高考作文---感謝信寫作(一)

1、高考作文-感謝信寫作感謝信是用于致謝他人的饋贈,款待 ,幫助 ,以及對慰問信和祝賀信的回復.感謝信要求感情真摯,措詞得體.閱讀范文,總結感謝信的寫作手法和句型:Version One:假如你是一名失學兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的 Mr. Brown的資助，可以重返校園。你給Mr. Brown 寫了一封信，內容如下：收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激；在老師的幫助下，學習有了很大的進步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵；決心更加努力學習，取得更大的進步；盼望見到 Mr. Brown ，希望他寄來一張照片。I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for

2、 the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might ha

3、ve left school and couldn t have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress. How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself? Thank yo

4、u again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours Sincerely,Li HuaVersion Two:Dear John,I am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your assistancein giving me first aid and taking me

5、 to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequencesmight have been much more serious . Now that I am home and on my own again, I feel extremely happy. Abundant thanks to you for your patience, expertise and genuine help. It was you who helped me believe in myself and the warmth of the society . I wo

6、uld never forget each word you said to me and the things you have done to me.Your help really means a lot to me and my family, and my true gratitude is beyond any words， thanks againAffectionately,Wang Fang感謝信的內容一般分為三個部分:1. 表達感謝之情并說明原因 .2. 細述并贊賞對方所給與的幫助 3. 再次闡述謝意并表達回報愿望.感謝信的時態(tài):感謝信的正文中的時態(tài)靈活多變.在提到對方曾經

7、給予的幫助時,應用 ;在提到對方的幫助所產生的實際效果時 ,可以使用 在涉及到現(xiàn)狀時,應用 ;在表達祝愿或希望時 ,應用 .感謝信常用句式:表達感謝之情并說明原因 :1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for2. I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for- -.3. With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for 4. I am writing this letter because I am

8、 indebted to you for5. I am obliged to you for 6. I owe you a great deal for細述并贊賞對方給與的幫助 :1. It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful of you to 2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit 3. It was your kind help that（強調句型）4. If it had not been for your（help/ gu

9、idance/ assistance）, I wouldn t have （won the prize. （虛擬語氣）5. But for / Without , I wouldn't have再次闡述謝意并表達回報愿望:1. Thanks again for your generous help.2. I appreciate it more than I can say.3. My true gratitude is beyond the word s description.4. I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not

10、know how to thank you enough for your help.5. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.6. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.7. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.8. Please have no hesitation in writing t

11、o me, should you want me to do something for you 9. Please do allow me to return your favor.感謝信模板:模板一：Dear （收信人）I am writing to express my sincere thanks for 感謝的原因（）.If it had not been for your assistance in （對方給你的具體幫助） ， Ifear that I would have been 沒有對方幫助時的后果（） 。Everyone agrees that it was you who

12、 （具體幫助的細節(jié)）. Again ， Iwould like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming模板二：Dear（攵信人），I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for（感 謝的原因）.I d like you to know how much your 附方的幫助）meant tome. I not only enjoyed 具體2田節(jié)）,but also （具體2田節(jié)）I

13、 repeat my thanks again for your（感謝原因）.Pleasegive my kind regards to your（可候對象）.Yours truly,Li Ming實戰(zhàn)練習：根據(jù)下列要求和提示，完成審題謀篇、遣詞造句、連句成篇等寫作過程。假設你是李華，你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協(xié)議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的 Sue Wood,不久前她返回美國任教，請 你根據(jù)寫作要點和要求給sue寫封電子郵件。寫作要點：1.對她表達感謝之意2. 介紹她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情；3希望了解她的近況。一、審題謀篇1 .確定文體：該篇要求寫 。2

14、.確定主體時態(tài)：主要以 時態(tài)為主。3 . 確定主體人稱：多米用 人稱。4 .內容要點：寒暄導入感激老師的教誨因為老師的幫助生活發(fā)生改變 老師離開后發(fā)生了很多事情列舉一二例子關心老師近況結束語。 二、遣詞造句1.詞匯準備：.欣賞感激 .多虧由于.贏得一等獎 (4).上周舉辦的運動會(5)極大的成功 (6).分享(7).附帶一些照片2.句式準備一句多譯(1) .我們很想念你，感激有你做我們的老師a. b. (2) .你不知道，多虧你的幫助我們白生活發(fā)生了多么大的變化 .a. b. (3) .自從你離開后發(fā)生了很多事a. b. (4) .你是我們想與之分享幸福的人。a. b. (5) .我想知道你是

15、否可以給我說說美國的生活，最好附上照片a. b. 實戰(zhàn)演練 :(感謝推薦)Supposeyou were recommended by Professor Liang to get further education in Sydney University last June and now you have been admitted by that university. Write a letter to Professor Liang to express your gratitude in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at

16、the end of your letter, using“ ZhangYing ” instead. You do not need to write the address.8感謝信的時態(tài)：感謝信的正文中的時態(tài)靈活多變.在提到對方曾經給予的幫助時，應用一般過去時；在提到對方的幫助所產生的實際效果時，可以使用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)；在涉及到現(xiàn)狀時，應用一般現(xiàn)在時；在表達祝愿或希望時，應用一般將來時.感謝信常用詞匯：感激 appreciate, grateful 表示感激 convey/ express ones appreciation/gratitude 難以言表 beyond words 禮貌 c

17、ourtesy 慷慨 generosity 好客 hospitality 及時的 timely實戰(zhàn)練習：1.確定文體：該篇要求寫 感謝信 。2 .確定主體時態(tài)：主要以一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在完成時時態(tài)為主。3 .確定主體人稱：多采用 第一第二 人稱。4 .內容要點：寒暄導入感激老師的教誨因為老師的幫助生活發(fā)生改變 老師離開后發(fā)生了很多事情列舉一二例子關心老師近況結束語。二、遣詞造句1 .詞匯：.欣賞 感激 appreciate be grateful for(2) .多虧 由于 owing to thanks to(3) .贏得一等獎win the first prize(4) .上周舉辦的運動會th

18、e sports meeting held last week(5) .極大的成功 a great success(6) .分享 share with (7) .附帶一些照片 attach some pictures2 .句式練習一句多譯(1) .我們很想念你，感激有你做我們的老師a. We all miss youand _appreciate you being our teacher.b. We all miss you and we are_ grateful that you wereour teacher.(2) .你不知道，多虧你的幫助我們的，活發(fā)生了多么大的變化a. Never

19、 will you know _how much our life has changed owing to your help.b. You don't know that how much our life has changed thanks to your help.(3) .自從你離開后發(fā)生了很多事a. A lot of things have taken place since you left.b. Since you left, a lot of things happened.(4) .你是我們想與之分享幸福的人。a. It's you that / who_

20、 we want to share happiness with_b. You are the very one who we want to share happiness with(5) .我想知道你是否可以給我說說美國的生活，最好附上照片a. I wonder if you can tell me something about it, better to attach some pictures.Dear Sue,I m Li Hua, one of your students in China. We all miss you and really appreciate you be

21、ing our teacher. Never will you know how much our life has changed owing to your help.A lot of things have happened since you left. Do you know that three of us have won the first place in the National English Competition for Primary School Students (NECPS)? There is another thing you perhaps want t

22、o know : the sports meeting held last week was a great success. Had you been here, you would have known how fast I ran. Its you that we want to share happiness with.How is your life in America? I wonder if you can tell me something about it, better to attach some pictures.Looking forward to your early re