學(xué)校和學(xué)校生活寫作課件

1、學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)1 1、能歸納學(xué)校生活內(nèi)容：如、能歸納學(xué)校生活內(nèi)容：如學(xué)科、老師、同學(xué)、建筑物、學(xué)科、老師、同學(xué)、建筑物、 學(xué)習(xí)、體育、文娛等；學(xué)習(xí)、體育、文娛等；2 2、能表達(dá)、能表達(dá)最喜愛(ài)的學(xué)科、老師及其理由最喜愛(ài)的學(xué)科、老師及其理由；3 3、能用間接引語(yǔ)表達(dá)、能用間接引語(yǔ)表達(dá)同學(xué)和老師對(duì)自己的評(píng)價(jià)同學(xué)和老師對(duì)自己的評(píng)價(jià)；4 4、能能表達(dá)、能能表達(dá)學(xué)校生活的豐富性、學(xué)習(xí)中存在的困難及解決困難的學(xué)校生活的豐富性、學(xué)習(xí)中存在的困難及解決困難的 方法方法5 5、寫作策略、寫作策略: : 列提綱和主題句列提綱和主題句WH questions about school lifeWhats your

2、favorite ?Whos your ?How long have you studied in this school?What do you usually do after school?Which class are you in?How often do you do sports?School LifeSchool is a place _ we can _.where1.study different subjects2. open up eyes to the outside world with the help of our teachers3. make friends

3、 with my classmates4. do different after-school activities5. learn and do many meaningful thingsA topic sentenceFor exampleIn the classroom we can _. On the playground In the libraryIn the dinning hall During the Art FestivalDuring the sports meetingIn the computer class In the singing competition C

4、olorful School Life!Which is your favorite place? Why?Topic sentenceOur school life is quite colorful.My favorite _ is _.Because _.subjectteacherclassmateafter-class activityIm good atI do well inColorful School Life!Topic sentenceI enjoy my subjects, my classmatesmy teachers and after-class activit

5、ies, Your own assessments!Your classmates assessments! Your teachers assessments!be hard workingbe lazycan do betterbe good atdo well inhave trouble learning practice more assessments(評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià))!1. I think that 2. My classmates said that 3. My teacher said that I think that I am hard working.My classmate

6、s said that I was lazy.My math teacher said I could do better.Topic sentenceWhat do my classmates and my teachers think of me?Lucys report cardwho assessmentsLucy be hard workingher best friendbe clever and helpfulher English teacherbe good at/do well inher math teachercan do betterher Chinese teach

7、erpractice more her science teacherhave trouble learningReported SpeechLucy thought that she was hard working.Her best friend said that she was clever and helpful.Problems in schoolI usually deal with my problems by _.I have trouble learning making friends getting on well with my classmates. Topic s

8、entence:However, I have some trouble in school. have a hard time doing sth.have difficulties doing sth.My School LifeSchool is a place where we can learn and do many meaningful things.Our school life is quite colorful.I enjoy my subjects, my classmatesmy teachers and after-class activities, What do

9、my classmates and my teachers think of me?However, I have some trouble in school. OutlineDetailsLets have a try!Title:Topic sentences:Ending:My colorful school life1. I get on well with my classmates and teachers. 2. I have learned many things from different subjects. They help me open up my eyes to

10、 the outside world. 3. There are also many after-activities in our school, I really enjoy my colorful school life, just as the saying goes, The school life is the source of students happiness.話題書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)與訓(xùn)練話題書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)與訓(xùn)練二、佳句欣賞與模仿二、佳句欣賞與模仿學(xué)校與學(xué)校生活學(xué)校與學(xué)校生活 1. I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7 when you

11、were just starting Grade 7 at this school. 【remember doing sth. 記得做過(guò)某事; remember to do sth. 記得要去做某事】我記得我在七年級(jí)的時(shí)候當(dāng)過(guò)一名志愿者。_2. She helped you to work out the answers yourself no matter how difficult they were.【no matter how difficult 無(wú)論多么困難】無(wú)論前方有多大困難，我都會(huì)努力學(xué)習(xí)。_3. I cant believe how fast the time went by!

12、 【how 引導(dǎo)的感嘆句】我無(wú)法想象我取得了這么大的進(jìn)步！_ I remember being a volunteer when I was in Grade 7. I work hard no matter how difficult it will be. I cant imagine how much progress I have made!4. Youll make mistakes along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up. 【the key to 的關(guān)鍵; give up

13、 放棄】成功的關(guān)鍵在于永不放棄。_語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)類語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)類 5. The more you read, the faster youll be. 【the + 比較級(jí)，the + 比較級(jí) 越越】我們練習(xí)得越多，我們就會(huì)越少犯錯(cuò)誤。_6. The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not understand her most of the time. 【so . that . 如此以至于】 Tom學(xué)習(xí)如此認(rèn)真，以至于每次都能取得好成績(jī)。_ Never giving up is the key to success. The more we practice,

14、the fewer mistakes well make. Tom studies so hard that he can get good grades every time.7. My pronunciation also improved by listening to the interesting conversations in English movies. 【by + 動(dòng)名詞 通過(guò)】 我認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的最佳方式是盡可能多地使用它。_8. I discovered that listening to something you are interested in is the se

15、cret to language learning. 【the secret to 的秘訣】努力學(xué)習(xí)是成功的秘訣。_9. Paul finds it difficult to learn English.【sb. finds it + adj. + to do sth. 某人發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事怎么樣】 Jenny發(fā)現(xiàn)提高她的閱讀速度有點(diǎn)難。_ I think the best way to learn English is by using it as much as possible. Working hard is the secret to success. Jenny finds it dif

16、ficult to improve her reading speed.三、寫作微技能三、寫作微技能請(qǐng)從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中給下面的文章選擇合適的主題句。A. I think school is a place where I can enjoy friendship.B. School is a place where I can meet lots of challenges.C. School is a place where I can not only get knowledge but also enjoy colorful activities.My School Life Wh

17、en I listen to the teachers in class, I feel I become knowledgeable. That makes me feel happy and excited. When I work out difficult problems, I can feel I am like a successful winner and become more confident. On the playground, I play sports with my friends and we are full of energy. Whats more, w

18、e can do other colorful activities, such as singing competition, school trips and so on. How wonderful my school life is!C【寫作微技能小貼士】主題句主題句是概括段落中心思想、反映作者寫作意圖的一個(gè)概括性的句子，是段落的核心所在。所以，寫好主題句是寫好一個(gè)段落的前提。主題句通常出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭或結(jié)尾。段首主題句開門見山，直接點(diǎn)明段落主題，有助于確定段落的主線，使各個(gè)發(fā)展句圍繞段落主題自然展開；段尾主題句具有結(jié)論作用，是對(duì)前面句子的歸納總結(jié)。寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 歸

19、納出你要寫的文章的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)。2. 提煉出一句能概括上述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的話。3. 主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，能吸引讀者。Topic: 學(xué)校與學(xué)校生活九年級(jí)的同學(xué)感到特別有壓力。請(qǐng)你以“How to Deal with Our Pressure in Study?”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英文短文，談?wù)勀闶窃趺刺幚硇@生活壓力的。寫作范例（一）【參考范文】 How to Deal with Our Pressure in Study? Pressure is a serious problem in school. It is believed that most students in our class

20、 are under too much pressure. Now let me tell you how to deal with the problem. I felt stressed out last term because my parents wanted me to be one of the top students in my class. I told them that too much pressure had made me not do well in my schoolwork. The more pressure I felt, the worse I wou

21、ld do. They understood me. So talking with parents is a great way. I often listen to music that is gentle and has great lyrics after class. A good rest between two classes can help me concentrate more on study. I think the best way to relax is by taking part in some outdoor activities, such as playi

22、ng basketball. I often do that with my classmates. That makes me energetic and healthy. To my joy, I have succeeded in getting over my pressure. Now I feel that study is becoming much easier and my grades are better and better. 文章開門見山，直接進(jìn)入主題。文章開門見山，直接進(jìn)入主題。文章的主體部分能緊扣主題，結(jié)尾與主題相呼應(yīng)。語(yǔ)言豐富，邏輯性強(qiáng)。【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥】為了提高學(xué)習(xí)

23、效率，交流學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，請(qǐng)你按下面表格中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇題為“Find Your Own Ways to Learn English”的短文，110詞左右，介紹一下你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)歷與體會(huì)。Topic: 語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)寫作范例（二）【參考范文】 Find Your Own Ways to Learn English As we all know, its very important to learn English well. And there are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own wa

24、ys. At first, I had many difficulties in learning English. For example, I dont know how to spell some English words, and I found it difficult to understand what people said when they were talking fast. Whats worse, another thing I found frustrating is that I often made mistakes in grammar and read v

25、ery slowly. However, I didnt give up and regarded these problems as challenges. Now with the help of my teacher and classmates, I have found some great ways to improve my English. First of all, I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind, which helps build up my vocabular

26、y. Besides, I often listen to English tapes and I can understand mostly what people talk about. Whats more, I often borrow English books from school library and read them after class. The more I read, the more knowledge I will get. Now I think that the most important thing to learn English well is t

27、o put your heart into it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English. Im sure where there is a will, there is a way.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥】 本文行文流暢，分析合理，有說(shuō)服力。在詞匯句式使用上，特別注意在相同詞義句義的表述上選擇不同的詞匯句型，體現(xiàn)了詞匯的豐富與句式表達(dá)的多樣性。文章最后以諺語(yǔ)收尾，手法新穎，能夠引發(fā)讀者的閱讀興趣。 Lets write!學(xué)校生活總是伴著快樂(lè)與煩惱。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)校生活總是伴著快樂(lè)與煩惱。請(qǐng)你以“My School Life”為題寫

28、一篇為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，與大家分享你詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，與大家分享你的快樂(lè)以及你處理問(wèn)題的方法。文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的真的快樂(lè)以及你處理問(wèn)題的方法。文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：share with, deal with Read carefully and make sure what we have to write!審審Dont forget what you write for!列列Make an outline to make sure what you want to say! 1. Begin with brief

29、 introduction to show what you write for. 2. Topic sentences for each paragraph.(1)(2)(3)(4)3. End with your wishes and show what you write for again in different expressions.步驟：First, secondly, besides, whats more, last but not the least, finally, also, and, 轉(zhuǎn)折： although, however, but , at the same

30、 time, on the one hand, on the other hand, 因果：because, so, as a result, 結(jié)果：so that 舉例： for example, such as, like.總結(jié)： in a word, in fact, as you can see, 其它：to my surprise, to be honest, Linking wordsso thatso thattoo toenough to not only but alsoboth and neither noreither orUseful expressionsIts +

31、adj. for sb. + to do sth.Find it + adj. + to do sthIts believed that Its a good way to Its our duty to so that + 句子so that + 句子實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)：參考范文實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)：參考范文My School Life I think my school life is really colorful and full of joy. There are many kinds of after-school activities in my school. I enjoy playing bas

32、ketball with my friends. Its not only good for me to keep healthy, but also I can make many friends. Besides, I join the music club. Singing is my favorite. I take part in the school music festival every day. I agree that problems and worries are normal in life. In my opinion, unless you face them b

33、ravely and try your best to deal with them, youll certainly feel worse. When I have problems, I sometimes talk with my parents. They have a lot more experience and they are always there to help me. If I have problems with my schoolwork, Ill ask my teachers for advice. （二）張濤是來(lái)自某中學(xué)的初三學(xué)生。他擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)科目，多次獲得英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽冠軍。周圍很多同學(xué)都向他請(qǐng)教如何才能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。假如你是張濤，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，寫一篇110詞左右的英語(yǔ)文章，從聽、