英語基礎(chǔ)寫作 分解-重組句子 野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)假設(shè)你是王明，本周是你們學(xué)?！碍h(huán)境保護(hù)宣傳周”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示的要點(diǎn)，為宣傳欄寫引言，介紹保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物的必要性。寫作內(nèi)容1動(dòng)物是人類親密的朋友，尤其是珍稀動(dòng)物的存在使整個(gè)世界變得豐富多彩；2最近聽到甚至動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人為傷害，深表震驚。事件的發(fā)生源于有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠及對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心；3牢記保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物是我們每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，我們應(yīng)采取積極、有效的措施。寫作要求1請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2第一句已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。Animals are our friends._

2、 人稱： 第一人稱，we 時(shí)態(tài)： 整體用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，個(gè)別用具體時(shí)態(tài)。尤其是尤其是珍稀動(dòng)物珍稀動(dòng)物的存在的存在使使整個(gè)整個(gè)世界世界變得變得豐富多彩豐富多彩簡化：珍稀動(dòng)物使世界豐富多彩。簡化：珍稀動(dòng)物使世界豐富多彩。 句一： rare animals make the world colorful. Animals, especially the rare ones are making the world more colorful and so more beautiful. Without animals, especially the rare ones, the world would

3、not be as beautiful as it is now. 最近聽到甚至動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人最近聽到甚至動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人為傷害，深表震驚。事件的發(fā)生源于有些人為傷害，深表震驚。事件的發(fā)生源于有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠及對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠及對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。理解簡化：1.最近，我們聽到一個(gè)消息。最近，我們聽到一個(gè)消息。2. 動(dòng)物，甚至是動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到動(dòng)物，甚至是動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人為傷害。人為傷害。3. 我們深表震驚。我們深表震驚。 1 . Recently, we have heard a piece of news. 2. Animals,

4、 even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 3 . We are very shocked. 1 . Recently, we have heard a piece of news. 2. Animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 3 . We are very shocked. 三句簡單句合并成一句復(fù)合句： 句二：Recently, we have heard that, animals, even thos

5、e rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings, at which we are very shocked. 1.最近，我們聽到一個(gè)消息。最近，我們聽到一個(gè)消息。2. 動(dòng)物，甚至是動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭動(dòng)物，甚至是動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人為傷害。到人為傷害。3. 我們深表震驚。我們深表震驚。 一三句合并：一三句合并： 句二：句二：Recently, we have been shocked to hear the news that animals, even those in the zoos, are hurt by human

6、beings. 句二：句二：Recently, we have heard a shocking news that animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings. 事件的發(fā)生源于有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠及對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。 簡化： 1.事情的發(fā)生是因?yàn)?2. 有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠 3.有些人對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。 1.事情的發(fā)生是因?yàn)?2. 有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠 3.有些人對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。 1. The reason (why such things happen) is that 2.Some

7、people lack awareness of animal protection. Some people dont know much about animal protection. 3. Some people are indifferent to animals Some people are not concerned about animals. Some people dont care about animals 合并：句三：The reason (why such things happen) is that some people lack awareness of a

8、nimal protection and theyare indifferent to / are not concerned about / dont careabout animals. 牢記保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物是我們每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，我們應(yīng)該采取積極、有效的措施。 理解簡化： 1.我們應(yīng)該牢牢記得 2. 保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物是我們每個(gè)人的職責(zé)。 3. 我們應(yīng)該采取積極、有效的措施（去保護(hù)動(dòng)物。） 1.we should keep in mind that/ well remember that 2. It is our responsibility/ duty to protect the animals.

9、 Protecting animals is our responsibility. 3. we should take active/positive and effective measures to protect them. Active/positive and effective should be taken to protect the animals. 1.we should keep in mind that/ well remember that 2. It is our responsibility/ duty to protect the animals. Prote

10、cting animals is our responsibility. 3. we should take active/positive and effective measures to protect them. Active/positive and effective measures should be taken to protect the animals. 合并： 句四：We should keep in mind that it is our responsibility to protect the animals. 句五：Active and effective me

11、asures should be taken to protect the animals. Without animals, especially the rare ones, the world would not be as beautiful as it is now. Unfortunately, recently, we have heard that, animals, even those rare animals in the zoos, are hurt by human beings, at which we are very shocked. The reason (w

12、hy such things happen) is that some people lack awareness of animal protection and they dont care about animals. Therefore, we should keep in mind that it is our responsibility to protect the animals. More importantly, active and effective measures should also be taken to protect the animals. Animals are our friends, especially/particularly the rare animals make our world more colorful. Recently I hear that the rare animals in the zoos were injure