作文講評(píng)(描寫地理位置的說明文).ppt

1、關(guān)于地方、景點(diǎn)介紹,荷塘月色.mp3,一、地方特點(diǎn),位置：be located in，be situated in，lie in/to/on the east of, There stands/lies, lies on the (eastern) coast of , lies off Hubei province lies in the middle of China. Hunan lies on the south of Hubei. Zhongxiang lies about 220 kilometers (to the) northwest of Wuhan. Shanghai li

2、es on the eastern coast of China. Taiwan Island lies off the eastern coast of China.,歷史：have/with a (long) history of. , date back to , date from , have witnessed too much in history Although a small country, it has amazing history of over 5,000 years. Few places on the planet are packed with histor

3、y as Ireland The Great Wall of China dates back to more than 2,500 years ago.,人口：have/with a population of., the population of is, percent of the population are New Zealand has a population of about 3.8 million people, of which about fourteen percent are Maori Ireland has a young population , with f

4、orty four percent of the total population under the age of 25. 面積：cover/have/with an area of., take up, the area/size of is,環(huán)境：with green hills and beautiful rivers, be surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers 氣候：neither too cold nor too hot，the climate varies from place to place The climate

5、of the British Isles is mild with a lot of rain. The coldest month is February , when the temperature can be as low/high as ,特色：be famous/well known/distinguished for., have the distinction of, the special character of the place is, is home to 名勝景觀：a place with many tourist attractions/places of int

6、erest/scenic spots ,have/get a good/fantastic view of,二、地位和評(píng)價(jià) 1. The cathedral is famous for the height of its tower, which is without doubt the highest and handsome in England . 2. You will never regret if you pay a visit to it . 3. It is really a great feast for your eyes. 4. A trip to China will

7、make you know more about it besides/ as well as/ in addition to/ apart from its culture and history. 5. Youll be rewarded not only by/with the view of,but also by,Practice,蘇州位于上海西面50英里處，人口五百多萬，占地8488平方公里。 Suzhou is located /is situated/lies 50 miles (to the) west of Shanghai , covering an area of 84

8、88 square kilometers , with a population of over 5 million.,鐘祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔，全校擁有師生近四千余人，一年四季被綠樹紅花環(huán)繞著，是一個(gè)風(fēng)景如畫的地方。 Located on the bank of the South Lake, No.1 middle school of Zhongxiang has a population of nearly 4,000, including teachers and students. Surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers all

9、the year round, it is really picturesque(風(fēng)景如畫的) all the time.,整體結(jié)構(gòu)分布,Para 1 總體介紹/位置，面積、人口 Para 2 周邊環(huán)境，交通狀況，歷史，名勝古跡，本地特色，風(fēng)土人情 Para 3 針對(duì)描述，結(jié)合寫作要求進(jìn)行結(jié)尾。 語言 1涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn) 2運(yùn)用靈活的表達(dá)方式，長短句結(jié)合； 運(yùn)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，盡力使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯 3 有效地使用語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 4 書寫工整，卷面整潔,澳大利亞位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大國家。它是一個(gè)以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰遥挥猩俨糠盅睾５貐^(qū)有充足的雨量。它由

10、六個(gè)州組成，其中墨爾本(Melbourne)、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的兩個(gè)城市。它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動(dòng)植物而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。 總面積：7,686,850 square kilometers 人口：約2,000萬 注意：要有標(biāo)題，介紹必須包括所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條翻譯成英語。_,Located in the smallest continentOceania，Australia is the sixth largest country in the world。 It covers a total area of 7,686,850 sq

11、uare kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall. It is made up of six states，of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Because it is famous for its bright sunshine，countless sheep and cattle and i

12、ts unique wildlife，tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its beautiful scenery.,佳句賞析,澳大利亞位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大國家總面積：7,686,850 square kilometers 人口：約2,000萬,1、Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , Australia , whose population is 20 million , is the sixth largest country in the world ,

13、 situated on the smallest continent , Oceania .（李翔）,2、Australia , the sixth largest country in the world , lies on the smallest continent , Oceania . It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , with only a population of 20 million .（韓雨璁）,3 Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers makes

14、 it the sixth biggest country in the world.(彭珊) 4 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 20 million, which makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(王麗娟),3、Australia is typical of a country with dry climate , and only a few parts which are close to the oc

15、ean have adequate rainfalls .（邵敏）,4、The dry climate covers the whole country except for a few offshore districts which have abundant rainfalls .（楊昕琰） 5、,Rain seldom falls on the land except for some areas along the seaside ， so most parts of the country are very dry and hot all the year around .（楊揚(yáng)）

16、，,它是一個(gè)以干旱氣候?yàn)橹鞯膰?，只有少部分沿海地區(qū)有充足的雨量。,Most parts of the country is dry all over the year with few places (having) abundant rain.(曾誠) It has so hot and dry a climate that only in some parts along the coast is there enough/adequate rain.(王麗娟) What is known to us all is that Australia is a place where the

17、climate is dry and only a minority of areas by the sea have enough rain.(夏潔蓮),它由六個(gè)州組成，其中墨爾本(Melbourne)、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的兩個(gè)城市,It consists of / is made up of six states, of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest .,它以明媚的陽光、數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動(dòng)植物而著名，世界各地的游客來到這里體驗(yàn)它獨(dú)特的美麗。,6、There are warm sunshine , a good many

18、 cattle and countless sheep as well as special wild animals and plants , which have appealed to the tourists all over the world to enjoy / experience its unique view .（李絲絲） 7、Its universally acknowledged that Australia is not only famous for its warm sunshine and a good many cattle and sheep , but a

19、lso is home to a rich diversity of fantastic wild animals and plants .（熊曼婷）,8、The warm sunshine , countless cattle and sheep as well as many other strange wild animals and plants make it one of the most famous country , attracting a great many people from all over the world to experience its charm o

20、f nature.（孫安安）,9、When you come there , you are served/ rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plants .（洪勝男）,10. Having so beautiful scenery , it attracts hundreds of thousands of tourists throughout the world to come h

21、ere , where they can have a feast for their minds as well as their eyes .（李翔） 11. It is also said to be one of the most suitable place to live in.(崔雅倩) 12. It is a fascinating place marked out for tourists.(謝千馳),補(bǔ)充語句,Having been separated from other continents for millions of years , Australia has m

22、any plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the world .,How to polish your composition?,應(yīng)用定語從句 Australia is made up of six states, of which Melbourne and Sydney are the two biggest cities. With結(jié)構(gòu)作定語 It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers , with only a population of 20 million.,分詞作狀語 Situated on the smallest continent ,Oceania, Australi