英語環(huán)境保護(hù)作文

1、環(huán)境保護(hù),【話題解讀】 環(huán)保是當(dāng)今社會(huì)的一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題，和我們每個(gè)人息息相關(guān)。它能考查學(xué)生對現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的關(guān)心程度、對事物的觀察能力，而且能夠培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的環(huán)保意識?？疾樾问酵ǔＪ且罂忌榻B一些保護(hù)環(huán)境的做法，或針對一些環(huán)境現(xiàn)象或環(huán)保措施發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，也會(huì)要求考生寫環(huán)保倡議書。,基礎(chǔ)篇,【真題回放】 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家衛(wèi)生城市的號召，某校開展了“綠色港城，健康生 活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。,注意： 1) 詞數(shù)90 左右，短文開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總

2、詞數(shù)； 2) 不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang, its our duty to _ _ (2016 江蘇連云港),【真題分析】 這是一篇命題作文，題目為“The Green City, the Healthy Life”，寫作時(shí)要緊緊圍繞這個(gè)話題展開。根據(jù)文字提示，可分兩段來寫：第一段介紹一些環(huán)保的做法；第二段發(fā)表自己對這一主題的觀點(diǎn)。在介紹環(huán)保的做法時(shí)要注意語言的條理性；在發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可以從自己對環(huán)保的認(rèn)識、環(huán)保對健康的影響等方面來闡述。,【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】 The Gree

3、n City, the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang, its our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. What can we do? We can reduce air pollution by traveling around by bike. Its also good for our health. Its necessary for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin.,In this w

4、ay, we can keep our city clean. And wed better plant more trees to protect the natural environment. As a citizen of Lianyungang, Ill try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. In my opinion, everyone can do something to make a difference.,【高分突破】 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a ci

5、tizen of Lianyungang, its our duty to help protect our citys environment and make it a greener place to live. Here are some small things we all can do and should do:,提高篇,First of all, we can ride bicycles to and from school as much as possible to reduce air pollution. Secondly, wherever we go, we sh

6、ould throw rubbish into rubbish bins to keep our city clean and tidy. Last but not least, we should plant as many trees as possible to protect our citys natural environment.,In my opinion, a green city is the key to a healthy life. If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, Lianyunga

7、ng will become a better place to live. Lets take action now!,【高分揭秘】 1. 習(xí)作內(nèi)容緊扣主題，段落層次清晰，語言準(zhǔn)確地道； 2. 在介紹一些環(huán)保的做法時(shí)作者用了first of all, secondly和last but not least，使得習(xí)作富有條理性；,3. 在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)作者用了兩個(gè)短語the key to和make a contribution to，提升了習(xí)作的語言檔次。 4. 在結(jié)尾部分作者用了一個(gè)Lets開頭的祈使句來號召大家一起行動(dòng)，為創(chuàng)建綠色家園而努力，語言簡潔、生動(dòng)、有力。,【素材積累】 1. 詞匯 觀

8、點(diǎn)：in my opinion, from my point of view, as for me 其他：climate change, global warming, green, recycle, reusable,2. 句子 If we go on polluting the earth, it wont be fit for us to live in. Thats a problem we Chinese must pay special attention to. The development of private cars has brought about a series

9、of problems. I believe we can make our earth a better place to live. Lets take action and be a green person!,【寫作任務(wù)】 榮光學(xué)校九年級 (2) 班就“環(huán)境問題”召 開了一 次班會(huì) ，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”為題進(jìn)行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學(xué)對未來有些擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英文寫一篇短文。,提示： 1. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。 2. 短文中應(yīng)包含至少4個(gè)要點(diǎn)。 3.

10、 書寫工整、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80。 注意：文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： optimistic adj.樂觀的 government n.政府 take measures to 采取措施 private adj. 私有的,Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse? Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. _ _ _ (2016 湖南衡陽),Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or

11、Worse? Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. In fact, they think that the world will be a better place than it is now. More and more people are becoming volunteers to protect the environment. Also, the government will take more measures to improve the environment.,However, other students are worried about the future. They think that more trees will be cut down and there will be more private cars on the roads. They say the environment will become worse. In my