公開課如何在高考英語作文中增加細(xì)節(jié)實(shí)用教案

1、假定你是李華。上周日在地鐵站撿到了英國人Steven 的護(hù)照。請(qǐng)你用英語給你市某英文報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡述時(shí)間過程; 2.交代護(hù)照相關(guān)信息(xnx); 3.委托報(bào)社刊登招領(lǐng)啟事.注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。廣東(gung dng)一模書面表達(dá)第1頁/共19頁第一頁，共20頁。一個(gè)(y )問題主體信息寫完往往只有60-70個(gè)字，不足100詞，怎么(zn me)彌補(bǔ)詞數(shù)？ 需要“適當(dāng)(shdng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫”。第2頁/共19頁第二頁，共20頁。Dear editor, Im LiHua, a high school student in

2、our city. Im writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. Having lost the passport, he must be v

3、ery anxious, but I have no idea how to return it to him. So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua結(jié)果結(jié)果(j

4、i gu)交際交際(jioj)語語心理心理(xnl)感受感受具體化具體化同位語同位語原因原因第3頁/共19頁第三頁，共20頁。如何適當(dāng)(shdng)增加細(xì)節(jié)1.增加同位語2.補(bǔ)全前因后果或目的3.適當(dāng)將寫作內(nèi)容具體化4.寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)或后果5.補(bǔ)充(bchng)功能性（交際性）語言第4頁/共19頁第四頁，共20頁。What kind of information can often be added to your article?1 增加(zngji)同位語1 I am LiHua, _ (我們學(xué)校(xuxio)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席). / _(來自中國的一位交換生). 2. I want to

5、 have a pen friend, _ (希望是一位跟我有相同興趣的女孩). Chairman of the Students Union of my school.an exchange student from China.hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine.第5頁/共19頁第五頁，共20頁。2.補(bǔ)充補(bǔ)充(bchng)前因后果或目的前因后果或目的_(因?yàn)?yn wi)知道你對(duì)中國傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity. _(為了獲

6、得(hud)一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)) Im planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.(1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,(2)In order to get some practical experience,_ (由于我有過丟身份證的經(jīng)歷），I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.(3)Since I have the experience of losing my ID car

7、d,第6頁/共19頁第六頁，共20頁。（1) The activity will be held _(具體時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）(2 )I know the owner is Steven _ (相關(guān)(xinggun)身份信息) 3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _(具體存在問題 如錯(cuò)印、缺頁等)3.適當(dāng)(shdng)將寫作內(nèi)容具體化 from 9 a.m. to 10 a.m. on April 11 in Classroom 501.from England, aged 38, married.there were some misprin

8、ts and pages from 23-45 were missing.第7頁/共19頁第七頁，共20頁。4 增加(zngji)結(jié)果或者是效果(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas, _ (這必將有助于你學(xué)到更多的中國文化）(2)We can set out early, _(以便我們(w men)有更多的時(shí)間閱讀和挑選圖書） (3)There are quite a few missing pages,_(變得無法使用) so that we can have more time to read and selec

9、t books which will surely help you learn more about Chinese culture.making it impossible to use.第8頁/共19頁第八頁，共20頁。1_（如果你能幫我這個(gè)(zh ge)忙，我將不勝感激（2）_（期待著你的早日回復(fù)）5.補(bǔ)充(bchng)功能性（交際性）語言(3 )_(如果如果(rgu)有什么能幫到你的，請(qǐng)不要猶豫告有什么能幫到你的，請(qǐng)不要猶豫告訴我）訴我）I would greatly appreciate it if you could do me the favour.Looking forwar

10、d to your early reply.If there is anything I can do for you, please dont hesitate to let me know.第9頁/共19頁第九頁，共20頁。practice (add reasonable details）1.Im LiHua,_. (同位語) 2. Im writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,_. (具體來源等) 3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, _.（結(jié)果） 4 Last w

11、eek, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore _(目的/原因) 5_ (若你能考慮(kol)我的建議，我將不勝感激).第10頁/共19頁第十頁，共20頁。假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫封回信(hu xn)。 要點(diǎn)：1、參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班。 2、看中文書刊、電視。 3、學(xué)唱中文歌曲。 4、交中國朋友。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3. 開頭語已為你寫好.Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your l

12、etter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.第11頁/共19頁第十一頁，共20頁。 Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese s

13、ongs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. 第12頁/共19頁第十二頁，共20頁。 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and pr

14、actice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can al

15、so make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes Li Hua第13頁/共19頁第十三頁，共20頁。(2016(2016全國課標(biāo)卷) )假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡歷（resumeresume）。給外教Ms JenkinsMs Jenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她修改所附材料的文字和格式（formatformat）。注意：1. 1.

16、詞數(shù)100100左右；2. 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文(xngwn)(xngwn)連貫。第14頁/共19頁第十四頁，共20頁。 Im your student Li Hua. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation. Could you correct the language and the format of the application letter and resume I have written?They are in the atta

17、chment.第15頁/共19頁第十五頁，共20頁。 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also help

18、s to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. T