BEC2寫作參考范文

1、bec2參考范文sample answer for test 2 & 3 （模擬題集）test-2part 1to： jasonhotmailcomsubject: presentation seminardear mr. jason,for the increasing workload concerning/about presentation, i sense the need to join a related seminar.this seminar is hosted by new-oriental and composed with/of details of prese

2、ntation, which is believed to be valuable to my future work.may i ask your permission for a day off to attend this event?best wishes,jorvikfrom recent news we learn that the new dell training centre will host a seminar on presentation skills on friday.my clients all require me to do a presentation f

3、or our products before we can sign the contract.would you allow me to ask one day off to attend it for better presentation skills?thank you in advance.part 2(184)report on recent developments in the market of sports goodsreport on recent and future developmentintroductionthis report aims to assess/a

4、ddress/stress cuirent and future situation in sports goods market.this report aims to assess our past data, and to suggest a new sales distribution for bada worldwide.findingsat present our greatest market is north america, where we scll/sold about 44% of our goods. it is followed by europe (26%)，so

5、uth america(19%), and asia/pacific(ll %).as can he seen in the chart(2002)y north america was our biggest market with 44% sales distribution followed by europe (26%)，south america(19°/o)y and asia/pacific(ll%)if we compare our results with competitors, we can see that in the 2002 we have become

6、 the second largest retailer with a turnover of $60 million，whereas in year 2001 we were in third place with $40 million. we are the only company which succeded in increasing its turnover in year 2002.compared with our competitors we have climbed from the third place in 2001 to the second in 2002 am

7、ong the four with a turnover of $60 million, a 50% growth. besides, we stood out for continuous development in 2002.howe*忙 our sales distribution is expected to chan乂匕 and wg are assigned to extend our sales n&work internationlg comparatively our sales in 2003 are predicted to grow respectively

8、(increase: asia/pacific-3°/oy europe-4% s.america-4%; decrease: n.america-11 % jconclusion &recommendationbased on the above analysis in order to build up our sales, we should consider extend/branch out in a/py s, &e, which is estimated to boost our turnover by 75% in year 2003.the deta

9、ils are as follows:1 to start 4 new stores in2 we need to activate 6 brand new stores3 3 extra stores are to be set upplease contact us whenever any concern occurs through email or phone.conclusionin order to continue this positive development, we have decided to change our present sales distributio

10、n in the year 2003. we intend to increase our turnover in europe by 4% with 6 new stores今 in asia/pacific by 3% with 4 new stores and in south america by 4% with 3 new stores.therefore ve will decrease our sales in north america，where the market is already saturated. all these changes should boost o

11、ur turnover by 15% in year 2003 and thus we might become the greatest retailer in the market.recommendation / suggestion / methodstest-3part 1to my dear jason,i need to be in london for at least three days next month business purpose.before my departure, would you please arrange the follows:1 a retu

12、rn ticket to london (from 12th to 15th), and business class of cathy pacific isprefeired.2 book a king-size single room with royal kings hotelthank you!jorvikpart 2(142)dear mrs. geddings，i write regardiiir a training course on health and safety which i attended 27 november.i am sorry to let you lea

13、rn that the training course i attended (27 nov) on health and safety was more them unpleasing to me.when i booked this course i chose your company as it came highly recommended and the courses seemed to be of a high standard. i was promised an experienced trainer but unfortunately he was sick and th

14、e replacement was not as good as (we) expected. regarding the information packs these were only a pile of loose photocopies- which was not promised. the class was supposed to be about 8 people but in mine there were about 15. finally，i should make it clear that the class started 1 hour later, and th

15、e lunch that was ser、ech was cold.the following factors might need you to study on for a better quality:1 the ads promised us the trainer is experienced 一 but, in fact, he was sick on that day，and the replacement trainer was below our expectation.2 we are assured a high-quality information packs，whi

16、ch turned out to be a pile of loose photocopiese3 the size of the class, as mentioned in the ads9 should be 8 people. however, i can see 14 people in my class.4 the lunch was a total disaster 一 most of us are served with red meat, yet at least 6 of us are vegetarians.5 btw< the replacement trainer came 20 minutes after due