的偷了手套,不是這個男的偷的,翻譯,1. 可能看起來很唐突，喬治毫不猶豫地上前并且詢問這雙手套是否是他的，但是得到個令人失望的答案。（abrupt：adj唐突的） Abrupt

15、 as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer. as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，作“雖然，盡管”解。這時從句常用倒裝語序，即把從句中的表語、狀語或動詞原形放在as之前。eg： Strange as it may seem，it is true盡管這事看上去很奇怪，但卻是真的。 Try as he might，Tom could not get out of the difficulties不管怎樣努力，湯姆還是擺脫

16、不了困境。,2.仔細思考后，他意識到?jīng)]有人會愚蠢到以至于正好在商店里面戴著它們。（so.as to太.以至于） On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the store.,3.他沒有其他選擇只能要求收銀員保管它們?nèi)f一丟失的手套被找到了。（alternative：n. 選擇，in case:萬一） He had no other alternative but to ask the cashier to keep them in case the lost gl

17、oves were found.,4.然后，他拖著腿走向了出口。（drag：v拖拽） Then he dragged his legs towards the exit.,5.總而言之，在深冬，他不能沒有手套。 After all, in deep winter, he could not do without gloves.,6.最后，可憐的喬治決定另外買一副皮手套。 Finally poor George decided to buy another pair of leather gloves.,7.抱著最后一絲希望，他再一次踏入了商店。 With the last ray of hop

18、e, he stepped into the store again.,8.他一開門，收銀員就告訴他的確有一副手套很像他丟的那副。（no sooner.than: 一.就.） No sooner had he opened the door than the cashier told him there was indeed one such pair as he lost. no sooner. than.倒裝 hardly. when.倒裝 eg: Hardly had we set off when it began to rain. on doing./the moment./as s

19、oon as/once,9.在仔細檢查了它們之后，他欣喜若狂，向收銀員表達了感謝并且對自己說好的行為并沒有消失。 After examining them carefully, he was wild with joy, expressing sincere gratitude and saying to himself that a good action was never lost.前后呼應(yīng),Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, wearing black leather gloves. Abrupt as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer. On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the