書面表達(dá).ppt

1、English Writing 英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練,寫過去的事,主要特點(diǎn),記敘為主稍加議論旁帶說明,空間順序,時(shí)間順序,能力要求,邏輯順序,主要問題,要點(diǎn)不全,線索不清,原因：步驟不對(duì),書面表達(dá),六 步 法,書面表達(dá)六步法,書面表達(dá)六步法,一、審題,確定基本要素:5W1H,何 時(shí) 何 地 何 人 為 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,書面表達(dá)六步法,二、抓要點(diǎn),確定主要行為,What happened?,書面表達(dá)六步法,三、擴(kuò)展成句,形成基本語(yǔ)義單位,Who did what?,書面表達(dá)六步法,四、連句成文,時(shí)間 空間 細(xì)節(jié) 連貫 呼應(yīng),書面表達(dá)六步法,五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),要盡量剔除錯(cuò)誤,書面表達(dá)六步法,六

2、、謄寫,卷面不工整扣5分,課堂練習(xí),請(qǐng)用六步法寫一篇短文,五個(gè) “W”一個(gè) “H”,第一步 審題,認(rèn)真讀題然后找出,把答案寫在題中相應(yīng)的位置,書面表達(dá)經(jīng)典示例,假設(shè)你是李華，在美國(guó)探親。2000年2月8日清晨，你目擊了一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料，報(bào)告當(dāng)時(shí)所見情況。根據(jù)下列圖畫寫出報(bào)告。1、目擊者應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確報(bào)告事實(shí)； 2、詞數(shù)100左右； 3、結(jié)尾已為你寫好。 _About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,附圖,1,2,3,4,At

3、7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.,第二步 抓要點(diǎn),一幅圖，一要點(diǎn),時(shí)態(tài)直達(dá) 語(yǔ)態(tài)到位,介/副詞緊隨,抓要點(diǎn)，配動(dòng)詞,第三步 擴(kuò)展成句,把要點(diǎn)變成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副詞,第四步 連句成文,增加細(xì)節(jié) 呼應(yīng)首尾,句與句相連,詞與詞搭配,第五步 查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),主謂一致嗎？,時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？,時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？,有“半截話”嗎？,第六步 謄寫,卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,作業(yè)選評(píng),要改進(jìn)嗎？,為什么？,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,At 7:1

4、5 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden ri

5、ght turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to check out the old man.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital