2010-2014短文改錯全國卷

1、2010It was a chanee of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writi ng was.So if they had said was true, I would have a cha nee of winning the p rize.What were better, I had useful

2、 hel p. There was Un cle Chen, gen tlema n livi ngnearmy house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to read ing my story and giveme some advices on how to write like a real writer.Christie was one of my best frie nd at high school.At that time, we ofte n spend time together. Thank to her he

3、lp, I made great progress in mystudy. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be sep arated for long time Before her leav ing off, I prep ared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From the n on, we kept toucivwith each other t

4、hrough e-mails. I look forward to see her aga in in the n ear future.2011My summer travel started terriblywas at the Shan ghai Railway Stati on buy a ticket to Han gzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiame n for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned aro und t

5、o p ick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that some one had stole n it.Luckily I had all my money on my p ocket, but the on ly clothes I had was those I had on .It felt very stra nge to travel without any luggages.Whe n I fin ally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel

6、 veryTel : 0371 68888095/68888905happy that I could cha nge my clothes at last.Add :隴海路與淮北街交叉口佳和家居院內(nèi).九思樓Dear GeorgeIt s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for show ing them around your city and pro vidi ng us for the won derful meals.After we said goo

7、dbye to you, we went to Washington D. C., where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay ing ano ther couple of day. However, my father had to retur n to work on Mon day sowe fly back last Saturday after noon .It was really a nice e

8、xp erie nceIf you d like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better tha n happy to be your guide.Yours,2012I lear ned early in life that I had to be more p atie nt and little aggressive. From the timeI was about four un til I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy whe n the

9、toys worked, but whe n thi ngs did wron g, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they bega n to see which was happening. Whe n I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That s it. No more toys to you.My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile,

10、 I found out that with more patienee I must make my toys to last. My attitude cha nged from the n on.Dear Editor,I m writi ng t(bell you opin io n about water sav ing. Water is important. We, as wellAdd :隴海路與淮北街交叉口佳和家居院內(nèi)九思樓2Tel : 0371 68888095/68888905as animal, cannot live without water and neither

11、 agriculture or industry can go without it. Y et it seemed water is beco ming less and less. Many coun tries in the world find we don t have eno ugh water.To deal with a p roblem, I thi nk, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will hel p save water. Next, no drinking water should b

12、e left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washi ng, esp ecially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Si ncerely,2013I hardly remember my gran dmother. She used to holdi ng me on her kn ees and sing old son gs. I was only four whe n she p ass

13、es away. She is just a dista nt memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and abeard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a dee p voice, which set himself apart from others in our small tow n, he was str ong and po werful. I n a fact

14、, he eve n scared my classmates away duri ng they came over to p lay or do homework with me.However, he was the gen tlest man I have n ever known.The book I m read ing of talks about after noon tea in Brita in .It is said to have started in the early 1800 s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a

15、 bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o clockat night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷Add :隴海路與淮北街交叉口佳和家居院內(nèi)九思樓3Tel : 0371 68888095/68888905器）in dustry. Tea in Chi na was traditi on ally drank from

16、cups without han dies. Whe n tea got popu lar in Brita in, there was a crying n eed for good cup with han dies to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the p orcela in in dustry.2013Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I plan tedSome cherry tomatoes圣女果）in

17、 our back garde n. Since the n- for all these years-we had bee n allowi ng tomatoes to self-seed where they p lease. As result, the p la nts are grow ing somewhere. The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste. There are so much that we ofte n share them with our n eighbors. Although we allow to

18、mato plan ts to grow in the same p lace year after year, but we have n ever had any disease or in sect attack pr oblems. We are grow ing won derfully tomatoes at no cost!My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three less ons in the morni ng and two in the after noon. We did n need to do so many homework.Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do readi ng for one and a half hour and p lay sp orts for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garde n. There