看圖作文中的圖片描寫--王吉

1、看圖作文看圖作文中中的的圖片描寫圖片描寫Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考題）1. 簡要描述下列圖片內(nèi)容2. 結(jié)合生活實際 談?wù)勛砸训目捶?. 字數(shù)不少于100字Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the _ .ii) Relate the _ to a certain _iii) Present your _ picturepictureph

2、enomenonopinion簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，就圖片主題談?wù)勛约焊邢?。簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，就圖片主題談?wù)勛约焊邢?。Useful skills to describe a pictureUseful skills to describe a picture1.在圖中，在圖中，2.正如我們在圖正如我們在圖片中所能看到的，片中所能看到的，3.正如圖片所示，正如圖片所示，As we can see in the picture, As is vividly shown in the picture, In the picture,Describe Picture 1 according to the

3、following questions.1. Is there any person that is immediately noticeable in the picture?2. What is the probable relationship between the girl and people around her?3. What are the people around the girl doing?4. How do the people around the girl look like?5. What can be learnt from the picture?Answ

4、er for reference: We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parents and grandparents around her are running with worried looks, sweating. By holding the bicycle, the girls families are trying their best to protect the child, for fear that she should fall and hurt her

5、self. A more detailed version: In the picture, a girl is learning to ride a bicycle. Beside her, her parents and grandma are running with worried looks, sweating. To her left is her father, who is telling her how to ride while to her right is her mother supporting the bike with a first-aid case on h

6、er shoulder. Behind the bike, her grandma is following her closely. By holding the bicycle tightly, the girls families are trying their best to protect her from falling and hurting. Group discussion: Which version is better? The first version or the detailed version? Why?Conclusion: Essentials of De

7、scriptive Writing1. Know your purpose2. Focus on a dominant idea 3. Base your description on observationDescribe Picture 2 according to the following questions.1. Is there any person that is immediately noticeable in the picture?2. What is the probable relationship?3. What are the people doing?4. Ho

8、w do the people look like?5. What can be learnt from the picture?Answer for reference: The picture shows a boy with a spread pair of wings, and a couple of parents with a huge pair of scissors, going to operate on their childs beautiful wings. What we can see in the parents eyes is expectation, in s

9、harp contrast with the sadness in the boys.Practice WritingWrite a clear beginning of a composition, Write a clear beginning of a composition, following the 3 steps.following the 3 steps.picturephenomenonopinionbrieflyreasonablyclearlyUseful skills to introduce a phenomenon4. 當談到當談到時時5. 是很普遍的是很普遍的6.

10、 最近最近現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象引起引起了廣泛的關(guān)注了廣泛的關(guān)注When it comes toIts common thatRecently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that Useful skills to present your opinion7. 就我而言就我而言8. 我認為我認為9. 我的理由如下我的理由如下In my opinion/In my view/As far as Im concerned / From my point of viewI hold the view/opinion thatMy opinion is thatI

11、 think/believe/consider thatMy reasons are listed as follows.The following are my reasons.Q1. What do you see in the picture?Q2. What phenomenon do you think of in real life after seeing the picture?Q3. Whats your opinion on this phenomenon?PracticePracticePair work: Read your partners draft and the

12、n finish the checklist.Checklistp Does he/she include enough sensory?p Are the details relevant to the topic?p Do he/she use the proper order to organize the details?p Do his/her sentences flow smoothly?p Does he/she use figures of speech or varied sentence patterns?p Are there any mistakes in spell

13、ing, grammar or punctuation? If so, please underline and correct them.Assignment: Revise your first draft according to the checklist.reference versionreference version As is vividly revealed in the cartoon picture, the boy is tied up with so many belts of extra classes that he feels tired and depressed. Recently the phenomenon h