讓書面表達更具文采.ppt

1、讓書面表達更具文采,讓書面表達更具文采,1. words,2. useful expressions,3. linking words,4. sentence structures,5. passage organization,一. 運用高級詞匯,1.這件事情挺難的。,This is a challenging job.,2. 我們就會了解父母的辛苦工作。,Well then know about parents hardship.,3. 這有助于我們學(xué)會節(jié)儉。,This helps us learn to be thrifty.,高級詞匯舉例:,significant,hardship,a

2、vailable,contact,demanding,relatively,wasteful,frequent,二.增加形容詞或副詞,1.在我們的校園里有一個小池塘。,2. 如果父母的收入較好,There lies a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.,If their parents have a relatively high income,.,表示程度的副詞舉例,hardly,seldom,rarely,merely,relatively,slightly,a bit,partly,completely,三. 置于句首的副詞,1. 這極有可能使孩子

3、養(yǎng)成依賴父母的習(xí)慣。,2. 尤其當(dāng)父母有足夠的錢養(yǎng)家時，。,Probably this will make the children develop the habit of living on parents.,Especially when their parents have enough money to support the family,.,句首副詞舉例,strangely,frequently,especially,unbelievably,unexpectedly,surprisingly,besides,四. 各類句型,1.插入語,然而, 其他同學(xué)持有不同意見。,The o

4、ther students, however, hold the different view.,另外，他們會以為將來可以依賴父母。,Besides, theyll think they can rely on their parents in the future.,2. It 句型,我們期望今年有個好收成。,It is expected that there will be a good harvest.,30%學(xué)生認為無必要讓孩子知道父母的收入。,30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much

5、their parents earn.,3. with 結(jié)構(gòu),作業(yè)做完了，那個男孩出去玩了。,With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.,有了父母可依賴，他們就不再努力學(xué)習(xí)了。,Theyll not study hard any more, with rich parents to depend on.,4.分詞短語,30%同學(xué)不贊同這一看法， 認為孩子不應(yīng)當(dāng)。,30% of my classmates disagree with it, saying children shouldnt.,知道了這點，他們會越來越努力學(xué)習(xí)。,Kn

6、owing this, theyll study harder and harder.,5.從句,他所做的一切使我們很失望。（主語從句）,What he did disappointed us all.,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)知道父母的收入，因為這有助于我們 理解他們的艱辛。（狀語從句）,We should know parents income, because itll help us understand how hard they have to work.,五. 連接成分,表示時間:,first of all; to begin with; and then; finally; eventuall

7、y-,表示遞進:,whats more; moreover; furthermore; in addition; to make things worse; the most important of all;,表示并列:,and; but; or; so,表示轉(zhuǎn)折:,however; on the contrary; nevertheless; anyway; anyhow; in spite of; despite,表示因果:,as a result; result in; thus; owing to; due to; as a consequence; therefore,表示結(jié)論:,

8、in short; in brief; in a word; above all; on the whole,Joe, who is a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem.,Joe, a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem.,Joe is a lawyer in town. Joe persuaded them to settle the problem.,六. 綜合運用,I followed your advice. I went to the sup

9、ermarket. I found four chairs there. They were in good shape. They were at a reasonable price.,I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I found four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.,Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably pric

10、ed chairs in good shape.,假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報“大家談”欄目的一個討論。本次話題為：父母的收入有沒有必要讓孩子知道？請你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。,We do have different opinions on this matter. Most of us (about 70%) think we should know our parents income since it will help us understand how hard our parents have to work, no ma

11、tter how much they earn. Then we will study harder and will not waste money any more. We may also learn to share our parents trouble.,However, about 30% of my classmates think it unnecessary to let the children know how much their parents earn. If they know their parents have enough money to support

12、 the family, they will not study hard for they neednt worry about the future. Especially when their parents have a relatively high income, the children will easily form a wasteful habit.,05年浙江卷書面表達:,你的英國朋友正在做一個課題: 世界各地的 生日慶祝方式。 請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一短文： 一. 通常方式: 1.生日聚會 2.生日禮物 3.生日祝福 二. 我認為有意義的慶祝方式和理由。 詞數(shù) 100-12

13、0。,Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receive nice gifts as well as pure-hearted wishes. Besides, parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children.,Since birthday celebrations is one of the most important activities in ones life, it can