基礎寫作15-對立觀點.ppt

1、基礎寫作指導（十五） 議論文觀點對立,一、寫作特點： 1、對立觀點式議論文是對事實進行 對比，然后加以分析，得出結(jié)論。 2、時態(tài)：較多用現(xiàn)在時， 3、人稱：常用第三人稱 they，但給 自己的觀點時，一般用第一人稱 I 。,二、對立觀點式的模板： （一）開頭：點出社會現(xiàn)象或討論問題。 （二）正文：對立觀點 1、有人認為X 是好事，贊成X， 為什么？ 2、有人認為X 是壞事，反對X， 為什么？ (三)、結(jié)尾：我的看法。,三、常用句型 （一）開頭：點出社會現(xiàn)象或討論問題。 1 With the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated deba

2、te about whether Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. 2 In recent years, there is an increasing tendency for Chinese students to go to foreign countries for study.,3 Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

3、4 The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from child.,5 Opinions are divided on the question. 6 There are different opinions about it. 7 There is a heated debate among people.,(二) 正文：對立觀點 正面觀點 1. Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X

4、. 2. Some state that it is true that 3.They point out the fact that 4.They also argue that 5.There is no denying the fact that students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.,反面觀點 1 However, other people stand on a different ground. 2 They consider it harm

5、ful to do X. 3 They firmly point out that 4 But some hold the opinions that 5 However, we cannot ignore the fact that most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience and the costs are high as well.,(三)、結(jié)尾：你的觀點 1 There is some truth in both arguments. But I thin

6、k the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. 2 Personally, I consider the disadvantages before the advantages. It is high time that we thought twice before going studying abroad.,四、經(jīng)典范文 （一）、高三學習很緊張、很累，為了增強孩子的體質(zhì)，使他們在考試中考出好成績，家長經(jīng)常為孩子購買大量滋補品。假如你是王明，在最近的一次班會上，你們班的同學就高三學生是否需要吃補品來保持健康進行討論，請你根據(jù)下文提示，談

7、談自己的觀點。,（寫作內(nèi)容） 1 請根據(jù)以上提示，談談你的觀點， 文章開頭已給出； 2 文章必須包括所有提示要點，但不 要逐條譯成英語。 3 只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。 參考詞匯：tonic補品,With the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated debate about whether Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. There are different opinions about it. Some students think it

8、unnecessary to take tonics, because tonics will make them put on more weight, which does harm to their health. Moreover, the parents will bring more stress to the Senior 3 students if they show too,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,much concern by offering the tonics and the price of tonics is rather high. However, s

9、ome students hold the opinion that it is easy for the Senior 3 students to feel tired because of their work load, so it is good to take some tonics. They are too busy to have sports, so tonics can help refresh them. Personally, I consider doing sports is better than taking tonics.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,

10、_,（二）、三班的同學進行了一場有關英語學習的討論。討論的題目是：學習英語要不要從兒童時期開始？請你根據(jù)下表中提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。,注意： 1、文章的起始句已給出； 2、只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。 3、參考詞匯： 基礎foundation 漢語拼音Chinese pinyin,The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Some of them think that English learnin

11、g should start from childhood as little boys and girls have a very good memory and they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation,_,_,_,for their future English learning. But some hold the opinions that if they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same

12、time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,五、實戰(zhàn)演練 (一) 假設你是宋柯，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封

13、信，反映討論結(jié)果。,【寫作內(nèi)容】 1 包含圖表中的所有內(nèi)容； 2 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使 行文連貫。 【寫作要求】 1、必須使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容； 2、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 【參考詞匯】 郊區(qū) suburb; 支持 be in favour of 生活條件 living conditions 反對 be against,【評分標準】 句子結(jié)構的準確性和復雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。 Dear Editor, Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo shou

14、ld be moved out of the city. _Yours truely, Song Ke,審題： 文體： 議論文 人稱： 第三人稱 時態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時 信息組織：,1 贊成遷出。 Some of my class are in favor of the idea. 2 游客多，交通堵塞。 Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. 3 郊區(qū)環(huán)境好。 Animals will have more space and better living conditions in the subur

15、bs., Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.,_,4 反對遷出。 Other students are against the idea. 5 建于1906年，中外聞名

16、。 Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, is well-known at home and abroad. 6 搬遷易造成動物死亡。 Moving may cause the death of the animals., However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well- known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may ca

17、use the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is.,_,_,_,_,_, Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in t

18、he suburbs. However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo,built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may cause the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is. To move or not, I think this is a big decisi

19、on which has to be done by people in Beijing.,（二）隨著廣告業(yè)的發(fā)展，廣告已與我們的生活息息相關。但是廣告是利還是弊？在2007年4月8日，我們班分為兩組，進行了討論。請根據(jù)下面兩組討論的結(jié)果，用英語寫一篇短文。 Group A 虛假廣告太多，坑害消費者； 占用報刊太多的版面，浪費紙張； 占用電視、廣播太多的時間； 應該取締。,Group B 廣告能指導消費，使消費者了解商品； 廣告也能給人以藝術享受； 你的觀點： 廣告太多會使人心煩； 應當適當發(fā)展，提高質(zhì)量。 【寫作內(nèi)容】 合理取舍提示信息； 文章要通順、連貫。,【寫作要求】 必須使用5個句子表

20、達全部的內(nèi)容； 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 【參考詞匯】 更糟糕的是 whats worse； 能指導消費 direct our choices of goods 【評分標準】 句子結(jié)構的準確性和復雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。,April l8th, 2007 Fine Today we had a discussion about advertisements in two groups. With the development of the economy ,advertisements have been closely connected with peoples life. Bu

21、t is it good or bad?,審題： 文體： 議論文 人稱： 第三人稱 時態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時 信息組織：,1 虛假廣告太多; Advertisements dont tell real things 2 坑害消費者； They make the customers buy things that they dont want. 3 占用報刊太多的版面，Advertisements cover much space. 4 浪費紙張； They waste a lot of paper.,5 占用電視、廣播太多的時間； Advertisements take up too much ti

22、me on TV and radio. 6 應該取締。 Some people think advertisements should be stopped., Some people think advertisements should be stopped because they dont tell real things and make the customers buy things that they dont want. Whats worse, advertisements cover much space, which wastes a lot of paper, and

23、 take up too much time on TV and radio.,7 廣告能指導消費; Advertisements can direct our choices of goods. 8 使消費者了解商品; They can tell the latest information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. 9 廣告也能給人以藝術享受； We can enjoy the some well-done advertisements., Some other people think that advertisements can direct our choices of goods, because they can tell the latest information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. Moreover, we can enjoy the some well-done advertisements.,你的觀點： 10 廣告太多會使人心煩； Too many advertisements will m