高三英語書面表達--建議信.ppt

1、建議信,高三英語書面表達,【學習目標】 學習建議信的寫法，掌握建議信的常用短語和句型，正確撰寫建議信。 【學習重點】 掌握建議信的常用短語和句型。 【學習難點】 組織恰當的語言，正確撰寫建議信。,建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括： 1. 說明寫信目的。 2. 提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告。 3. 表達希望采納建議并期盼回復。,文體概述,【學習內容】,假如你收到一封叫 Flower 的網友寫來的一封信，她向你詢問如何交友，請給她回一封信，并提出建議

2、。提示：1.交朋友首先要對別人友善；2.要使陌生人感到親切，不管他在何處，關心別人勝過自己；3.與別人有分歧時不吵架，要商量；4.不要相信危急時刻背棄朋友的人，因為“患難見真情”。 要求：1.詞數：100左右；2.表達要清楚，語言簡潔、流暢；3.針對問題給出建議，層次清晰。,一、美文欣賞,Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. I would l

3、ike to put forward the following suggestions. First of all, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others. Secondly, if I were you, I would look after others more than myself. In my opinion, it will be better to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, yo

4、u can discuss with others .I dont think it necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, dont trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed. I trust you will take good consideration of my suggestion. I hope everything goes on well with you, and youl

5、l make a lot of good friends. Yours truly, Simon,Dear Flower,1. 給某人提建議 _ 2. 如下 _ 3. 在做某事時遇到困難 _ 4. 利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意見_,ask sb. for advice,give sb. some advice (on),as follows,have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.,make use of,二、常用語塊,6. 制訂計劃 _ 7. 認為有用 _ 8. 參加 _ 9. 聽從某人的建議 _ 10. 把考慮在內 _,take sth. into acc

6、ount/consideration,make a plan,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,take part in/participate in,follow ones advice,11. 得到改善 _ 12. 有所好轉 _ 13. 依我看來 _ 14. 我已收到你的來信，得知你 _ 15. 我建議 _,I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you, I would/May I

7、 suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion that,get improved,change for the better,in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view,I have received your letter saying that you,1. 你就向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議。 2. 我覺得如果能夠將會很有幫助的。,1. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to

8、 make some constructive suggestions.,2. I feel that it would be beneficial if,三、常用句式,3. 我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。 4. 我相信你會考慮我的建議的。 5. 如能看到我會非常開心的。,3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,5. I would be more than happy to see,4. I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take

9、 good consideration of my suggestion.,Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions. To begin with, youd better_ Besides, If I were you, I would _ Moreover, I w

10、ould like to suggest that _ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good work. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,四、寫作模板,Dear Roy, I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice t

11、o how to learn Chinese well. Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.,asking,on

12、,it,newspapers,五、習作修改(做短文改錯，背經典范文),Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese. Try and write to me in Ch

13、inese the next time. Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua,Besides,easily,They,and,1. ask asking現在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關系。 2. to onadvice后常搭配介詞on。 3. 在few前加a根據句意，此處為提一些建議，表示肯定意義，用a few。 4. this it考查句型it is + adj.+ to do sth.意為“做是的”。 5. newspaper newspapers因為newspaper為可數名詞，而且與前后的books, magazines屬于并列關系，故用復數形式。,6. B

14、eside Besides此處表示補充說明關系“此外/而且”，beside意為“在旁邊”。 7. easier easily修飾謂語動詞用副詞形式。 8. He They根據前一句話中的more Chinese friends可知用They。 9. or and此處兩個動作為“順承”關系，而非“選擇”關系。 10. 去掉next time前的the相對于現在的“下一”，next前不用the。,假定你是李華，最近你們班從英國轉來了一名新生Jenny。這是她第一次遠離家鄉(xiāng)，她很想念父母及家人，有時候思念至深，常常獨自一個人深夜哭泣。對此，請你給Jenny寫一封建議信，要點如下： 1. 鼓勵Jenn

15、y堅定求學信念，志存高遠。 2. 就Jenny的目前狀況，提兩到三個建議。 注意：1. 詞數100左右。 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。,六、實戰(zhàn)演練,Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most peop

16、le do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.,Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still mis