說(shuō)明文Summarywriting寫作---教師版

1、說(shuō)明文 summary1. 寫說(shuō)明文概述的步驟：1) ?確定主題句。確定閱讀文章的主題句，一般在段首。沒(méi)有主題句的需要自己組合。?2) 尋找關(guān)鍵詞。分析主題句意義，確定關(guān)鍵詞，關(guān)鍵詞一般體現(xiàn)為名詞、形容詞，關(guān)鍵詞的數(shù)目決定了概 括的信息濃度。 ?3) 重構(gòu)主題句。概括的主題句邏輯上要統(tǒng)攝后面所有的支撐句。可以從作者的寫作目的逆推，反映寫作目 的主題句是高度抽象的，它基本決定了概括的質(zhì)量。 ?4) 重組支撐句。支撐句的意義在邏輯上受制于主題句，可以是補(bǔ)充過(guò)程或者提供證據(jù)。 ? 口訣：簡(jiǎn)括為：縮長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)短，省卻細(xì)膩。(括：概括性。見(jiàn)：間接引語(yǔ)。短：短的連詞。細(xì)膩：細(xì)節(jié)和例 子) ?2. 寫說(shuō)明文概述要

2、注意的事項(xiàng)：1) 不能摘抄原文句子 , 要用自己的語(yǔ)言“重組” 主要內(nèi)容；2) 只保留主要觀點(diǎn)，不要細(xì)節(jié)；3) 不要發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)；4) 不要把列舉、描繪性語(yǔ)言當(dāng)成概述性語(yǔ)言；5) 一般用第三人稱轉(zhuǎn)述；6) 概述不要太寬泛，缺乏針對(duì)性，也不要只針對(duì)原文某個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)，概述得太狹窄；7) 注意段中句子的銜接 , 切忌只簡(jiǎn)單地寫出一些互不相干的句子；8) 保證無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤說(shuō)明文 Summary 的教學(xué)步驟第一步 通讀全文 , 領(lǐng)略大意。通常 summary 的開(kāi)頭都有一些常用的句子，學(xué)生可以積累用。第二步 小結(jié)每一段的大意。用最簡(jiǎn)練的文字把文章每段的主要內(nèi)容概括出即可。第三步 根據(jù)每一段的大意以及作者的側(cè)

3、重點(diǎn) , 不要加入自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，綜合歸納全文的大意。對(duì)于說(shuō)明性 或描述性的短文，可以用概括性文字說(shuō)明 某一現(xiàn)象 。比如可概括如下： This article points out the common phenomenon Summary 范文Directions: Summarize in no more than 60 words the main idea of the passage and how it is illustrated. Use your own words as far as possible.Although problems are a part of our

4、lives, it certainly doesn t mean that we let them rule forever. One day or the other, you ll have to stand up and sparyo blem, I don t want you in my life.Of course, we ve been fighting troubles ever since we were b.o Prnroblems with friends, parents, girlfriends, husbands, and children the list goe

5、s on. Apart from these, the inner conflicts within ourselves work, too. These keep adding to our problems. Problems come in different shapes and colors and feelings./But good news is that all problems can be dealt with. Now read on to know how to solve your problems./Talk, it really helps. What most

6、 of us think is that our problem can be understood only by us and that no talking is going to help.?But the truth is that when you talk about it, you renegative energies that have been gathering within you. Talking helps you move on and let go.Write your problems.?Having a personal diary can also be

7、 of huge help if you don wt ant a real person to talk with. When you write down your problems, you are setting free all the tension from your system. You can try throwing away the paper on which you wrote your problems. By doing this, imagine yourself throwing away the problems from your life.Dont l

8、ose faith and hope. No matter what you lose in life, dont lose faith and hope. Evelose all your money, family yo u should still have faith.?With faith and hope, you can rebuild everything that you lose./Your problems aren tht e worst. No matter what problem you get in life, there raen other one mill

9、ion people whose problems are huger than yours.?Your problems might just seem big and worse, but in reality they can be removed.?Go about and solve your problems because every problem, however big or small, always has a way out./ 分析：這是一片典型的說(shuō)明性質(zhì)要求的 Summary Writing. 說(shuō)明文的 Summary 格式是說(shuō)明對(duì)象 /現(xiàn)象/ 問(wèn)題 + 解釋/分

10、述/解決措施/建議。所以我們來(lái)分析這篇文章，主要的問(wèn)題是 problems 是我們生 活中的一部分而且與我們生活息息相關(guān)，我們需要去處理它。接下來(lái)給了我們一些解決問(wèn)題的方 法，每一段的第一句做了簡(jiǎn)要敘述。最后總結(jié)有問(wèn)題不要害怕，不論再大都可以解決。這樣一片 文章的 structure 就基本出來(lái)了。最后注意使用語(yǔ)句的時(shí)候不要抄原文的。Possible Version:The passage indicates that problems occupy a part of life and is closely related to nearly each aspects of our life. The tips about how to overcome them can be seen as follows. Firstly, try to talk with other. Secondly,